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I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ
I want to speak like a native speaker!! Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! ๐Ÿ™
Also, I'd like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ




A: For breakfast on the 24th, I bought a curry-flavored paste to put on bread.
B: How was it?
A: meh. I don't think I'll buy it again.
The ordinary curry bread be sold everywhere in Japan is better.
B: I've had curry bread once and it was better than I thought. Curry and bread actually go well together.
A: Yeah, it's like eating naan with curry.
B: Yeah. What did you have for lunch?
A: I made and ate "่‚‰ใพใ‚“".
B: What's a "่‚‰ใพใ‚“"?
A: A pork bun
B: Oh, OK.
How did you make it?
A: I made the dough with a pankcake-mix, then I make a filling with pork and chives or something, put it inside, and steam it in a pan. That's all.
B: How did it turn out?
A: Well, I made the dough too thick and it became hard. But the taste was ok. I used pankcake-mix to make the crust, so it's a little sweet, so maybe kids'll like it better.
B: You like to cook?
A: Well, not really. lol
But sometimes I feel like cooking.
B: I kind of feel you, there are days that cooking is a good stress reliever.
A: Yeah, but it's hard to do it every day
B: That's why mothers are great!
A: Nowadays, there are more and more single fathers and househusbands and men who do housework, so a person who cooks every day is great.
B: Yeah, certainly.
What did you have for dinner?
A: I got dinner from a Japanese bento place called Hotto Motto.
B: What's bento?
A: Japanese lunch box.
B: Oh, OK! What kind of bento?
A: I think it was "Oyako-don".
B: What's that?
A: Chicken and egg over rice.
B: What does "oyako" mean?
A: It meas parents and children. The chicken is the parent and the egg is the child, that's why it's called "Oyako-don".
B: That sounds a bit cruel. lol
A: Yeah, I guess so, now that I think about it. We should really be grateful for the ingredients.
B: Yeah, you're right.
What did you eat for breakfast?
A: Granola.
B: Oh, there are a lot of people in the U.S. who eat granola. But American ones tend to be sweet.
A: I see. I think Japanese granola is moderately sweet. The sweetness of the fruit stands out.
B: I wanna try some Japanese ones.
A: I wanna try some American ones too.
B: Do you want to send it to each other?
Just for granola. haha
A: I wish there aren't shipping fee. lol
But I can send it if you really want to. lol
B: I think it's not necessary, that's a bit much. lol
A: OK. haha
B: What did you have for lunch?
A: I put chicken and beaten egg into "Shin ramen" and ate it.
B: Great, sounds delicious!
What did you have for dinner?
A: Yakitori.
B: What's "yakitori"?
A: "Yakitori" is a Japanese specialty where various parts of the chicken are skewered and charbroiled by the chef. They are usually served simply with only salt or dipped into teriyaki like sauces.
B: Ah, "Yakitori"!
It is also called "chicken skewers" or "chicken kebab" in other countries.
A: Oh, I didn't know that.
I'd like to try some "yakitori" from overseas.
How much does it cost?

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Talking about dishesFood 5

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!

๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ

I want to speak like a native speaker!!

Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?

You can change whatever you want!

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!

๐Ÿ™

Also, I'd like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.

I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ

A: For breakfast on the 24th, I bought a curry-flavored paste to put on bread.

B: How was it?

A: meh.

I don't think I'll buy it again.

The ordinary curry bread be sold everywhere in Japan is better.

B: I've had curry bread once and it was better than I thought.

Curry and bread actually go well together.

A: Yeah, it's like eating naan with curry.

B: Yeah.

What did you have for lunch?

A: I made and ate "่‚‰ใพใ‚“".

B: What's a "่‚‰ใพใ‚“"?

A: A pork bun

B: Oh, OK.

How did you make it?

A: I made the dough with a pankcake- mix, then I makde athe filling without of pork and chives or somethingand stuff, put it inside the dough, and steamed it in athe pan.

The previous sentence is in past tense so we should answer in past tense, too.

That's all.

B: How did it turn out?

A: Well, I made the dough too thick and it became hard.

But the taste was ok.

I used pankcake- mix to make the crust, so it's a little sweet, so maybe kids'll like it better.

Good job with "kids'll"!

B: You like to cook?

A: Well, not really.

lol

But sometimes I feel like cooking.

B: I kind of feel you, there are days thatwhen cooking is a good stress reliever.

A: Yeah, but it's hard to do it every day

B: That's why mothers are great!

A: Nowadays, there are more and more single fathers and househusbands and men who do housework, so a person who cooks every day is great.

B: Yeah, certainly.

What did you have for dinner?

A: I got dinner from a Japanese bento place called Hotto Motto.

B: What's bento?

A: Japanese lunch box.

B: Oh, OK!

What kind of bento?

A: I think it was "Oyako-don".

B: What's that?

A: Chicken and egg over rice.

B: What does "oyako" mean?

A: It means parents and children.

The chicken is the parent and the egg is the child, so that's why it's called "Oyako-don".

B: That sounds a bit cruel.

lol

A: Yeah, I guess so, now that I think about it.

We should really be grateful for the ingredients.

B: Yeah, you're right.

What did you eat for breakfast?

A: Granola.

B: Oh, there are a lot of people in the U.S. who eat granola.

But American ones tend to be sweet.

A: I see.

I think Japanese granola is moderately sweet.

