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July 26, 2022

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Talk about manga

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ
I want to speak like a native speaker!! Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! ๐Ÿ™
Also, I'd like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ


A: What's your favorite manga?
B: Fullmetal Alchemist
A: I like it too! But I read it when I was in about Jr high school, so I wonder if I remember it correctly. Who's your favorite character?
B: Hmmm, Greed, I guess.
A: Oh, shit. What kind of guy was he? LOL.
B: No way!
A: Hold on, give me 10 seconds. Remind me.
B: Okay.
A: Ahh, okay, okay. The one that turns black, huh.
B: Yeah, yeah, lol.
A: The one where King Bradley beat you up, right?
B: Yeah, yeah, lol.
A: I loved that scene. Why's that character your favorite?
B: Well, his way of life? LOL.ใ€€
A: Oh, I get the feeling that I kinda feel ya. But what was that why did he fuse into that Asian-looking guy?

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Talking about mManga

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!

๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ

I want to speak like a native speaker!!

Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?

You can change whatever you want!

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!

๐Ÿ™

Also, I'd like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.

I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ

A: What's your favorite manga?

B: Fullmetal Alchemist

A: I like it, too!

But I read it when I was in about Jr high school, so I wonder if I remember it correctly.

Who's your favorite character?

B: Hmmm, Greed, I guess.

A: Oh, shit.

What kind of guy was he?

LOL.

B: No way!

A: Hold on, give me 10 seconds.

Remind me.

B: Okay.

A: Ahh, okay, okay.

The one that turns black, huh.

B: Yeah, yeah, lol.

A: The one where King Bradley beat youhim up, right?

B: Yeah, yeah, lol.

A: I loved that scene.

Why's that character your favorite?

B: Well, his way of life?

LOL.

A: Oh, I get the feeling thatyeah, I kinda feel ya.

But what was that w? Why did he fuse into that Asian-looking guy?

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sho

July 28, 2022

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Talk about manga


Talking about mManga

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!


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๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I want to speak like a native speaker!!


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Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

You can change whatever you want!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Also, I'd like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

A: What's your favorite manga?


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B: Fullmetal Alchemist


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A: I like it too!


A: I like it, too!

But I read it when I was in about Jr high school, so I wonder if I remember it correctly.


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Who's your favorite character?


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B: Hmmm, Greed, I guess.


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A: Oh, shit.


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What kind of guy was he?


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LOL.


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B: No way!


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A: Hold on, give me 10 seconds.


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Remind me.


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B: Okay.


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A: Ahh, okay, okay.


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The one that turns black, huh.


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B: Yeah, yeah, lol.


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A: The one where King Bradley beat you up, right?


A: The one where King Bradley beat youhim up, right?

B: Yeah, yeah, lol.


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A: I loved that scene.


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Why's that character your favorite?


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B: Well, his way of life?


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LOL.


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A: Oh, I get the feeling that I kinda feel ya.


A: Oh, I get the feeling thatyeah, I kinda feel ya.

But what was that why did he fuse into that Asian-looking guy?


But what was that w? Why did he fuse into that Asian-looking guy?

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