July 26, 2022
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Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?
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B: What did you have for dinner?
A: I ate oden today.
B: What's that?ใ
A: Well, it's a kind of Japanese stew or nabe. It is a soup stock made from dried bonito flakes and kelp, flavored with soy sauce and other seasonings, and then simmered for a long time with various ingredients called tane. Ingredients include fried satsuma-age, hanpen, grilled chikuwa, tsumire, konnyaku, daikon radish, sweet potato, beef tendon, boiled egg, thick fried bean curd, and many others. I love this dish! I suggest you eat it when you come to Japan!
B: Yeah, I will!
What did you eat last night?
A: I got some potatoes from a senior at the place where I work, so I steamed them in the microwave and ate them!
B: Nice! Did you put butter on them?
A: Of course! Butter is a must. I also had stir-fried vegetables.
B: What vegetables?
A: Peppers, carrots, onions, cabbage!
B: Great! Health-conscious!
A: Well, yes!
B: But the nutritionist said that vegetables should be boiled so that the nutrients don't escape.
A: Yeah. But I'm childish taste. So I like they are well seasoned. Do you like the taste of vegetables as they are?
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I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!
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I want to speak like a native speaker!!
Seriously!!๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐ฅ๐ฅ
Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!
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Also, I'd like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โ๏ธ
B: What did you have for dinner?
A: I ate oden today.
B: What's that?
A: Well, it's a kind of Japanese stew or nabe.
It is a soup stock made from dried bonito flakes and kelp, flavored with soy sauce and other seasonings, and then simmered for a long time with various ingredients called tane.
Ingredients include fried satsuma-age, hanpen, grilled chikuwa, tsumire, konnyaku, daikon radish, sweet potato, beef tendon, boiled egg, thick fried bean curd, and many other things.
I love this dish!
I suggest you eatYou should try it when you come to Japan!
This sounds more natural in the US.
B: Yeah, I will!
What did you eat last night?
A: I got some potatoes from a senior at the place where I workcoworker, so I steamed them in the microwave and ate them!
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This sounds more natural in the US.
B: Nice!
Did you put butter on them?
A: Of course!
Butter is a must.
I also had stir-fried vegetables.
B: What kind of vegetables?
This sounds more natural in the US.
A: Peppers, carrots, onions, and cabbage!
B: GreatSounds yummy!
This is US slang.
Health-consciousy, too!
A: Well, yesYup!
US alternative
B: But the nutritionist said that vegetables should be boiled so that the nutrients don't escape.
A: Yeah.
But I'm childish taste like to eat like a kid.
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But I like to eat like a little kid.
So I like they are wellm seasoned well.
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So I like them well seasoned.
Do you like the taste of raw vegetables as they are?
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July 28, 2022
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Talk about meals 3
I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!
๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ
I want to speak like a native speaker!!
Seriously!!๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐ฅ๐ฅ
Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!
๐
Also, I'dI'd also like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to receive/see/hear your constructive criticism.โ๏ธ
B: What did you have for dinner?
A: I ate oden today.
B: What's that?
A: Well, it's a kind of Japanese stew or nabe.
It is a soup stock made from dried bonito flakes and kelp, flavored with soy sauce and other seasonings, (and) then simmered for a long time with various ingredients, one being called tane.
I don't know if "tane" is one ingredient or several different things combined together but if it's only one of the things that is simmered for a long time then it would be better to say that it is only one of them.
ISome of the ingredients include fried satsuma-age, hanpen, grilled chikuwa, tsumire, konnyaku, daikon radish, sweet potato, beef tendon, boiled egg, and thick fried bean curd, and many others.
I love this dish!
I suggest you eat it when you come to Japan!
B: Yeah, I will!
What did you eat last night?
A: I got some potatoes from a senior at the place where I work, so I steamed them in the microwave and ate them!
B: Nice!
Did you put butter on them?
A: Of course!
Butter is a must.
I also had stir-fried vegetables.
B: Whatich vegetables?
A: Peppers, carrots, onions, cabbage!
B: Great!
Personally, I feel it would be better to say "Nice!" but what you said is corrected and this is just my personal preference!
HVery health-conscious!
I feel just saying "health-conscious" is strange and that adding "very" would maybe sound more natural
A: Well, yes!
B: But the nutritionist said that vegetables should be boiled so that the nutrientvitamins don't escape.
A: Yeah.
But I'm have a childish taste.
So I like they arem well seasoned.
Do you like the taste of vegetables as they are?
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July 28, 2022
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