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I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ
I want to speak like a native speaker!! Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! ๐Ÿ™
Also, I'd like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ


B: Do you remember what you ate the morning before yesterday?
A: Chinjaoro-su
B: What's Chinjaoro-su?
A: Well.. How do I describe it...
Chinese-style stir-fry containing thinly sliced green peppers and meat.
B: In what ways in Chinese-style?
A: I guess the sauce is Chinese-style. lol
B: Oh, I wanna try it! What about for lunch?
A: I didn't eat lunch.
B: What about dinner then?
A: Yellowtail sashimi.
Have you ever eaten yellowtail sashimi?
B: No.
Is it good?
A: It's good!
B: Which is better, tuna or yellowtail?
A: Hmmm, I never thought about that. lol
I think I eat tuna more often.
There are many different kinds of tuna.
B: What do you mean?
A: When I want something light, I eat the akami (red meat), usually the chutoro (medium fatty tuna), and when I want something rich, I eat the otoro (fatty tuna).
B: I see. Is the yellowtail fatty?
A: Yeah, it's fatty. But to be honest, sashimi is the same if you put soy sauce on it. Soy sauce is the best. lol
B: No way lol. The fish will get mad at you.
A: You're right, I take it back. I'm sorry, fish. Well, have you ever had sashimi?
B: Yes, tuna and hamachi
A: Oh, you've also had hamachi !
Buri and hamachi are the same fish.ใ€€In Japan, we call this kind of fish "shusse-uo".
B: "Shusse-uo"?
A: "Shusse" means promotion, and the name of the fish changes as it grows. Just like a person's position in a company changes as he or she grows.
B: I see.
A: Like dolphins and whales, right?
B: Isn't this different from that?
Dolphins and whales are name based on their size rather than their growth periods.
A: Oh, that's right! They are different!
B: Yeah.
Anyway, what did you eat yesterday?
A: Pasta with meat sauce for breakfast, croissants for lunch, and soba stew, fried potatoes, and "้คƒๅญ" for dinner.
B: What's "้คƒๅญ"?
A: Dumplings
B: Ah, Gyoza! It's also called potstickers, but maybe only in America. Also, what's soba stew?
A: Well... as a dish, it's kind of hard to explain. I make my soba stew by adding chicken bouillon powder, bonito flakes, and soy sauce to hot water. After that, I put soba in the there and that's it. It takes only five minutes in my case. The same is true for everything; some people make it easy like me, and of course, some people stick to cooking traditionally. The way the broth is made varies depending on the region and family though.
B: Yeah, I know.
Anyways, you traveled to many countries yesterday, huh? lol
A: Yeah, I went to Italy, France, China, and then back to Japan. lol
Anyways, why did you ask me what I ate?
B: Remembering what you ate is good training for your brain. It said so on TV.
A: Ah, so you exercised my brain for me? Thank you. lol
Then I'll exercise your brain too.
What did you eat the day before yesterday?

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Talking about dishesFood 23

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!

๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ

I want to speak like a native speaker!!

Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?

You can change whatever you want!

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!

๐Ÿ™

Also, I'd like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.

I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ

B: Do you remember what you ate the morning before yesterday?

A: Chinjaoro-su

B: What's Chinjaoro-su?

A: Well.. How do I describe it...

Chinese-style stir-fry containing thinly sliced green peppers and meat.

B: In what ways inHow is that Chinese-style?

This sounds more natural in the US.

A: I guess the sauce is Chinese-style.

lol

B: Oh, I wanna try it!

What about'd you have for lunch?

This sounds more natural in the US.

A: I didn't eat lunch.

B: What about for dinner then?

This sounds more natural in the US.

A: Yellowtail sashimi.

Have you ever eaten yellowtail sashimi?

B: No.

Is it good?

A: It's good!

B: Which is better, tuna or yellowtail?

A: Hmmm, I neverhaven't thought about that.

This is okay, too.

lol

I think I eat tuna more often.

There are manylots of different kinds of tuna.

This is kind of slangy in the US.

B: What do you meanLike what kind?

This is okay, too.

A: When I want something light, I eat the akami (red meat), then usually the chutoro (medium fatty tuna), and when I want something rich, I eat the otoro (fatty tuna).

I wasn't sure what you were trying to say here so this is my best guess.

B: I see.

Is the yellowtail fatty?

A: Yeah, it's fatty.

But to be honest, sashimi is the same if you put soy sauce on it.

Soy sauce is the best.

lol

B: No way, lol.

The fish will get mad at you.

A: You're right, I take it back.

I'm sorry, fish.

Well, have you ever had sashimi?

B: Yesup, tuna and hamachi.

US slang

A: Oh, you've also had hamachi , too!

This is okay, too.

Buri and hamachi are the same fish.

In Japan, we call this kind of fish, "shusse-uo".

B: "Shusse-uo"?

A: "Shusse" means promotion, and the name of the fish changes as it grows.

Just like a person's position in a company changes as he or she growsmoves up.

