July 26, 2022
Talk about dishes 19
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Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! ๐
Also, I'd like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โ๏ธ
B: What did you have for lunch yesterday?
A: Pancakes!
B: Ohh, did you put a lot of maple syrup on them?
A: Of course! It wouldn't be pancakes if I didn't put a lot of maple syrup on them!
B: Indeed! Did you put any toppings on it?
A: Yes, just butter. I really like cream, but I forgot to buy it.
B: What about fruit?
A: None. It was a little expensive.
B: Well, but simple is good, right?
A: It's a little lackluster, though.
B: On the next occasion, huh. What about dinner?
A: Lemon-salt-sauce ribs bento and pork shabu-shabu salad at the convenience store.
B: Shabu shabu?
A: Thin slices of pork that has been boiled.
B: Great! Looks refreshing!
A: What did you eat?
Talking about dishesFood 19
I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!
๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ
I want to speak like a native speaker!!
Seriously!!๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐ฅ๐ฅ
Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!
๐
Also, I'd like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โ๏ธ
B: What did you have for lunch yesterday?
A: Pancakes!
B: Ohh, did you put a lot of maple syrup on them?
A: Of course!
ItThey wouldn't be pancakes if I didn't put a lot of maple syrup on them!
B: Indeed!
Did you put any toppings on it?
A: Yes, just butter.
I really like cream, but I forgot to buy it.
B: What about fruit?
A: Nonpe.
US alternative
It was a little expensive.
B: Well, but simple is good, right?
A: It's was a little lacklustering, though.
US alternative
B: On the next occasionNext time, huh.
What about'd you have for dinner?
This is very commonly said in the US.
A: LA lemon-salt-sauce ribs bento and pork shabu-shabu salad atfrom the convenience store.
B: Shabu shabu?
A: Thin slices of pork thatwhich hasve been boiled.
B: Great!
Looks refreshingIt sounds awesome!
This is way more commonly said in the US.
A: What did you eat?
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Talk about dishes 19
I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!
๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ
I want to speak like a native speaker!!
Seriously!!๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐ฅ๐ฅ
Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!
๐
Also, I'd like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โ๏ธ
B: What did you have for lunch yesterday?
A: Pancakes!
B: Ohh nice, did you put a lot of maple syrup on them?
A: Of course!
ItThey wouldn't be pancakes if I didn't put a lot of maple syrup on them!
B: IndeedTrue!
"Indeed" is too formal
Did you putadd any toppings on it?
A: Yes, jJust butter.
I really likewould have added cream, but I forgot to buy it.
B: What about fruit?
A: Non.¶
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Nope.
It was a little's too expensive.
B: Well, but simple is good, right?Nothing wrong with it being simple.
A: It'Not at all. It is a lbittle lackluster, though.
B: On the next occasion, huh.There's always next time
Are you saying next time they can get more fruit?
WAnd what about dinner?
A: Lemon- salt-sauced ribs, bento, and pork shabu-shabu salad atfrom the convenience store.
Are the ribs and bento separate or one item?
B: Shabu shabu?
A: TIt's thin slices of pork that hasve been boiled.
B: GreatOh wow!
Looks refreshingdelicious!
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A: WAnd what did you eat?
Feedback
Overall the conversation is a bit unnatural. If it were to take place it'd be between an adult and a child.
July 28, 2022
Thank you so much!!!
Which part is the child's sentences? I'd love to improve and would appreciate any advice you could give me!๐๐
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