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Talk about dishes 14

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ
I want to speak like a native speaker!! Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! ๐Ÿ™
Also, I'd like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ


B: What did you have for dinner?
A: I bought oysters and made an oyster stew for one.
B: Only oysters?
A: Just tofu, green onions and oysters!
B: How did it taste?
A: Simple, but delicious! It was finished off with Ojiya.
B: Ojiya?
A: Umm, like porridge? Or congee? You put rice in the leftover soup from the pot and eat it.
B: Like zousui?
A: Yeah, I use the word in the same sense.
B: And was it good?
A: It was good too.ใ€€
B: Nice!
A: What did you eat?

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Talking about dishesFood 14

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!

๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ

I want to speak like a native speaker!!

Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?

You can change whatever you want!

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!

๐Ÿ™

Also, I'd like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.

I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ

B: What did you have for dinner?

A: I bought oysters and made an oyster stew for one.

This sounds more natural in the US.

B: Only oysters?

A: Just tofu, green onions and oysters!

B: How did it taste?

A: Simple, but delicious!

It was finished it off with Ojiya.

B: Ojiya?

A: Umm, like porridge?

Or congee?

You put rice in the leftover soup from the pot and eat it.

B: Like zousui?

A: Yeah, I used the word in the same sense.

B: And was it good?

A: It was good, too.

B: Nice!

A: What did you eat?

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sho

July 28, 2022

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ใ‚ใ‚ŠใŒใจใ†ใ”ใ–ใ„ใพใ™!!๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ

Talk about dishes 14


Talking about dishesFood 14

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!


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๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ


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I want to speak like a native speaker!!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

You can change whatever you want!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

๐Ÿ™


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Also, I'd like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

B: What did you have for dinner?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

A: I bought oysters and made an oyster stew for one.


A: I bought oysters and made an oyster stew for one.

This sounds more natural in the US.

B: Only oysters?


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A: Just tofu, green onions and oysters!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

B: How did it taste?


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A: Simple, but delicious!


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It was finished off with Ojiya.


It was finished it off with Ojiya.

B: Ojiya?


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A: Umm, like porridge?


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Or congee?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

You put rice in the leftover soup from the pot and eat it.


You put rice in the leftover soup from the pot and eat it.

B: Like zousui?


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A: Yeah, I use the word in the same sense.


A: Yeah, I used the word in the same sense.

B: And was it good?


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A: It was good too.


A: It was good, too.

B: Nice!


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A: What did you eat?


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