April 20, 2023
Talk 2-3
Is there a way to say these sentences more naturally?
I'd like to speak English more naturally, and not the way you would find in a textbook. 🙇♂️
Since this is casual conversation, there is no need to correct mistakes in capitalization, casing, or forgetting to type a period. Also, sorry for the length.🙏
Part 3
B: Ohh what prefecture are you from?
If you like swimming pools try paying for a swimming pool’s access in a hotel if they have that it’s a lot cheaper than staying a whole night🤣
I didn’t go at all this year too hahaha plus I hate tanning.
I just woke up btw💀💀
A: I live in Saitama Prefecture!
I'll try it!haha But I don't really like swimming pools, so I've never been a swimming pool facility nearby.💀💀
Is there a beach near where you live?
Already?! Will you be able to sleep early today?haha
B: I want to go!
Oh that’s too bad😩I think the reason I like swimming pools might be bc I did swimming before for some time lol
yeahh there are a lot of beaches near the place I live the closest one is like 25-30mins away but I don’t even go there bc it’s too crowded and not that clean💀but the other ones are good.
Hahahshshs it’s already 2pm I didn’t sleep at all lol I might sleep like anytime soon💀when did you wake up?
A: Please come!
Ohhh, I feel u! I love the seas where it's clean and uncrowded! You too?
If you keep doing that, you're gonna end up like this!(pic)
B: Yes! One day!
For sure!! But I don’t like tanning at all because it hurts me so bad for a whole week😭does that happen to you too? HAHAHAHA wait I know this movie💀💀
Yesterday I woke up at 7 (pm) And just ate breakfast like it was still morning 💀
A: I used to love tanning, so whenever I went to the beach, I'd always burn myself. But every time I got too sunburned, I got a fever of about 39 degrees Celsius, my skin peeled off and turned white, oh yellow?haha and that's it all. So I gave up.
Oh, really? It must be me or you in the future.💀Keep it up and maybe someday it'll be time for a real breakfast.💀💀
B: Omggg💀💀Exactly what happens to me lol and my skin is so sensitive to the sun so if I stay too long in the sun some small pimples start to appear on my arms and then just disappear at night it’s so weird💀Fr😭
HAHAHAHA it won’t be that soon at this rate💀
A: Hahah Interesting. I think people like us are more likely to get deceases from sun burn, so be careful to us. haha
It must be some kind of prophecy.💀
You should stay up for another three hours! That would be the same as going to bed really early!
TalkConversation 2-3
Is there a way to say these sentences more naturally?
I'd like to speak English more naturally, and not the way you would find insound like a textbook.
Since this is casual conversation, there is no need to correct mistakes in capitalization, casing, or forgetting to type a period.
Also, sorry for the length.🙏
Part 3
B: Ohh what prefecture are you from?
If you like swimming pools try paying for a swimming pool’s access in a hotel if they have that it’s a lot cheaper than staying a whole night🤣
I didn’t go at all this year too hahaha plus I hate tanning.
I just woke up btw💀💀
A: I live in Saitama Prefecture!
I'll try it!haha But I don't really like swimming pools, so I've never been a swimming pool facility nearbyto one.💀💀
Is there a beach near where you live?
Already?!Really?! You woke up just now?
When we change subjects, we still need to signal when we do.
Will you be able to sleep early today?haha
B: I want to go to the beach!
Oh that’s too bad😩I think the reason I like swimming pools might be bc I didused to swimm ing before for som them all the time lol
yeahh there are a lot of beaches near the place I liveme. the closest one is like 25-30mins away but I don’t nevenr go there bc it’s too crowded and not that clean💀but the other ones are good.
Hahahshshs it’s already 2pm I didn’t sleep at all lol I might sleep like anytime soon💀when did you wake up?
A: Please come!
Ohhh, I feel u!
I love the soceans where it'sthey're clean and uncrowded!
You too?
If you keep doing that, you're gonna end up like this!
B: Yes!
One day!
For sure!!