This sounds more natural in the US.

B: I see.

A: Like dolphins and whales, right?

B: Isn't this different from that?

DThe names of dolphins and whales are name based on their size rather than their growth periods.

A: Oh, that's right!

They are different!

B: Yeah.

Anyway, what did you eat yesterday?

A: Pasta with meat sauce for breakfast, croissants for lunch, and soba stew, fried potatoes, and "้คƒๅญ" for dinner.

B: What's "้คƒๅญ"?

A: Dumplings

B: Ah, Ggyoza!

It'sThey're also called potstickers, but maybe only in America.

Also, what's soba stew?

A: Well... as a dish, it's kind of hard to explain.

I make my soba stew by adding chicken bouillon powder, bonito flakes, and soy sauce to hot water.

After that, I put soba in the thereadd the soba and that's it.

This sounds more natural in the US.

It takes only five minutes in my case.

The same is true for everything; some people make it easy like me, and of course, some people stick to cooking traditionally.

The way the broth is made varies depending on the region and family though.

B: Yeah, I know.

Anyways, you traveled to manya lot of countries yesterday, huh?

lol

A: Yeah, I went to Italy, France, China, and then back to Japan.

lol

Anyways, why did you ask me what I ate?

B: Remembering what you ate is good training for your brain.

It said so on TV.

A: Ah, so you exercised my brain for me?

Thank you.

lol

Then I'll exercise your brain, too.

What did you eat the day before yesterday?

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July 30, 2022

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Talk about dishes 23

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!

๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ

I want to speak like a native speaker!!

Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?

You can change whatever you want!

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!

๐Ÿ™

Also, I'd like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.

I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ

B: Do you remember what you ate the morning before yesterdayfor breakfast two mornings (two days) ago?

Your sentence is fine, but I think that I would probably say it the way I corrected it here.

A: Chinjaoro-su.

B: What's Chinjaoro-su?

A: Well.. How do I describe it...

It's a Chinese-style stir-fry containing thinly sliced green peppers and meat.

B: In what ways ins it Chinese-style?

A: I guess the sauce is Chinese-style.

B: Oh, I wanna try it!

What about for lunch?

A: I didn't eat lunch.

B: What about dinner then?

A: Yellowtail sashimi.

Have you ever eaten yellowtail sashimi?

B: No.

Is it good?

A: It's good!

B: Which is better, tuna or yellowtail?

A: Hmmm, I never thought about that.

lol

I think I eat tuna more often.

There are many different kinds of tuna.

B: What do you mean?

A: When I want something light, I eat the akami (red meat), usually the chutoro (medium fatty tuna), and when I want something rich, I eat the otoro (fatty tuna).

B: I see.

Is the yellowtail fatty?

A: Yeah, it's fatty.

But to be honest, sashimi is the same if you put soy sauce on it.

Soy sauce is the best.

lol

B: No way lol.

The fish will get mad at you.

A: You're right, I take it back.

I'm sorry, fish.

Well, have you ever had sashimi?

B: Yes, tuna and hamachi.

A: Oh, you've also had hamachi !

Buri and hamachi are the same fish.

In Japan, we call this kind of fish "shusse-uo".

B: "Shusse-uo"?

A: "Shusse" means "promotion", and the name of the fish changes as it grows, just like a person's position in a company changes as he or she grows.

Just like a person's position in a company changes as he or she grows.

B: I see.

A: Like dolphins and whales, right?

B: Isn't this different from that?

Dolphins and whales are named based on their size rather than their growth periods.

A: Oh, that's right!

They are different!

B: Yeah.

Anyway, what did you eat yesterday?

A: Pasta with meat sauce for breakfast, croissants for lunch, and soba stew, fried potatoes, and "้คƒๅญ" for dinner.

B: What's "้คƒๅญ"?

A: Dumplings.

B: Ah, Ggyoza!

It'sThey're also called potstickers, but maybe only in America.

Also, what's soba stew?

A: Well... as a dish, it's kind of hard to explain.

I make my soba stew by adding chicken bouillon powder, bonito flakes, and soy sauce to hot water.

After that, I put soba in the there, and that's it.

It takes only five minutes in my case.

The same is true for everything; some people make it easy like me, and of course, some people stick to cooking traditionally.

The way the broth is made varies depending on the region and family though.

B: Yeah, I know.

Anyways, you traveled to many countries yesterday, huh?

lol

A: Yeah, I went to Italy, France, and China, and then back to Japan.

lol

Anyways, why did you ask me what I ate?

B: Remembering what you ate is good training for your brain.

It said so on TV.

A: Ah, so you exercised my brain for me?

Thank you.

lol

Then I'll exercise your brain, too.

What did you eat the day before yesterday?

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July 28, 2022

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Thank you so much!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ

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I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!


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I want to speak like a native speaker!!


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Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?


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You can change whatever you want!


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It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!


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I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!


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B: Do you remember what you ate the morning before yesterday?


