July 26, 2022
Talk about dishes 21
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Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! ๐
Also, I'd like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โ๏ธ
A: I had McDonald's for lunch on the 20th.
B: What did you eat?
A: Double cheeseburger, nuggets and an aaple pie. That's the most popular item in Japan!
What is the most popular menu in the U.S.?
A: On the evening of the 20th, I had "Shouga-yaki, "Takikomi-gohan, and chicken soup with egg and chive.
B: What's "Shoga-yaki"?
A: It's a meal in which pork is fried in soy sauce with ginger. Ginger is "shouga". "Yaki" is "fried"
B: Oh, I see. Sounds delicious!
What about "takikomi gohan"?
A: Rice cooked with chicken, burdock, carrots, shiitake, and other stuff. In water seasoned with soy sauce. The ingredients used vary from household and region.
B: That sounds delicious too!
A: On the morning of the 21st, I had leftover rice from yesterday, skipped lunch, and had sashimi and fried chicken for dinner.
B: What kind of sashimi?
A: Tuna
B: O-toro?
A: No, Akami.
B: Which tastes better, otoro or akami?
A: Depends on the person
O-toro is tasty, but too much fat makes my stomach upset and makes me feel nauseous.lol
What kind of sashimi do you like?
Talking about dishesFood 21
I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!
๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ
I want to speak like a native speaker!!
Seriously!!๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐ฅ๐ฅ
Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!
๐
Also, I'd like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โ๏ธ
A: I had McDonald's for lunch on the 20th.
B: What did you eat?
A: DA double cheeseburger, nuggets and an aapple pie.
That's thewhat's most popular item in Japan!
US alternative
What i's the most popular menuthing in the U.S.?
US alternative
A: On the evening of the 20th, I had "Shouga-yaki," "Takikomi-gohan," and chicken soup with egg and chives.
B: What's "Shoga-yaki"?
A: It's a mealdish in which pork is fried in soy sauce with ginger.
Ginger is "shouga"."
"Yaki" is "fried"
B: Oh, I see.
Sounds delicious!
What about "takikomi gohan"?
A: RIt's rice cooked with chicken, burdock, carrots, shiitake, and some other stuff.
In water seasoned with soy sauce.
The ingredients used vary from household and region.
B: That sounds delicious, too!
A: On the morning of the 21st, I had leftover rice from yesterday, skipped lunch, and had sashimi and fried chicken for dinner.
B: What kind of sashimi?
A: Tuna
B: O-toro?
A: No, Akami.
B: Which tastes better, otoro or akami?
A: Depends on the person
O-toro is tasty, but too much fat makes my stomach upset and makes me feel nauseous. lol.
What kind of sashimi do you like?
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Talk about dishes 21
I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!
๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ
I want to speak like a native speaker!!
Seriously!!๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐ฅ๐ฅ
Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!
๐
Also, I'd like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โ๏ธ
A: I had McDonald's for lunch on the 20th.
B: What did you eat?
A: Double cheeseburger, nuggets, and an aapple pie.
That's the most popular item in Japan!
What is the most popular menu in the U.S.?
A: On the evening of the 20th, I had "Shouga-yaki, "Takikomi-gohan, and chicken soup with egg and chives.
B: What's "Shoga-yaki"?
A: It's a meal in which pork is fried in soy sauce withand ginger.
"with' is fine in this example, this is just how I would use it
Ginger is "shouga".
"Yaki" is "fried"
B: Oh, I see.
Sounds delicious!
What about "takikomi gohan"?
A: Rice cooked with chicken, burdock, carrots, shiitake, and other stuff(vegetables/seasonings/ ingredients).
"Stuff" is a bit too broad. Are they other vegetables, seasonings, or meats? That will help the listener get a better sense of the ingredients.
In water seasoned with soy sauce.
The ingredients used vary fromby household and region.
B: That sounds delicious too!
A: On the morning of the 21st, I had leftover rice from yesterday,. So I skipped lunch, and had sashimi and fried chicken for dinner.
If you're saying "morning of the 21st" list only what you ate in the morning in that statement.
B: What kind of sashimi?
A: Tuna
B: O-toro?
A: No, Akami.
B: Which tastes better, otoro or akami?
A: DThat depends on the person¶
OR¶
I think akami tastes better because of the flavor it holds (for example)
There's nothing wrong with the sentence as a whole but it's not likely someone would say this in English
O-toro is tasty, but too much fatit's too fatty which makes my stomach upset, and makes me feel nauseous.lol¶
OR¶
O-toro is tasty, but it's too fatty, making my stomach upset and nauseous.
What kind of sashimi do you like?
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Overall great work, all my edits are mostly personal suggestions and stylistic choices. Keep polishing!
July 28, 2022
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