tTalking about myself

I'm a Taiwanese college student, and I'm 19 years old.

For most countries, the adjective used to describe nationality is is different to the noun used to describe the country itself. So a person from Taiwan is called a Taiwanese person.

My eEnglish is soquite bad, so I want learn eEnglish here.

Languages/nationalities are proper nouns and are usually capitalised.

(I'm studying / I study) Industrial Engineering and Management in tTaiwan.

The "'m" in "I'm" is an abbreviation of "am" which means you have to use the continuous tense with it.

I have been to TSMC to interview for the position of "Occupational safety and health affair managers" ,", but in there you have to work overtime 3 times a week. It's horrible...

So I want to learn eEnglish well to dowork as a IE engineer.

Thank you everyone, good bye.

Commas have spaces after them in English.

tTalking about myself

I'm a Taiwanese college student, and I'm 19 years old.

My english is sovery bad, so I want learn eEnglish here.

I'm study Industrial Engineering and Management in tTaiwan.

I have been to TSMC to interview "Occupational safety and health affair managers" ,but in there I have to work overtime 3 times a week. It's horrible...

So I want to learn eEnglish well to do a IE engineerIE.

Thank you everyone, good bye.

tTalking about myself

I'm a Taiwanese college student, and I'm 19 years old.

My eEnglish is so bad, so I want learn eto practice English here.

I study (or 'I'm studying') Industrial Engineering and Management in tTaiwan.

I have bewent to TSMC to interview for "Occupational safety and health affairs managers" , but in thereI would have to work overtime 3 times a week. It's would be horrible...

So I want to learn eEnglish well to doand be an IE engineer.

Thank you everyone, good bye.

tTalking about myself

I'm a Taiwanese college student, and I'm 19 years old.

My english is so bad,so that's why I want learn english here.

I'm studying Industrial Engineering and Management in tTaiwan.

I have been to TSMC to interview as a "Occupational safety and health affair managers," ,but in there you would have to work overtime 3 times a week. It's horrible...

So I want to learn english well to do a IE in engineering.

Thank you everyone, good bye.

talk aboutIntroducing myself

I'm a Taiwan college student, and I'm 19 years old.

My eEnglish is sovery bad, so I want learn eEnglish here.

I'm study Industrial Engineering and Management in tTaiwan.

I have been to TSMC to interview "for an Occupational safety and health affair managers" , position but in there you have to work overtime 3 times a week. It's horrible...

So I want to learn eEnglish well to doto become an IE engineer.

Thank you everyone, good bye.

tTalking about myself

I'm a Taiwan college student from Taiwan ,and I'm 19 years old.

You could also say "I'm a Taiwanese college student... "

My eEnglish is so bad, so I want learn eEnglish here.

Languages are always capitalized.

I'm studying Industrial Engineering and Management in tTaiwan.

Countries are also always capitalized.

I have been to TSMC tofor an interview "to become an Occupational sSafety and hHealth aAffairs managers" ,but in ther, but one haves to work there overtime 3 times a week. It's horrible...

So, I want to learn eEnglish well to dobecome an IE engineer.

Thank you everyone, good bye.

I'm a Taiwan college student, in Taiwan, and I'm 19 years old.

My english is soreally bad, so I want learn english here.

It's not too bad! Good progress :)

I'm study Industrial Engineering and Management in tTaiwan.

I have been to TSMC to interview "Occupational sSafety and hHealth aAffair" managers" , but in thereI have to work overtime 3 times a week. It's horrible...

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So I want to learn english well to doso I can become an IE engineer.

What's an IE engineer? Sounds cool :)

Thank you everyone,good bye.s for reading and correcting!

Sounds more natural this way :)