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Talk about dishes 17

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ
I want to speak like a native speaker!! Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! ๐Ÿ™
Also, I'd like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ


B: What did you have for lunch yesterday?
A: I had frozen arrabbiata. I put crushed tomatoes in it.
B: Did you add more crushed tomatoes to the arrabbiata?
A: Yes! To add more sauce.
B: I see. It tastes better with more sauce.
A: Exactly!
B: And at night?
A: Pre-packaged curry and canned mackerel into it.
B: You really like to put into it, right? Is it good?
A: Well, I wouldn't recommend it to others. But if I put mackerel in it, it's healtheir. Also easy to cook, and it doesn't taste bad, so I eat it. But it's not very tasty.
B: Isn't there something else that tastes better?
A: Yes. But this dish is easy to cook. Do you cook every day?

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Talking about dishesFood 17

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!

๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ

I want to speak like a native speaker!!

Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?

You can change whatever you want!

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!

๐Ÿ™

Also, I'd like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.

I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ

B: What did you have for lunch yesterday?

A: I had frozen arrabbiata.

I put crushed tomatoes in it.

B: Did you add more crushed tomatoes to the arrabbiata?

A: Yes!

To add more sauce.

B: I see.

It tastes better with more sauce.

A: Exactly!

B: And at nightfor dinner?

A: Pre-packaged curry andwith canned mackerel into it.

B: You really like to put into it, rightadd stuff, don't you?

Is it good?

A: Well, I wouldn't recommend it to others.

But if I put mackerel in it, it's healtheir.

Also easy to cook, and it doesn't taste bad, so I eat it.

But it's not very tasty.

B: Isn't there something else that tastes better?

A: Yes.

But this dish is easy to cook.

Do you cook every day?

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July 28, 2022

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Talking about dishesFood 17

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!


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๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I want to speak like a native speaker!!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

You can change whatever you want!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

๐Ÿ™


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Also, I'd like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ


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B: What did you have for lunch yesterday?


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A: I had frozen arrabbiata.


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I put crushed tomatoes in it.


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B: Did you add more crushed tomatoes to the arrabbiata?


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A: Yes!


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To add more sauce.


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B: I see.


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It tastes better with more sauce.


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A: Exactly!


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B: And at night?


B: And at nightfor dinner?

A: Pre-packaged curry and canned mackerel into it.


A: Pre-packaged curry andwith canned mackerel into it.

B: You really like to put into it, right?


B: You really like to put into it, rightadd stuff, don't you?

Is it good?


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A: Well, I wouldn't recommend it to others.


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But if I put mackerel in it, it's healtheir.


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Also easy to cook, and it doesn't taste bad, so I eat it.


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But it's not very tasty.


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B: Isn't there something else that tastes better?


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A: Yes.


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But this dish is easy to cook.


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Do you cook every day?


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