July 26, 2022
Opinion about manga
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Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! ๐
Also, I'd like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โ๏ธ
I just read Sayonara Eri.
The themes of book are about "bondage" and "liberation," and the story is about a mother who is ill, and the main character takes a video of his mother as a memory for various reasons, but the story changes again and again as it unfolds.
I liked the twists in the story, but it was a bit predictable.I especially liked the atmosphere at the end. For example, The scene where the main character leaves her and the scene the main character walks away alone. I mixed feelings. Part of me felt sad and part of me felt content. I felt a sort of ...melancholy ? I can't explain it, but I'm moved. ๐ฅฒIt's free for about 30 days or so, so try it.
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I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!
๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ
I want to speak like a native speaker!!
Seriously!!๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐ฅ๐ฅ
Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!
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Also, I'd like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โ๏ธ
I just read _Sayonara Eri_.
We underline titles of books. I know we can't do that here but I thought you should know.
The themes of the book are about "bondage" and "liberation," and the story is about a mother who is ill, and her son, the main character, who takes a videos of his mother as a memoryer for various reasons, but the story changes again and again as it unfolds.
This is a very complicated sentence and you almost nailed it! Good job!
I liked the twists in the story, but it was a bit predictable. I especially liked the atmosphere at the end.
For example, Tthere's a scene where the main character leaves her and the scene the main character walks away alone.
I have mixed feelings.
Part of me felt sad and part of me felt content.
I felt a sort of ...melancholy ?
I can't explain it, but I'm moved.
๐ฅฒIt's free for about 30 days or so, so try it.
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July 28, 2022
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The themes of this book are about "bondage" and "liberation," and the story is about a mother who is ill, and the main character takes avarious videos of his mother as a memory for various reasons, but the story changes again and again as it unfolds.
I had mixed feelings.
I can't explain it, but I'm moved.
Are you happy about it or sad ? Melancholy can be used this was depending on what your trying to say.
July 28, 2022
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Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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You can change whatever you want! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It's alright if you change an entire sentence!! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Also, I'd like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โ๏ธ This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I just read Sayonara Eri. I just read _Sayonara Eri_. We underline titles of books. I know we can't do that here but I thought you should know. |
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The themes of book are about "bondage" and "liberation," and the story is about a mother who is ill, and the main character takes a video of his mother as a memory for various reasons, but the story changes again and again as it unfolds. The themes of this book are about "bondage" and "liberation," and the story is about a mother who is ill, and the main character takes The themes of the book are about "bondage" and "liberation," and the story is about a mother who is ill This is a very complicated sentence and you almost nailed it! Good job! |
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I liked the twists in the story, but it was a bit predictable.I especially liked the atmosphere at the end. I liked the twists in the story, but it was a bit predictable. I especially liked the atmosphere at the end. |
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For example, The scene where the main character leaves her and the scene the main character walks away alone. For example, |
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I mixed feelings. I had mixed feelings. I have mixed feelings. |
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Part of me felt sad and part of me felt content. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I felt a sort of ...melancholy ? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I can't explain it, but I'm moved. I can't explain it, but I'm moved. Are you happy about it or sad ? Melancholy can be used this was depending on what your trying to say. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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๐ฅฒIt's free for about 30 days or so, so try it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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