But I don’t likhate tanning at all because it hurts me so bad for a whole week😭does that happen to you too?
HAHAHAHA wait I know this movie💀💀
Yesterday I woke up at 7 (pm) And just ate breakfast like it was still morning 💀
A: I used to love tanning, so whenever I went to the beach, I'd always burn myself.
But every time I got too sunburned, I gowould get a fever of about 39 degrees Celsius, my skin would peeled off and turned white, oh, wait, yellow? haha and that's it all.
So I gave up.
Oh, really?
It must be me or you in the future.💀Keep it up and maybe someday it'll be time for a real breakfast.💀💀
B: Omggg💀💀Exactly what happens to me lol and my skin is so sensitive to the sun so if I stay too long in the sun some small pimples start to appear on my arms and then just disappear at night it’s so weird💀Fr😭
HAHAHAHA it won’t be that soon at this rate💀
A: Hahah Interesting.
I think people like us are more likely to get deciseases from sun burn, so we have to be careful to us.
haha
It must be some kind of prophecyfate.💀
You should stay up for another three hours!
That would be the same as going to bed really early!
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I'd like to speak English more naturally, and not the way you would find in a textbook. I'd like to speak English more naturally |
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🙇♂️ |
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Since this is casual conversation, there is no need to correct mistakes in capitalization, casing, or forgetting to type a period. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Also, sorry for the length.🙏 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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B: Ohh what prefecture are you from? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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If you like swimming pools try paying for a swimming pool’s access in a hotel if they have that it’s a lot cheaper than staying a whole night🤣 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I didn’t go at all this year too hahaha plus I hate tanning. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I just woke up btw💀💀 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A: I live in Saitama Prefecture! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I'll try it!haha But I don't really like swimming pools, so I've never been a swimming pool facility nearby.💀💀 I'll try it!haha But I don't really like swimming pools, so I've never been |
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Is there a beach near where you live? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Already?!
When we change subjects, we still need to signal when we do. |
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Will you be able to sleep early today?haha This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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B: I want to go! B: I want to go to the beach! |
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Oh that’s too bad😩I think the reason I like swimming pools might be bc I did swimming before for some time lol Oh that’s too bad😩I think the reason I like swimming pools might be bc I |
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yeahh there are a lot of beaches near the place I live the closest one is like 25-30mins away but I don’t even go there bc it’s too crowded and not that clean💀but the other ones are good. yeahh there are a lot of beaches near |
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Hahahshshs it’s already 2pm I didn’t sleep at all lol I might sleep like anytime soon💀when did you wake up? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A: Please come! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Ohhh, I feel u! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I love the seas where it's clean and uncrowded! I love the |
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You too? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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If you keep doing that, you're gonna end up like this! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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B: Yes! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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One day! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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For sure!! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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But I don’t like tanning at all because it hurts me so bad for a whole week😭does that happen to you too? But I |
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HAHAHAHA wait I know this movie💀💀 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Yesterday I woke up at 7 (pm) And just ate breakfast like it was still morning 💀 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A: I used to love tanning, so whenever I went to the beach, I'd always burn myself. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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But every time I got too sunburned, I got a fever of about 39 degrees Celsius, my skin peeled off and turned white, oh yellow?haha and that's it all. But every time I got too sunburned, I |
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So I gave up. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Oh, really? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It must be me or you in the future.💀Keep it up and maybe someday it'll be time for a real breakfast.💀💀 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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B: Omggg💀💀Exactly what happens to me lol and my skin is so sensitive to the sun so if I stay too long in the sun some small pimples start to appear on my arms and then just disappear at night it’s so weird💀Fr😭 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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HAHAHAHA it won’t be that soon at this rate💀 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A: Hahah Interesting. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I think people like us are more likely to get deceases from sun burn, so be careful to us. I think people like us are more likely to get d |
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haha This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It must be some kind of prophecy.💀 It must be some kind of |
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You should stay up for another three hours! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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That would be the same as going to bed really early! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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