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April 20, 2023

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Is there a way to say these sentences more naturally?
I'd like to speak English more naturally, and not the way you would find in a textbook. 🙇‍♂️
Since this is casual conversation, there is no need to correct mistakes in capitalization, casing, or forgetting to type a period. Also, sorry for the length.🙏

Part 4

B: idk if I can stay up that long, I’m getting kinda tired lol
What time did you wake up?
A: Omg💀 if I go to bed now, *you’ll be that guy! You ready for this?(pic) I woke up a bit before 7am!
B: I hope not💀💀
wow that’s early😭I’m on summer break
A: Ohhh I’m jealous🥺 are you planning to go somewhere for summer?
B: I was gonna travel to Belgrade but then I got scared because of that monkeypox virus going around so I didn’t💀 but originally I was gonna go to Japan if the borders opened up but they didn’t so I decided on Belgrade instead. But now I’m just going to bars around here lmao
What are your plans this summer?
A: Nothing interesting. Just studied English💀💀 I hope you get to go to those places someday! Do you like bars?
B: LMFAOOOOO good job tho!!😭🫶🏼 I hope so too! Ty! And no not really I just like to drink lol
A: Thankyou!
What kind of alcohol do you like?
B: Mostly white wine and sometimes vodka with red bull I like mixing them together😂 what about u
A: Ohh vodka with redbull sounds good! Lol I don’t drink at all.😅 I mean sometimes I do but it depends on the situation or mood but I try to avoid it as much as possible😬 When I do drink it’s only drinks that look like juice, like Kahula and milk or whiskey and coke so people tease me for it and call me “gay”🙄😂 it’s so dumb considering how diverse the world has gotten🥲 (I’m not gay btw😂)
B: it’s so good you can barely taste the vodka the more redbull you add and you still get the same effect!😂
why’d they call you gay tho it’s not weird to not like drinking😭 oh I hate whiskey so much how can you drink it😖 Also what’s Kahlua?
A: Hahaha that’s nice! Because I don’t drink strong booze, and Kahlua and milk is the most “girly drink”🙄😂
That’s probably because it had Coke in it. It mostly just tastes like Coke. Idk how to say it in English, but I guess it’s like Vodka with Redbull! It tastes almost like coke
It’s a coffee liqueur. Kahlua and milk is like sweet coffee milk. Sweet and tasty
B: Ohhh omg I thought so at first bc Kahlua sounds a bit like the word coffee in arabic I was like how did he know that😳
A: Omg, you’re amazing! I just realized!!! You can speak 3 languages!!😲😲😲 Give me a language😭🤲

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TalkConversation 2-4

Is there a way to say these sentences more naturally?

I'd like to speak English more naturally, and not the way you would find insound like a textbook.

Since this is casual conversation, there is no need to correct mistakes in capitalization, casing, or forgetting to type a period.

Also, sorry for the length.🙏

Part 4

B: idk if I can stay up that long, I’m getting kinda tired lol

What time did you wake up?

A: Omg💀 if I go to bed now, *you’ll be that guy!

You ready for this?

(pic) I woke up a bit before 7am!

B: I hope not💀💀

wow that’s early😭I’m on summer break

A: Ohhh I’m jealous🥺 are you planning to go somewhere for summer?

B: I was gonna travel to Belgrade but then I got scared because of that monkeypox virus going around so I didn’t💀 but originally I was gonna go to Japan if the borders opened up but they didn’t so I decided on Belgrade instead.

But now I’m just going to bars around here lmao

What are your plans this summer?

また、

What are you doing this summer?

A: Nothing interesting.

Just studiedying English💀💀 I hope you get to go to those places some day!

Do you like bars?

B: LMFAOOOOO good job tho!!😭🫶🏼 I hope so too!

Ty!

And no not really I just like to drink lol

A: Thankyou!

What kind of alcohol do you like?

B: Mostly white wine and sometimes vodka with red bull I like mixing them together😂 what about u

A: Ohh vodka with redbull sounds good!

