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July 26, 2022

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Talk about anime

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ
I want to speak like a native speaker!! Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! ๐Ÿ™
Also, I'd like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ



A: Do you know Crayon Shin-chan?
B: I don't know of that.
A: I guess it's like a Japanese version of The Simpsons. Maybe. Anyway, it's a Japanese national anime about a crazy family!
But it's fun and sometimes there are episodes that move me, so give it a watch!
I'd love to hear your honest thoughts.
B: I liked The Simpsons, so I might like it!
A: Then you might like it!
But a lot of people overseas hate the main character. lol
The main character likes to moon people, and I think this cartoon was banned in the US and Indonesia because of that!
B: Really? LOL.
A: On top of that, some people even call him a "naughty little boy". It may seem like a children's anime to people overseas, but in Japan, many adults love it too.
The anime is mostly just jokes, but the movies are seriously moving.
I'm moved by the kindness rarely shown by the main character, his parents, and his friends, and by the unexpectedly deep message. The movies "Sengoku" and "Otona Teikoku" are the best examples of this.
B :Oh, I might have heard of "Otona Teikoku" before.
A : Oh, really!?
B: I've never seen it, though.
A: It is such a work of work that you cannot talk about Japanese animated films without having seen it.
B: Is that so?
A: Maybe, I think I might have exaggerated a bit..Haha
But that's how much I love it!
You should watch it because it's definitely one of the greatest Japanese anime films! Like it or not.
But I think you should watch "Sengoku" first.
I think this is the one that everyone will like.
I have never heard of anyone in Japan who dislikes this film. am not sure what people from overseas think, though.Haha
B: Ok! "Sengoku"!
I'll check it out!
A: Also, if you haven't seen the anime, some things might need a little explanation, so it might be a good idea to become familiar with the family structure and characters beforehand.
If I were to explain it to you, I would say that it's an anime about it's an anime about a family of four people and a dog, and the daily life of Shinnosuke, the eldest son of the family, who is a very selfish five-year-old boy who annoys the people around him.
B: I see.
Thanks! I'll take a look!
A: Yeah, check it out!

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Talking about aAnime

This sounds more natural in the US.

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!

๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ

I want to speak like a native speaker!!

Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?

You can change whatever you want!

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!

๐Ÿ™

Also, I'd like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.

I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ

A: Do you know who Crayon Shin-chan is?

This sounds more natural in the US.

B: I don't know of thatNope.

US slang

A: I guess it's like a Japanese version of The Simpsons.

Maybe.

Anyway, it's a Japanese national anime about a crazy family!

But it's fun and sometimes there are episodes that move me, so give it a watchI recommend it!

This sounds more natural in the US.

I'd love to hear your honest thoughts on it.

We don't usually use the word, "honest," like this.

B: I liked The Simpsons, so I might like it!

A: Then you might like it!

But a lot of people overseas hate the main character.

lol

The main character likes to moon people, and I think this cartoon was banned in the US and Indonesia because of that!

B: Really?

LOL.

A: On top of that, some people even call him a "naughty little boy"."

It may seem like a children's anime to people overseas, but in Japan, many adults love it, too.

The anime is mostly just jokes, but the movies are seriously moving.

I'm moved by the kindness rarely shown by the main character, his parents, and his friends, and by the unexpectedly deep messages.

The movies "Sengoku" and "Otona Teikoku" are the best examples of this.

B :Oh, I might have heard of "Otona Teikoku" before."

This sounds more natural in the US.

A : Oh, really!?

?

B: I've never seen it, though.

A: It is such a work of work that you cannot talk about Japanese animated films without having seen it.

B: Is that so?

A: Maybe, I think I might have exaggerated a bit..Haha

But that's how much I love it!

You should watch it because it's definitely one of the greatest films in Japanese anime films!

This sounds more natural in the US.

Like it or not.

But I think you should watch "Sengoku" first.

I think this is the one that everyone will like.

I have never heard of anyone in Japan who dislikes this film.

aI'm not sure what people from overseas will think, though. Haha.

B: Ok!

"Sengoku"!

I'll check it out!

A: Also, if you haven't seen the anime, some things might need a little explanation, so it might be a good idea to become familiar with the family structure and characters beforehand.

