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July 26, 2022

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talk about manga

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ
I want to speak like a native speaker!! Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! ๐Ÿ™
Also, I'd like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ

A: Do you know "Kingdom"?
B: Yeah, I know.
A: Omg, really?! You're a rare pokรฉmon!
A work that is extremely popular in Japan, but it's rare to find someone overseas that has heard of it. But, how could you stop in the middle of the road?
In most cases, once you start, you can't stop. Like, heroin.
Anyways, how far have you gotten?

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talk about mangaManga Talk

This sounds more natural in the US.

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!

๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ

I want to speak like a native speaker!!

Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?

You can change whatever you want!

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!

๐Ÿ™

Also, I'd like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.

I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ

A: Do you know "Kingdom"?

B: Yeah, I know.

A: Omg, really?!

You're a rare pokรฉmon!

A workIt's a manga series that i's extremely popular in Japan, but it's rare to find someone from overseas thatwho has heard of it.

But, how couldan you stop in the middle of ithe road?

In most cases, once you start, you can't stop.

Like, heroin.

Both of these are okay.

Anyways, how far have you gotten?

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sho

July 27, 2022

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talk about manga

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!

๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ

I want to speak like a native speaker!!

Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?

You can change whatever you want!

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!

๐Ÿ™

Also, I'd like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.

I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ

A: Do you know "Kingdom"?

You could also say: Have you heard of "Kingdom"?

B: Yeah, I know it.

You could also say: "Yeah, I've heard of it" or "Yeah, I've read it".

You're a rare pokรฉmon!

Lol this made me laugh XD. I'd usually just say "that's rare!", but I like yours better.

A work that iIt's extremely popular in Japan, but it's rare to find someone overseas thatwho has heard of it.

If you wanted to use the word 'work', you would have to say: "It's a work that is extremely...", but it's more natural to hear "it's extremely..."

But, how could you stop in the middle of the road?

Yours makes sense, but ending with "middle" sounds more natural.
Another possible way is: "But why'd you stop in the middle?"

In most cases, once you start, you can't stop.

You can also say: "Usually, when someone starts it, they can't stop."

Like, heroin.

Anyways, how far have you gotten?

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sho

July 27, 2022

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Thank you so much!!!๐Ÿ˜Š

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This sounds more natural in the US.

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!


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๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ


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I want to speak like a native speaker!!


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Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ


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Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?


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You can change whatever you want!


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It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!


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I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!


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๐Ÿ™


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Also, I'd like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ


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A: Do you know "Kingdom"?


A: Do you know "Kingdom"?

You could also say: Have you heard of "Kingdom"?

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B: Yeah, I know.


B: Yeah, I know it.

You could also say: "Yeah, I've heard of it" or "Yeah, I've read it".

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A: Omg, really?!


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You're a rare pokรฉmon!


You're a rare pokรฉmon!

Lol this made me laugh XD. I'd usually just say "that's rare!", but I like yours better.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

A work that is extremely popular in Japan, but it's rare to find someone overseas that has heard of it.


A work that iIt's extremely popular in Japan, but it's rare to find someone overseas thatwho has heard of it.

If you wanted to use the word 'work', you would have to say: "It's a work that is extremely...", but it's more natural to hear "it's extremely..."

A workIt's a manga series that i's extremely popular in Japan, but it's rare to find someone from overseas thatwho has heard of it.

But, how could you stop in the middle of the road?


But, how could you stop in the middle of the road?

Yours makes sense, but ending with "middle" sounds more natural. Another possible way is: "But why'd you stop in the middle?"

But, how couldan you stop in the middle of ithe road?

In most cases, once you start, you can't stop.


In most cases, once you start, you can't stop.

You can also say: "Usually, when someone starts it, they can't stop."

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Like, heroin.


Like, heroin.

Like, heroin.

Both of these are okay.

Anyways, how far have you gotten?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Anyways, how far have you gotten?

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