Lol I don’t drink at all.😅 I mean sometimes I do but it depends on the situation or mood but I try to avoid it as much as possible😬 When I do drink it’s only drinks that look like juice, like Kahula and milk or whiskey and coke so people tease me for it and call me “gay”🙄😂 it’s so dumb considering how diverse the world has gotten🥲 (I’m not gay btw😂)

B: it’s so good you can barely taste the vodka the more redbull you add and you still get the same effect!😂

why’d they call you gay tho it’s not weird to not like drinking😭 oh I hate whiskey so much how can you drink it😖 Also what’s Kahlua?

A: Hahaha that’s nice!

Because I don’t drink strong booze, and Kahlua and milk is the most “girly drink”🙄😂

That’s probably because it had Coke in it.

It mostly just tastes like Coke.

Idk how to say it in English, but I guess it’s like Vodka with Redbull!

It tastes almost like coke

It’s a coffee liqueur.

Kahlua and milk is like sweet coffee milk.

Sweet and tasty

B: Ohhh omg I thought so at first bc Kahlua sounds a bit like the word coffee in arabic I was like how did he know that😳

A: Omg, you’re amazing!

I just realized!!!

You can speak 3 languages!!😲😲😲 Give me a language😭🤲

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sho

April 24, 2023

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ありがとうございます!!🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️

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I'd like to speak English more naturally, and not the way you would find in a textbook.


I'd like to speak English more naturally, and not the way you would find insound like a textbook.

🙇‍♂️


Since this is casual conversation, there is no need to correct mistakes in capitalization, casing, or forgetting to type a period.


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Also, sorry for the length.🙏


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Part 4


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B: idk if I can stay up that long, I’m getting kinda tired lol


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What time did you wake up?


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A: Omg💀 if I go to bed now, *you’ll be that guy!


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You ready for this?


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(pic) I woke up a bit before 7am!


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B: I hope not💀💀


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wow that’s early😭I’m on summer break


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A: Ohhh I’m jealous🥺 are you planning to go somewhere for summer?


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B: I was gonna travel to Belgrade but then I got scared because of that monkeypox virus going around so I didn’t💀 but originally I was gonna go to Japan if the borders opened up but they didn’t so I decided on Belgrade instead.


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But now I’m just going to bars around here lmao


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What are your plans this summer?


What are your plans this summer?

また、 What are you doing this summer?

A: Nothing interesting.


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Just studied English💀💀 I hope you get to go to those places someday!


Just studiedying English💀💀 I hope you get to go to those places some day!

Do you like bars?


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B: LMFAOOOOO good job tho!!😭🫶🏼 I hope so too!


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Ty!


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And no not really I just like to drink lol


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A: Thankyou!


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What kind of alcohol do you like?


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B: Mostly white wine and sometimes vodka with red bull I like mixing them together😂 what about u


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A: Ohh vodka with redbull sounds good!


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Lol I don’t drink at all.😅 I mean sometimes I do but it depends on the situation or mood but I try to avoid it as much as possible😬 When I do drink it’s only drinks that look like juice, like Kahula and milk or whiskey and coke so people tease me for it and call me “gay”🙄😂 it’s so dumb considering how diverse the world has gotten🥲 (I’m not gay btw😂)


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B: it’s so good you can barely taste the vodka the more redbull you add and you still get the same effect!😂


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why’d they call you gay tho it’s not weird to not like drinking😭 oh I hate whiskey so much how can you drink it😖 Also what’s Kahlua?


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A: Hahaha that’s nice!


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Because I don’t drink strong booze, and Kahlua and milk is the most “girly drink”🙄😂


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That’s probably because it had Coke in it.


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It mostly just tastes like Coke.


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Idk how to say it in English, but I guess it’s like Vodka with Redbull!


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It tastes almost like coke


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It’s a coffee liqueur.


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Kahlua and milk is like sweet coffee milk.


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Sweet and tasty


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B: Ohhh omg I thought so at first bc Kahlua sounds a bit like the word coffee in arabic I was like how did he know that😳


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A: Omg, you’re amazing!


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I just realized!!!


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You can speak 3 languages!!😲😲😲 Give me a language😭🤲


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