If I were to explain it to you, I would say that it's an anime about it's an anime about a family of four people and a dog, and the daily life of Shinnosuke, the eldest son of the family, who is a very selfish five-year-old boy who annoys the people around him.

B: I see.

Thanks!

I'll take a look!

A: Yeah, check it out!

Feedback

ใ‚ˆใๅ‡บๆฅใพใ—ใŸ๏ผ Your writing is improving a lot!

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sho

July 27, 2022

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ใ‚ใ‚ŠใŒใจใ†ใ”ใ–ใ„ใพใ™!!!๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ

B: I don't knowNever heard of thait.

A: I guess it'st's kind of like a Japanese version of The Simpsons.

"I guess"๏ผšไฝŽใ„ไฟก็”จๅบฆใ€‚ใ€Œ้›จใŒ้™ใ‚Šใใ†ใ€ใ‚„ใ€Œๆ–ฐใ—ใใชใ•ใใ†ใ€ใจไผผใฆใ„ใ‚‹ใงใ—ใ‚‡ใ†ใ€‚

MaybeThat's what I think, anyway.

่‹ฑ่ชžใ‚’่ฉฑใ™ไบบใฏใ€็ขบ็އๅž‹ใฎๅ‰ฏ่ฉžใฎไปฃใ‚ใ‚Šใซใ€ใ€Œใใ‚ŒใŒ็งใฎ่ฆ‹ใŸ็‰ฉใ‚’่ฆ‹ใŸใ€ใฎใ‚ˆใ†ใช็™บ่จ€ใŒๆ–นใŒๅฅฝใใ ใจๆ€ใ„ใพใ™ใ€‚

Anyway, it's a Japanese nationaln anime about a crazy family!

In every day speech, speakers tend to assume that anime is Japanese. We only specify when it's not Japanese. Kind of strange!

But it's pretty fun and sometimes there are some episodes that move me, so give it a watchare really good! You should check it out!

ๆฎ‹ๅฟตใชใŒใ‚‰ใ€ใ‚ขใƒกใƒชใ‚ซไบบใฏใ€็•ช็ต„ใ‚„ๆ˜ ็”ปใ‚„ใ‚ฒใƒผใƒ ใชใ‚‰ใ€ใ€Œๆ„Ÿๅ‹•ใ€ใ‚„ใ€Œๆ„Ÿๆ…จ็„ก้‡ใ€ใฎใ‚ˆใ†ใชๆ„Ÿๆƒ…ใฎๅ˜่ชžใ‚’่จ€ใ†ใฎใ‚’ใชใ‹ใชใ‹ๅซŒใŒใฃใฆใ„ใ‚‹ใฎใงใ™ใ€‚ๅผฑใใ†ใจใ‹ใ‚“ใŒใˆใ‚‰ใ‚Œใฆใ„ใ‚‹ใฎใงใ—ใ‚‡ใ†ใ€‚็งใฏใใ‚ŒใŒๅค‰ใ‚ใ‚Œใฐใ„ใ„ใจๆ€ใ„ใพใ™๏ผ

I'd love to hear your honest thoughts.

B: I liked The Simpsons, so I might like it!

ใใ‚Œใ‚’่จ€ใ†ใ‹ใฏไบบใซใ‚ˆใฃใฆ้•ใ†ใ‘ใ‚Œใฉใ‚‚ใ€้ŽๅŽปๅฝขใฏใ€Œ็•ช็ต„ใŒใ‚‚ใ†็ต‚ใ‚ใฃใŸใ€ใฎใ‚ˆใ†ใฎๆ„ๅ‘ณใŒๆŒใฆใ‚‹ใ‹ใ‚‚ใ—ใ‚Œใพใ›ใ‚“ใ€‚

A: ThenYeah, you might like it!

But aA lot of people overseas hate the main character, though.

"But" works, but "though" sounds slightly more natural.

The main character likes to moon people, and. I think this cartoon wasey even banned it in the US and Indonesia because of that!

A: On top of thatYeah, some people even call him a "naughty little boy".

In really casual conversation, Americans sometimes use "yeah" almost like ๆŽฅ็ถš่ฉž!

It may seem like a children's anime to people overseas, but in Japan, many think they think it's a children's anime, but a lot of Japanese adults lovike it too.!

The anime is mostly just jokesre funny than anything, but the movies are seriously movingactually pretty good.