B: Do you remember what you ate the morning before yesterdayfor breakfast two mornings (two days) ago?

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A: Chinjaoro-su


A: Chinjaoro-su.

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B: What's Chinjaoro-su?


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A: Well.. How do I describe it...


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Chinese-style stir-fry containing thinly sliced green peppers and meat.


It's a Chinese-style stir-fry containing thinly sliced green peppers and meat.

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B: In what ways in Chinese-style?


B: In what ways ins it Chinese-style?

B: In what ways inHow is that Chinese-style?

This sounds more natural in the US.

A: I guess the sauce is Chinese-style.


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B: Oh, I wanna try it!


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What about'd you have for lunch?

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B: What about for dinner then?

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A: Yellowtail sashimi.


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Have you ever eaten yellowtail sashimi?


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B: No.


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Is it good?


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A: It's good!


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B: Which is better, tuna or yellowtail?


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A: Hmmm, I never thought about that.


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A: Hmmm, I neverhaven't thought about that.

This is okay, too.

lol


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I think I eat tuna more often.


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There are many different kinds of tuna.


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There are manylots of different kinds of tuna.

This is kind of slangy in the US.

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B: What do you meanLike what kind?

This is okay, too.

A: When I want something light, I eat the akami (red meat), usually the chutoro (medium fatty tuna), and when I want something rich, I eat the otoro (fatty tuna).


A: When I want something light, I eat the akami (red meat), usually the chutoro (medium fatty tuna), and when I want something rich, I eat the otoro (fatty tuna).

A: When I want something light, I eat the akami (red meat), then usually the chutoro (medium fatty tuna), and when I want something rich, I eat the otoro (fatty tuna).

I wasn't sure what you were trying to say here so this is my best guess.

B: I see.


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Is the yellowtail fatty?


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A: Yeah, it's fatty.


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But to be honest, sashimi is the same if you put soy sauce on it.


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Soy sauce is the best.


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B: No way lol.


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B: No way, lol.

The fish will get mad at you.


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A: You're right, I take it back.


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I'm sorry, fish.


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Well, have you ever had sashimi?


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B: Yes, tuna and hamachi


B: Yes, tuna and hamachi.

B: Yesup, tuna and hamachi.

US slang

A: Oh, you've also had hamachi !


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A: Oh, you've also had hamachi , too!

This is okay, too.

Buri and hamachi are the same fish.


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In Japan, we call this kind of fish "shusse-uo".


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In Japan, we call this kind of fish, "shusse-uo".

B: "Shusse-uo"?


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A: "Shusse" means promotion, and the name of the fish changes as it grows.


A: "Shusse" means "promotion", and the name of the fish changes as it grows, just like a person's position in a company changes as he or she grows.

A: "Shusse" means promotion, and the name of the fish changes as it grows.

Just like a person's position in a company changes as he or she grows.


Just like a person's position in a company changes as he or she grows.

Just like a person's position in a company changes as he or she growsmoves up.

This sounds more natural in the US.

B: I see.


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A: Like dolphins and whales, right?


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Dolphins and whales are name based on their size rather than their growth periods.


Dolphins and whales are named based on their size rather than their growth periods.

DThe names of dolphins and whales are name based on their size rather than their growth periods.

A: Oh, that's right!


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They are different!


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B: Yeah.


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Anyway, what did you eat yesterday?


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A: Pasta with meat sauce for breakfast, croissants for lunch, and soba stew, fried potatoes, and "้คƒๅญ" for dinner.


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B: What's "้คƒๅญ"?


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A: Dumplings


A: Dumplings.

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B: Ah, Gyoza!


B: Ah, Ggyoza!

B: Ah, Ggyoza!

It's also called potstickers, but maybe only in America.


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It'sThey're also called potstickers, but maybe only in America.

Also, what's soba stew?


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A: Well... as a dish, it's kind of hard to explain.


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I make my soba stew by adding chicken bouillon powder, bonito flakes, and soy sauce to hot water.


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After that, I put soba in the there and that's it.


After that, I put soba in the there, and that's it.

After that, I put soba in the thereadd the soba and that's it.

This sounds more natural in the US.

It takes only five minutes in my case.


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The same is true for everything; some people make it easy like me, and of course, some people stick to cooking traditionally.


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The way the broth is made varies depending on the region and family though.


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B: Yeah, I know.


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Anyways, you traveled to many countries yesterday, huh?


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Anyways, you traveled to manya lot of countries yesterday, huh?

lol


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A: Yeah, I went to Italy, France, China, and then back to Japan.


A: Yeah, I went to Italy, France, and China, and then back to Japan.

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lol


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Anyways, why did you ask me what I ate?


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Anyways, why did you ask me what I ate?

B: Remembering what you ate is good training for your brain.


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It said so on TV.


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A: Ah, so you exercised my brain for me?


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Thank you.


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lol


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Then I'll exercise your brain too.


Then I'll exercise your brain, too.

Then I'll exercise your brain, too.

What did you eat the day before yesterday?


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