July 26, 2022
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Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! ๐
Also, I'd like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โ๏ธ
A: Do you know "Kingdom"?
B: No.
A: This!
B: I've never seen or heard of that.
A: Yeah, I know. haha. A work that is extremely popular in Japan, but it's rare to find someone overseas that has heard of it. Give it a read when you have the time! You may not like the pictures at first, but after reading about 10 volumes, it just grabs your heart... Maybe.๐
But I wouldn't really recommend the anime. I think it's still good after season3, but 1 and 2 are not good at all. The movements are kind of weird. The pictures are not cool, either. I think the original are ruined.๐คฆ
B: What's it about?
A: It's the story about in called the Spring and Autumn and Warring States Period of China. It is a story about a boy named Shin, a war orphan with no relatives who aspires to become a great general, and a boy named Eisei, who later becomes the first Qin Emperor, who meet each other by fate and survive the warring times to achieve their dreams.
B: Sounds interesting!
A: Very interesting and awesome! It's a historical work, so to a certain extent, you already know what's going to happen. That is why the author has already depicted the main character becoming a general at the very beginning of the manga. But even if you read the manga knowing what happens after that, it's still sustaining interest. There are many deeply moving and heartfelt exciting developments. But I don't know why, but it's only popular in Japan. I can understand if they think it's not for them after reading it, but I don't understand people who think they are not interested in it before reading it. Deciding based on impressions is, y'know, like, discrimination.
B: Omg, haha. Say that much?
A: Yeah, it's like assuming someone isn't interesting without even talking to them. I think you should at least read the manga at least once, not just based on your impression of it. I guess that's how the seeds of discrimination grow. So, you must see and hear everything with your own eyes and ears, and have your own opinion after confirming it. This is important. So reading this manga is the first step toward eliminating discrimination. Seriously.
talk about mangaManga Talk
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Talking about Manga
I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!
๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ
I want to speak like a native speaker!!
Seriously!!๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐ฅ๐ฅ
Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!
๐
Also, I'd like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โ๏ธ
A: Do you know "Kingdom"?
B: No.
A: This!
B: I've never seen or heard of that.
A: Yeah, I know.
haha.
A work thatIt's a series which is extremely popular in Japan, but it's rare to find someone from overseas thatwho has heard of it.
Give it a read Try reading it when you have the time!
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You may not like the pictures at first, but after reading about 10 volumes, ityou just grabs your heartet hooked ... Mmaybe.๐
This is more commonly said in the US.
But I wouldn't really recommend the anime.
I think it's stillthey're good after season 3, but 1 and 2 are not good at allpretty bad.
This is US slang.
The movements are kind of weird.
The pictures are non't cool, either.
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I think the original are ruinedy ruined the original.๐คฆ
B: What's it about?
A: It's thea story about in calledtwo eras in China: the Spring and Autumn andPeriod and the Warring States Period of China.
It is a story aboutThe story has two main characters. One is a boy named Shin, a war orphan with no relatives who aspires to become a great general, and the other is a boy named Eisei, who later becomes the first Qin Emperor, who. They meet each other by fate and survive the warring times to achieve their dreams.
B: Sounds interesting!
A: Very interesting and awesome!
It's a historical work, so to a certain extent, you already know what's going to happen.
That i's why the author has already depicted the main character becoming a general at the very beginning of the manga.
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But even ifwhen you read the manga knowing what happens after that, it's still sustainingvery interesting.
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But even when you read the manga knowing what happens after that, it still sustains interest.
There are many deeply moving and heartfelt exciting developmoments.
But I don't know why, but it's only popular in Japan.
I can understand if they think it's not for them after reading it, but I don't understand people who think they a're not interested in it before reading it.
US alternative
Deciding based on impressions is, y'know, like, discrimination.
B: Omg, haha.
Say that muchFor real?
US slang
A: Yeah, it's like assuming someone isn't interesting without even talking to them.
I think you should at leasttry to read the manga at least once, and not just baignore it becaused onf your impressions of it.
I guess that's how the seeds of discrimination grow.
So, you mustshould see and hear everything with your own eyes and ears, and haveyourself and form your own opinion after confirmhecking something iout.
More US slang
This is important.
So reading this manga is the first step toward eliminating discrimination.
Seriously.
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A work that is extremely popular in Japan, but it's rare to find someone overseas that has heard of it.
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You may not like the pictures at first, but after reading about 10 volumes, it just grabs your heart... Maybe.๐ You may not like the pictures at first, but after reading about 10 volumes, This is more commonly said in the US. |
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But I wouldn't really recommend the anime. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I think it's still good after season3, but 1 and 2 are not good at all. I think This is US slang. |
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The movements are kind of weird. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The pictures are not cool, either. The pictures are US alternative |
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I think the original are ruined.๐คฆ I think the |
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A: It's the story about in called the Spring and Autumn and Warring States Period of China. A: It's |
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It is a story about a boy named Shin, a war orphan with no relatives who aspires to become a great general, and a boy named Eisei, who later becomes the first Qin Emperor, who meet each other by fate and survive the warring times to achieve their dreams.
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A: Very interesting and awesome! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It's a historical work, so to a certain extent, you already know what's going to happen. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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That is why the author has already depicted the main character becoming a general at the very beginning of the manga. That US alternative |
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But even if you read the manga knowing what happens after that, it's still sustaining interest. But even or But even when you read the manga knowing what happens after that, it still sustains interest. |
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There are many deeply moving and heartfelt exciting developments. There are many deeply moving and heartfelt |
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But I don't know why, but it's only popular in Japan. But I don't know why |
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I can understand if they think it's not for them after reading it, but I don't understand people who think they are not interested in it before reading it. I can understand if they think it's not for them after reading it, but I don't understand people who think they US alternative |
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Deciding based on impressions is, y'know, like, discrimination. Deciding |
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Say that much?
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A: Yeah, it's like assuming someone isn't interesting without even talking to them. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I think you should at least read the manga at least once, not just based on your impression of it. I think you should |
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I guess that's how the seeds of discrimination grow. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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So, you must see and hear everything with your own eyes and ears, and have your own opinion after confirming it. So, you More US slang |
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This is important. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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So reading this manga is the first step toward eliminating discrimination. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Seriously. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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