Some Americans might use "legit" (slang for "legitimate") instead of pretty. Some Americans might say "anime movie" instead of "movie" or "animated movie": they tend to think appearance first and format/length/medium second!

I'm moved by the kindness rarely shown by the mainSometimes the character, his parents, and his friends actually pretty nice, and by the unexpectedly deep messageshow can actually be really emotional.

English speakers love transferred epithets ๏ผˆไปฃๆ›ๆณ•ใƒป่ปข็งปไฟฎ้ฃพ่ชž๏ผ‰: ไบบใฎไปฃใ‚ใ‚Šใซใ€็‰ฉใซๆ„Ÿๆƒ…ใ‚’ไธŽใˆใ‚‹ใ•ใพใ€‚

The movies "Sengoku" and "Otona Teikoku" are the best examples of thiones.

B :Oh, I might ha You know I think I've heard of "Otona Teikoku" before."

A : Oh, really!you have?

A: It is such a work of work that you cannot talk about JapanYou've gotta watch it! Everyone who likese animated films without havinge movies should seen it.!

B: It's that sogood?

"Is that so"๏ผšใกใ‚‡ใฃใจๅคใ„่จ€ใ„ๆ–นใงใ™ใ€‚

A: Maybe, I thinkOK, I might havbe exaggerateding a bit..Haha, but still!

But that's how much I love itI love it that much!

You should watch it because it's definitely one of the greatest Japanese anime filmsIt's, like, one of the best anime movies ever!

"like"๏ผšใŸใ ใฎ็น‹ใŽ่จ€่‘‰ใ€‚ๅไปฃใฎไบบใ‚‚ใŸใใ•ใ‚“ใฎๅคงไบบใ‚‚็ตถใˆใšไฝฟใฃใฆใ„ใพใ™๏ผ

Like it or not.You might like it!

I think this is the one that everyone willThat's the one most people would like.

I have never heard of anyone in Japan who disoesn't likes this film.

am nNot sure what people from overseas think, though. Haha

A: Also, if you haven't seen the anime, some things might need a little explanation, so ityou might be a good idea to become familiar with the family structure andwanna read about the characters beforehand you watch it.

If I were to explain it to you, I woul'd say that it's an anime about it's an anime about a family of four people and a dog, and the daily life ofthis family. There are four people and a dog. Shinnosuke, is the eoldest son of the family, who is a ver. He's this really selfish five-year-old boy who annoys the peopleveryone around him.

I'll take a lookcheck it out!

A: Yeah, check ilemme know what yout think!

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This is really good! I just added some ideas that would sound more natural if I was talking to friends. This already sounds really close to now Americans talk to each other, though!

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July 26, 2022

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ใกใชใฟใซใ€ใ‚ฏใƒฌใƒจใƒณใ—ใ‚“ใกใ‚ƒใ‚“ใฏๅฎŸใซ้ข็™ฝใใ†ใงใ™ใญใ€‚็งใฏ่ฆ‹ใฆใฟใพใ™๏ผ

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July 27, 2022

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ใ‚ใ‚ŠใŒใจใ†ใ”ใ–ใ„ใพใ™!!๐Ÿ˜ญ
ๆœฌๅฝ“ใซๅ‹‰ๅผทใซใชใ‚Šใพใ—ใŸ!!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ
ๆ˜ฏ้žใ€่ฆ‹ใฆใฟใฆใใ ใ•ใ„๐Ÿ˜

Talk about anime


Talking about aAnime

This sounds more natural in the US.

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!


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๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ


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I want to speak like a native speaker!!


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Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ


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Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?


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You can change whatever you want!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!


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๐Ÿ™


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Also, I'd like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.


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I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ


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A: Do you know Crayon Shin-chan?


A: Do you know who Crayon Shin-chan is?

This sounds more natural in the US.

B: I don't know of that.


B: I don't knowNever heard of thait.

B: I don't know of thatNope.

US slang

A: I guess it's like a Japanese version of The Simpsons.


A: I guess it'st's kind of like a Japanese version of The Simpsons.

"I guess"๏ผšไฝŽใ„ไฟก็”จๅบฆใ€‚ใ€Œ้›จใŒ้™ใ‚Šใใ†ใ€ใ‚„ใ€Œๆ–ฐใ—ใใชใ•ใใ†ใ€ใจไผผใฆใ„ใ‚‹ใงใ—ใ‚‡ใ†ใ€‚

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Maybe.


