July 26, 2022
Talk about dishes 18
I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ
I want to speak like a native speaker!! Seriously!!๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐ฅ๐ฅ
Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! ๐
Also, I'd like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โ๏ธ
A: For breakfast on the 28th, I had yesterday's leftover turnips with a sauce made of vinegar and miso, and I also had a meat and Veggie stir fry and a burrito I bought at a convenience store.
B: What seasoning did you use for the stir fry?ใ
A: Salt and pepper for the stir-fry.
B: That's perfect for the morning.
A: Yeah, simple is the best!
B: Good! What about lunch?
A: Korean instant ramen called "shin ramen" with steamed chicken!
B: Oh, I love "shin ramen"!
A: Yeah? It's delicious, right?
B: For sho!
What about dinner?
A: Ready-to-eat hamburger steak from the supermarket, sausage and cabbage!
B: Ready-to-eat meals are the best when you're busy, right?
A: Yeah, I thank the person who invented them every day.
B: Yeah, definitely. What about on the 29th?
A: I skipped breakfast on the 29th, had dried shoyu ramen for lunch, and had miso soup, teriyaki pork, tofu and aojiru for dinner.
B: How was it?
A: Well, the teriyaki tasted a little strong, but everything else was good, it's not that the teriyaki was bad, but it made me thirstier than usual.
What did you eat?
Talking about dishesFood 18
I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!
๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ
I want to speak like a native speaker!!
Seriously!!๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐ฅ๐ฅ
Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!
๐
Also, I'd like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โ๏ธ
A: For breakfast on the 28th, I had yesterday's leftover turnips with a sauce made of vinegar and miso, and I also had a meat and Vveggie stir fry and a burrito I bought at a convenience store.
B: What seasonings did you use forwith the stir fry?
A: Salt and pepper for the stir-fry.
B: That's perfect for the morning.
A: Yeah, simple is the best!
US alternative
B: Good!
What about lunch?
A: Korean instant ramen called "shin ramen" with steamed chicken!
B: Oh, I love "shin ramen"!
A: Yeah?
It's delicious, right?
B: For sho!
What about dinner?
A: Ready-to-eat hamburger steak from the supermarket, sausage and cabbage!
B: Ready-to-eat meals are the best when you're busy, right?
A: Yeah, I thank the person who invented them every day.
B: Yeah, definitely.
What about on the 29th?
A: I skipped breakfast on the 29th, had dried shoyu ramen for lunch, and had miso soup, teriyaki pork, tofu and aojiru for dinner.
B: How was it?
A: Well, the teriyaki tasted a little strong, but everything else was good, it's not that the teriyaki was bad, but it made me thirstier than usual.
What did you eat?
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Talk about dishes 18
I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!
I want to speak like a native speaker!!
Seriously!!๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐ฅ๐ฅ
Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!
Also, I'd like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โ๏ธ
A: For breakfast on the 28th, I had yesterday's leftover turnips with a sauce made ofrom vinegar and miso, and. I also had a meat and Veggie stir fry and a burrito I bought at a convenience store.
I removed "yesterday's" because it's a bit redundant. Leftover's can imply it was yesterday's meal.
A: Salt and pepper for the stir-fry.
A bit redundant as we already established that we're talking about the stir-fry.
B: That's perfect for the morning.
A: Yeah, simple is the best!
B: Good!
What about lunch?
A: Korean instant ramen called "shin ramen" with steamed chicken!
B: Oh, I love "shin ramen"!
A: Yeah?
It's delicious, right?
B: For sho!
What about dinner?
A: Ready-to-eat hamburger steak from the supermarket, sausage and cabbage!
B: Ready-to-eat meals are the best when you're busy, right?
A: Yeah, I thank the person who invented them every day.
B: Yeah, definitely.
What about on the 29th?
A: I skipped breakfast on the 29th, had dried shoyu ramen for lunch, and had miso soup, teriyaki pork, tofu and aojiru for dinner.
B: How was it?
A: Well, the teriyaki tasted a little strong, but everything else was good, i. It's not that the teriyaki was bad, but it made me thirstier than usual.
A run on sentence. Makes more sense to split into two sentences.
What did you eat?
July 28, 2022
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