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sho

July 26, 2022

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Talk 6

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ
I want to speak like a native speaker!! Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! ๐Ÿ™
Also, I'd like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ



A: Cold water feels good when I wash my hands.
B: Yes, it does feel nice and cool.
A: Seriously, I can't wait for winter!
B: It's not even summer yet.

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Talking 6

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!

๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ

I want to speak like a native speaker!!

Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?

You can change whatever you want!

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!

๐Ÿ™

Also, I'd like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.

I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ

A: CThe cold water feels good when I wash my hands.

This sounds more natural in the US.

B: Yesah, it does feel nice and cool.

US alternative

A: Seriously, I can't wait for winter!

B: It's not even summer yet.

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ใ‚ˆใๅ‡บๆฅใพใ—ใŸ๏ผ

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sho

July 30, 2022

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ใ‚ใ‚ŠใŒใจใ†ใ”ใ–ใ„ใพใ™๏ผ๏ผ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ

A: Cold water feels good when I wash my hands.

Alt: I like the feeling of cold water when I wash my hands.

A: Seriously, I can't wait for winter!

Alt (more colloquial): I'm hyped for winter!

Feedback

Great! Just gave a suggestion for an alternative way to say something :)

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sho

July 27, 2022

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Thank you so much!!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ

Talk 6

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!

๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ

I want to speak like a native speaker!!

Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?

You can change whatever you want!

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!

๐Ÿ™

Also, I'd like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.

I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ

A: Cold water feels good when I wash my hands.

This sentence is grammatically fine, but if it were me, I would probably say it in either of these ways: "It feels good when I wash my hands with cold water" or "Washing my hands with cold water feels good".

B: Yes, it does feel nice and cool.

A: Seriously, I can't wait for winter!

B: It's not even summer yet.

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sho

July 27, 2022

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Thank you so much!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ

Talk 6


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Talking 6

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!


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๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ


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I want to speak like a native speaker!!


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Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ


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Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?


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You can change whatever you want!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

๐Ÿ™


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Also, I'd like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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A: Cold water feels good when I wash my hands.


A: Cold water feels good when I wash my hands.

This sentence is grammatically fine, but if it were me, I would probably say it in either of these ways: "It feels good when I wash my hands with cold water" or "Washing my hands with cold water feels good".

A: Cold water feels good when I wash my hands.

Alt: I like the feeling of cold water when I wash my hands.

A: CThe cold water feels good when I wash my hands.

This sounds more natural in the US.

B: Yes, it does feel nice and cool.


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B: Yesah, it does feel nice and cool.

US alternative

A: Seriously, I can't wait for winter!


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A: Seriously, I can't wait for winter!

Alt (more colloquial): I'm hyped for winter!

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B: It's not even summer yet.


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