MaybeThat's what I think, anyway.

่‹ฑ่ชžใ‚’่ฉฑใ™ไบบใฏใ€็ขบ็އๅž‹ใฎๅ‰ฏ่ฉžใฎไปฃใ‚ใ‚Šใซใ€ใ€Œใใ‚ŒใŒ็งใฎ่ฆ‹ใŸ็‰ฉใ‚’่ฆ‹ใŸใ€ใฎใ‚ˆใ†ใช็™บ่จ€ใŒๆ–นใŒๅฅฝใใ ใจๆ€ใ„ใพใ™ใ€‚

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Anyway, it's a Japanese national anime about a crazy family!


Anyway, it's a Japanese nationaln anime about a crazy family!

In every day speech, speakers tend to assume that anime is Japanese. We only specify when it's not Japanese. Kind of strange!

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But it's fun and sometimes there are episodes that move me, so give it a watch!


But it's pretty fun and sometimes there are some episodes that move me, so give it a watchare really good! You should check it out!

ๆฎ‹ๅฟตใชใŒใ‚‰ใ€ใ‚ขใƒกใƒชใ‚ซไบบใฏใ€็•ช็ต„ใ‚„ๆ˜ ็”ปใ‚„ใ‚ฒใƒผใƒ ใชใ‚‰ใ€ใ€Œๆ„Ÿๅ‹•ใ€ใ‚„ใ€Œๆ„Ÿๆ…จ็„ก้‡ใ€ใฎใ‚ˆใ†ใชๆ„Ÿๆƒ…ใฎๅ˜่ชžใ‚’่จ€ใ†ใฎใ‚’ใชใ‹ใชใ‹ๅซŒใŒใฃใฆใ„ใ‚‹ใฎใงใ™ใ€‚ๅผฑใใ†ใจใ‹ใ‚“ใŒใˆใ‚‰ใ‚Œใฆใ„ใ‚‹ใฎใงใ—ใ‚‡ใ†ใ€‚็งใฏใใ‚ŒใŒๅค‰ใ‚ใ‚Œใฐใ„ใ„ใจๆ€ใ„ใพใ™๏ผ

But it's fun and sometimes there are episodes that move me, so give it a watchI recommend it!

This sounds more natural in the US.

I'd love to hear your honest thoughts.


I'd love to hear your honest thoughts.

I'd love to hear your honest thoughts on it.

We don't usually use the word, "honest," like this.

B: I liked The Simpsons, so I might like it!


B: I liked The Simpsons, so I might like it!

ใใ‚Œใ‚’่จ€ใ†ใ‹ใฏไบบใซใ‚ˆใฃใฆ้•ใ†ใ‘ใ‚Œใฉใ‚‚ใ€้ŽๅŽปๅฝขใฏใ€Œ็•ช็ต„ใŒใ‚‚ใ†็ต‚ใ‚ใฃใŸใ€ใฎใ‚ˆใ†ใฎๆ„ๅ‘ณใŒๆŒใฆใ‚‹ใ‹ใ‚‚ใ—ใ‚Œใพใ›ใ‚“ใ€‚

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A: Then you might like it!


A: ThenYeah, you might like it!

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But a lot of people overseas hate the main character.


But aA lot of people overseas hate the main character, though.

"But" works, but "though" sounds slightly more natural.

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lol


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The main character likes to moon people, and I think this cartoon was banned in the US and Indonesia because of that!


The main character likes to moon people, and. I think this cartoon wasey even banned it in the US and Indonesia because of that!

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B: Really?


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LOL.


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A: On top of that, some people even call him a "naughty little boy".


A: On top of thatYeah, some people even call him a "naughty little boy".

In really casual conversation, Americans sometimes use "yeah" almost like ๆŽฅ็ถš่ฉž!

A: On top of that, some people even call him a "naughty little boy"."

It may seem like a children's anime to people overseas, but in Japan, many adults love it too.


It may seem like a children's anime to people overseas, but in Japan, many think they think it's a children's anime, but a lot of Japanese adults lovike it too.!

It may seem like a children's anime to people overseas, but in Japan, many adults love it, too.

