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July 26, 2022

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Talk about dishes 20

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ
I want to speak like a native speaker!! Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! ๐Ÿ™
Also, I'd like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ



A: On the 26th, I had a fried egg over rice for breakfast, skipped lunch, and had "suiton" for dinner.
B: What is "suiton"?
A: It is a stewed dish. First you make dumplings out of wheat flour, then you add vegetables, meat, and other ingredients to a soup made with miso and soy sauce.
B: Is it good?
A: It's delicious!
It's so easy to make, I'll make it for you some time!
B: That's a great idea!
I'll make something to bring with me then!
A: It'll be a party! Sounds like fun!


A: On the 27th, I had leftover "suiton" and sugar toast for breakfast, skipped lunch, and had mackerel for dinner at 6:00 pm, earlier than usual.
B: How did you make the sugar toast?
A: I just sprinkled sugar on the bread. lol
B: Oh, sounds simple and delicious.
How did you eat the mackerel?
A: I grilled it.
It was fatty and delicious.

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Talking about dishesFood 20

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!

๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ

I want to speak like a native speaker!!

Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?

You can change whatever you want!

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!

๐Ÿ™

Also, I'd like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.

I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ

A: On the 26th, I had a fried egg over rice for breakfast, skipped lunch, and had "suiton" for dinner.

B: What i's "suiton"?

US alternative

A: It i's a stewed dish.

US alternative

First you make dumplings out of wheat flour, then you add vegetables, meat, and other ingredients to a soup made with miso and soy sauce.

B: Is it good?

A: It's delicious!

It's so easy to make, I'll make it for you some time!

B: That's a great ideawesome! Thank you!

I'll make something to bring with me then!

A: It'll be a party!

Sounds like fun!

A: On the 27th, I had leftover "suiton" and sugar toast for breakfast, skipped lunch, and had mackerel for dinner at 6:00 pm, which was earlier than usual.

B: How did you make the sugar toast?

A: I just sprinkled sugar on the bread.

lol

B: Oh, sounds simple and delicious.

How did you eat the mackerel?

A: I grilled it.

It was fatty and delicious.

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July 29, 2022

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A: On the 26th, I had a fried egg over rice for breakfast, skipped lunch, and had "suiton" for dinner.

B: What is "suiton"?

A: It is a stewed dish.

First you make dumplings out of wheat flour, then you add vegetables, meat, and other ingredients to a soup made with miso and soy sauce.

B: Is it good?

A: It's delicious!

It's so easy to make, I'll make it for you some time!

B: That's a great idea!

This is grammatically correct but unnatural in the context of the conversation. If someone says they will do something for you, the natural response is to say "thank you".

I'll make something to bring with me then!

A: It'll be a party!

Sounds like fun!

A: On the 27th, I had leftover "suiton" and sugar toast for breakfast, skipped lunch, and had mackerel for dinner at 6:00 pm, earlier than usual.

B: How did you make the sugar toast?

A: I just sprinkled sugar on the bread.

lol

B: Oh, sounds simple and delicious.

How did you eatprepare/make/cook the mackerel?

A: I grilled it.

It was fatty and delicious.

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sho

July 28, 2022

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Thank you so much!!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ

Talk about dishes 20


Talking about dishesFood 20

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!


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๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ


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I want to speak like a native speaker!!


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Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ


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Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

You can change whatever you want!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!


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๐Ÿ™


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Also, I'd like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ


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A: On the 26th, I had a fried egg over rice for breakfast, skipped lunch, and had "suiton" for dinner.


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B: What is "suiton"?


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B: What i's "suiton"?

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A: It is a stewed dish.


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A: It i's a stewed dish.

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First you make dumplings out of wheat flour, then you add vegetables, meat, and other ingredients to a soup made with miso and soy sauce.


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B: Is it good?


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A: It's delicious!


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It's so easy to make, I'll make it for you some time!


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B: That's a great idea!


B: That's a great idea!

This is grammatically correct but unnatural in the context of the conversation. If someone says they will do something for you, the natural response is to say "thank you".

B: That's a great ideawesome! Thank you!

I'll make something to bring with me then!


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A: It'll be a party!


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Sounds like fun!


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A: On the 27th, I had leftover "suiton" and sugar toast for breakfast, skipped lunch, and had mackerel for dinner at 6:00 pm, earlier than usual.


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A: On the 27th, I had leftover "suiton" and sugar toast for breakfast, skipped lunch, and had mackerel for dinner at 6:00 pm, which was earlier than usual.

B: How did you make the sugar toast?


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A: I just sprinkled sugar on the bread.


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lol


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B: Oh, sounds simple and delicious.


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How did you eat the mackerel?


How did you eatprepare/make/cook the mackerel?

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A: I grilled it.


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It was fatty and delicious.


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