July 26, 2022
Talk 7
I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ
I want to speak like a native speaker!! Seriously!!๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐ฅ๐ฅ
Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! ๐
Also, I'd like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โ๏ธ
A: I think I might tidy up my room today.
I've accumulated a lot of cardboard boxes from amazon.
B: Oh, that's great! How long have you not done that?
A: About 3 months.
B: I hear you.
A: How about you?
B: I don't do much tidying up, but I do sticky roller once every two days or so. I find myself doing sticky roller. Do you do sticky roller?
A: That's great, I do! But maybe once a week or so.
B: Nice! Sticky roller is great, right?
Talking 7
I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!
๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ
I want to speak like a native speaker!!
Seriously!!๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐ฅ๐ฅ
Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!
๐
Also, I'd like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โ๏ธ
A: I think I might tidy up my room today.
I've accumulated a lot of cardboard boxes from aAmazon.
B: Oh, that's great!
How long have you not dones it been since you last did that?
This sounds more natural in the US.
A: About 3 months.
B: I hear you.
A: How about you?
B: I don't do much tidying up, but I do use a sticky roller once every two days or so.
I find myself dousing the sticky roller a lot.
or
I find myself doing the sticky roller thing a lot.
Do you douse a sticky roller?
This sounds more natural in the US.
A: That's great, I do!
But maybe once a week or so.
B: Nice!
Sticky roller iss are great, right?
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A: I think I might tidy up my room today.
Alt: "I'm considering tidying up..." "I'm thinking of tidying up..."
I've accumulated a lot of cardboard boxes from amazon.
Alt: "I've gotten a lot of..."
How long have you not done that?
Reads a bit judgemental. I would say, "How long has it been since you were able to clean it?"
B: I hear you.
"I hear you" is usually used when you're trying to sympathize with someone else, or if you are debating about something and someone wants to agree with a point you've made. If Person A was complaining about how hard it is to clean one's room, then "I hear you" makes sense.
I would replace with "I see."
B: I don't do much tidying up, but I doclean with a sticky roller once every two days or so.
I find myself dousing sticky roller.
Do you douse sticky rollers?
A: That's great, I do, too!
Sticky roller iss are great, right?
Feedback
Great job!
July 27, 2022
Thank you so much!!๐โโ๏ธ
Talk 7
I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!
๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ
I want to speak like a native speaker!!
Seriously!!๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐ฅ๐ฅ
Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!
๐
Also, I'd like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
Try the site Free4Talk.
It's free and there is always a ton of people looking to speak English.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โ๏ธ
A: I think I might tidy up my room today.
I've accumulated a lot of cardboard boxes from aAmazon.
B: Oh, that's great!
How long have you not done that?
A: About 3 months.
B: I hear you.
A: How about you?
B: I don't do much tidying up, but I do sticky roller once every two days or so.
Might be ok.
Not sure what a sticker roller is, though.
Is that for picking up lint/dust off the carpet?
I find myself doing sticky rollering.
If "to sticky roller" is to be used as a verb (...it seems like it would work as a verb), then it would be "sticky rollering"
If that is going to far, then simply: I find myself using the sticky roller.
Do you do sticky roller?
A: That's great, I do!
But maybe once a week or so.
B: Nice!
SThe sticky roller is great, right?
Sticky rollering is great, right?
Uisng the sticky roller is great, right?
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