The sweetness of the fruit stands out.

B: I wanna try some Japanese ones.

A: I wanna try some American ones, too.

B: Do you want to send it to each other?

Just for granola.

haha

A: I wish there aweren't any shipping fees.

lol

But I can send it if you really want ito.

lol

B: I think it's not necessarNah, it's okay, that's a bit much.

US slang

lol

A: OK. haha

B: What did you have for lunch?

A: I put chicken and beaten eggbeat an egg and put it and chicken into "Shin ramen" and ate it.

B: Great, sounds delicious!

What did you have for dinner?

A: Yakitori.

B: What's "yakitori"?

A: "Yakitori" is a Japanese specialty where various parts of thea chicken are skewered and charbroiled by thea chef.

They are usually served simply with only salt or dipped into teriyaki -like sauces.

B: Ah, "Yakitori"!

It is also called "chicken skewers" or "chicken kebab" in other countries.

A: Oh, I didn't know that.

I'd like to try some "yakitori" from overseas.

How much does it cost?

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Talking about dishesFood 5

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!


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๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ


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I want to speak like a native speaker!!


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Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

You can change whatever you want!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

๐Ÿ™


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Also, I'd like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

A: For breakfast on the 24th, I bought a curry-flavored paste to put on bread.


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B: How was it?


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A: meh.


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I don't think I'll buy it again.


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The ordinary curry bread be sold everywhere in Japan is better.


The ordinary curry bread be sold everywhere in Japan is better.

B: I've had curry bread once and it was better than I thought.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Curry and bread actually go well together.


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A: Yeah, it's like eating naan with curry.


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B: Yeah.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

What did you have for lunch?


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A: I made and ate "่‚‰ใพใ‚“".


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B: What's a "่‚‰ใพใ‚“"?


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A: A pork bun


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B: Oh, OK.


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How did you make it?


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A: I made the dough with a pankcake-mix, then I make a filling with pork and chives or something, put it inside, and steam it in a pan.


A: I made the dough with a pankcake- mix, then I makde athe filling without of pork and chives or somethingand stuff, put it inside the dough, and steamed it in athe pan.

The previous sentence is in past tense so we should answer in past tense, too.

That's all.


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B: How did it turn out?


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A: Well, I made the dough too thick and it became hard.


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But the taste was ok.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I used pankcake-mix to make the crust, so it's a little sweet, so maybe kids'll like it better.


I used pankcake- mix to make the crust, so it's a little sweet, so maybe kids'll like it better.

Good job with "kids'll"!

B: You like to cook?


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A: Well, not really.


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lol


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But sometimes I feel like cooking.


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B: I kind of feel you, there are days that cooking is a good stress reliever.


B: I kind of feel you, there are days thatwhen cooking is a good stress reliever.

A: Yeah, but it's hard to do it every day


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B: That's why mothers are great!


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A: Nowadays, there are more and more single fathers and househusbands and men who do housework, so a person who cooks every day is great.


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B: Yeah, certainly.


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What did you have for dinner?


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A: I got dinner from a Japanese bento place called Hotto Motto.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

B: What's bento?


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A: Japanese lunch box.


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B: Oh, OK!


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What kind of bento?


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A: I think it was "Oyako-don".


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B: What's that?


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A: Chicken and egg over rice.


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B: What does "oyako" mean?


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A: It meas parents and children.


A: It means parents and children.

The chicken is the parent and the egg is the child, that's why it's called "Oyako-don".


The chicken is the parent and the egg is the child, so that's why it's called "Oyako-don".

B: That sounds a bit cruel.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

lol


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A: Yeah, I guess so, now that I think about it.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

We should really be grateful for the ingredients.


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B: Yeah, you're right.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

What did you eat for breakfast?


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A: Granola.


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B: Oh, there are a lot of people in the U.S. who eat granola.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

But American ones tend to be sweet.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

A: I see.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I think Japanese granola is moderately sweet.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The sweetness of the fruit stands out.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

B: I wanna try some Japanese ones.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

A: I wanna try some American ones too.


A: I wanna try some American ones, too.

B: Do you want to send it to each other?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Just for granola.


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haha


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A: I wish there aren't shipping fee.


A: I wish there aweren't any shipping fees.

lol


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But I can send it if you really want to.


But I can send it if you really want ito.

lol


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B: I think it's not necessary, that's a bit much.


B: I think it's not necessarNah, it's okay, that's a bit much.

US slang

lol


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A: OK. haha


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B: What did you have for lunch?


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A: I put chicken and beaten egg into "Shin ramen" and ate it.


A: I put chicken and beaten eggbeat an egg and put it and chicken into "Shin ramen" and ate it.

B: Great, sounds delicious!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

What did you have for dinner?


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A: Yakitori.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

B: What's "yakitori"?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

A: "Yakitori" is a Japanese specialty where various parts of the chicken are skewered and charbroiled by the chef.


A: "Yakitori" is a Japanese specialty where various parts of thea chicken are skewered and charbroiled by thea chef.

They are usually served simply with only salt or dipped into teriyaki like sauces.


They are usually served simply with only salt or dipped into teriyaki -like sauces.

B: Ah, "Yakitori"!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It is also called "chicken skewers" or "chicken kebab" in other countries.


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A: Oh, I didn't know that.


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I'd like to try some "yakitori" from overseas.


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How much does it cost?


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