The anime is mostly just jokes, but the movies are seriously moving.


The anime is mostly just jokesre funny than anything, but the movies are seriously movingactually pretty good.

Some Americans might use "legit" (slang for "legitimate") instead of pretty. Some Americans might say "anime movie" instead of "movie" or "animated movie": they tend to think appearance first and format/length/medium second!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'm moved by the kindness rarely shown by the main character, his parents, and his friends, and by the unexpectedly deep message.


I'm moved by the kindness rarely shown by the mainSometimes the character, his parents, and his friends actually pretty nice, and by the unexpectedly deep messageshow can actually be really emotional.

English speakers love transferred epithets ๏ผˆไปฃๆ›ๆณ•ใƒป่ปข็งปไฟฎ้ฃพ่ชž๏ผ‰: ไบบใฎไปฃใ‚ใ‚Šใซใ€็‰ฉใซๆ„Ÿๆƒ…ใ‚’ไธŽใˆใ‚‹ใ•ใพใ€‚

I'm moved by the kindness rarely shown by the main character, his parents, and his friends, and by the unexpectedly deep messages.

The movies "Sengoku" and "Otona Teikoku" are the best examples of this.


The movies "Sengoku" and "Otona Teikoku" are the best examples of thiones.

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B :Oh, I might have heard of "Otona Teikoku" before.


B :Oh, I might ha You know I think I've heard of "Otona Teikoku" before."

B :Oh, I might have heard of "Otona Teikoku" before."

This sounds more natural in the US.

A : Oh, really!


A : Oh, really!you have?

A : Oh, really!?

?


?

B: I've never seen it, though.


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A: It is such a work of work that you cannot talk about Japanese animated films without having seen it.


A: It is such a work of work that you cannot talk about JapanYou've gotta watch it! Everyone who likese animated films without havinge movies should seen it.!

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B: Is that so?


B: It's that sogood?

"Is that so"๏ผšใกใ‚‡ใฃใจๅคใ„่จ€ใ„ๆ–นใงใ™ใ€‚

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A: Maybe, I think I might have exaggerated a bit..Haha


A: Maybe, I thinkOK, I might havbe exaggerateding a bit..Haha, but still!

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But that's how much I love it!


But that's how much I love itI love it that much!

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You should watch it because it's definitely one of the greatest Japanese anime films!


You should watch it because it's definitely one of the greatest Japanese anime filmsIt's, like, one of the best anime movies ever!

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You should watch it because it's definitely one of the greatest films in Japanese anime films!

This sounds more natural in the US.

Like it or not.


Like it or not.You might like it!

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But I think you should watch "Sengoku" first.


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I think this is the one that everyone will like.


I think this is the one that everyone willThat's the one most people would like.

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I have never heard of anyone in Japan who dislikes this film.


I have never heard of anyone in Japan who disoesn't likes this film.

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am not sure what people from overseas think, though.Haha


am nNot sure what people from overseas think, though. Haha

aI'm not sure what people from overseas will think, though. Haha.

B: Ok!


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"Sengoku"!


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I'll check it out!


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A: Also, if you haven't seen the anime, some things might need a little explanation, so it might be a good idea to become familiar with the family structure and characters beforehand.


A: Also, if you haven't seen the anime, some things might need a little explanation, so ityou might be a good idea to become familiar with the family structure andwanna read about the characters beforehand you watch it.

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If I were to explain it to you, I would say that it's an anime about it's an anime about a family of four people and a dog, and the daily life of Shinnosuke, the eldest son of the family, who is a very selfish five-year-old boy who annoys the people around him.


If I were to explain it to you, I woul'd say that it's an anime about it's an anime about a family of four people and a dog, and the daily life ofthis family. There are four people and a dog. Shinnosuke, is the eoldest son of the family, who is a ver. He's this really selfish five-year-old boy who annoys the peopleveryone around him.

If I were to explain it to you, I would say that it's an anime about it's an anime about a family of four people and a dog, and the daily life of Shinnosuke, the eldest son of the family, who is a very selfish five-year-old boy who annoys the people around him.

B: I see.


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Thanks!


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I'll take a look!


I'll take a lookcheck it out!

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A: Yeah, check it out!


A: Yeah, check ilemme know what yout think!

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