April 20, 2023
Talk 2-2
Is there a way to say these sentences more naturally?
I'd like to speak English more naturally, and not the way you would find in a textbook. 🙇♂️
Since this is casual conversation, there is no need to correct mistakes in capitalization, casing, or forgetting to type a period. Also, sorry for the length.🙏
Part 2
B: HAHAHAHAHA thank u thank u lol😩 What time is it there??
A: It's 1:30pm here!
B: Ohh 8-hour difference😳 some of my neighbors are starting to wake up and I still haven’t slept lmaoo
A: Yeah, your neighbors are right. gagyahagagya Aren't you sleepy? What time did you go to bed last night?
B: Nooo it’s sunday though😭who wakes up at this time on a SUNDAY lol
I do feel a bit sleepy ngl I probably will go to bed in the next 10-15 minutes
I went to bed at 4~ something last night so💀understandable hahaha
A: True🤣🤣 It wasn't even 6:00 yet.🤣
B: Righttt😂 that’s weird maybe they’re going to the beach or doing a roadtrip or something.
A: Yeah, that's understandable💀💀 But it's a vicious cycle!(￣◇￣;) I went to bed around 4:00 a.m. last night, though.jajagayaja
Wanna go too?
B: I knowww😩I’m gonna try to fix my sleeping schedule soon. Hahahahahaha
did you really.
Meh the beach not really I like swimming in pools more but a roadtrip doesn’t sound like a bad idea tbh😩
A: I'm in the vicious cycle too. Jagajyaga
Let's fix it together!😇👼
Omg, you're just awesome!!
B: We’ll try our best😩!!
Why awesome😭
What about u bhsjdjsj Do you like going to the beach often?
A: Yes! We will!
Just because. hahah I feel like people who go to a swimming pool are more health conscious.
Yeah, I like going to the beach! But my prefecture doesn't have a sea, so I can't go there at all. I only go a few times in the summer. But this year I didn't go at all.🤣
B: Ohh what prefecture are you from?
If you like swimming pools try paying for a swimming pool’s access in a hotel if they have that it’s a lot cheaper than staying a whole night🤣
I didn’t go at all this year too hahaha plus I hate tanning.
I just woke up btw💀💀
Talk 2-2
また、このの方が自然です。
Conversation 2-2
Is there a way to say these sentences more naturally?
I'd like to speak English more naturally, and not the way you would find insound like a textbook.
Since this is casual conversation, there is no need to correct mistakes in capitalization, casing, or forgetting to type a period.
Also, sorry for the length.🙏
Part 2
B: HAHAHAHAHA thank u thank u lol😩 What time is it there?
?
A: It's 1:30pm here!
B: Ohh (an) 8-hour difference😳 some of my neighbors are starting to wake up and I still haven’t slept lmaoo
A: Yeah, your neighbors arhave the right idea.
The original sentence sounds kind of strange in this context.
また、
A: Yeah, your neighbors have it right.
gagyahagagya Aren't you sleepy?
What time did you go to bed last night?
B: Nooo it’s sunday though😭who wakes up at this time on a SUNDAY lol
I do feel a bit sleepy ngl I probably will go to bed in the next 10-15 minutes
I went to bed at 4~ something last night so💀 it's understandable hahaha
A: True🤣🤣 It wasn't even 6:00 yet.🤣
B: Righttt😂 that’s weird maybe they’re going to the beach or doing a roadtrip or something.
A: Yeah, that's understandable💀💀 But it's a vicious cycle!
(￣◇￣;) I went to bed around 4:00 a.m. last night, though.jajagayaja
Wanna gostay up, too?
ちょっと分かりにくいので、いい添削だと分かりません。
Hahahahahaha
didAre you really.gonna go?
Meh the beach, not really. I like swimming in pools morebetter but a roadtrip doesn’t sound like a bad idea tbh😩
This sentence is hard to read without commas or periods.
A: I'm in thea vicious cycle, too.
Jagajyaga
Let's fix it together!😇👼
Omg, you're justso awesome!!
このの方が自然です。
B: We’ll try our best😩!!
アメリカでは、ちょっと変そうです。
Why awesome😭
What about u bhsjdjsj Do you like going to the beach oftena lot?
"Do you like going to the beach often?" → sounds like a textbook
A: Yesah!
We willLet's go together!
Just because.
hahah I feel like people who go to a swimming pool are more health conscious.
Yeah, I like going to the beach!
But my prefecture doesn't have a seabeaches, so I can't go there at all.
I only go a few times during the summer.
But this year I didn't go at alleven once.🤣
B: Ohh what prefecture aredo you fromlive in?
If you like swimming pools try paying for a swimming pool’s access in a hotel if they have that it’s a lot cheaper than staying a whole night🤣
I didn’t go at all this year too hahaha plus I hate tanning.
I just woke up btw💀💀
Feedback
よく出来ました！
April 24, 2023
ありがとうございます！！🙇♂️🙏
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Talk 2-2 Talk 2-2 また、このの方が自然です。 Conversation 2-2 |
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Is there a way to say these sentences more naturally? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I'd like to speak English more naturally, and not the way you would find in a textbook. I'd like to speak English more naturally |
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🙇♂️ |
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Since this is casual conversation, there is no need to correct mistakes in capitalization, casing, or forgetting to type a period. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Also, sorry for the length.🙏 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Part 2 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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B: HAHAHAHAHA thank u thank u lol😩 What time is it there? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A: It's 1:30pm here! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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B: Ohh 8-hour difference😳 some of my neighbors are starting to wake up and I still haven’t slept lmaoo B: Ohh (an) 8-hour difference😳 some of my neighbors are starting to wake up and I still haven’t slept lmaoo |
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A: Yeah, your neighbors are right. A: Yeah, your neighbors The original sentence sounds kind of strange in this context. また、 A: Yeah, your neighbors have it right. |
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gagyahagagya Aren't you sleepy? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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What time did you go to bed last night? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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B: Nooo it’s sunday though😭who wakes up at this time on a SUNDAY lol This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I do feel a bit sleepy ngl I probably will go to bed in the next 10-15 minutes This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I went to bed at 4~ something last night so💀understandable hahaha I went to bed at 4~ something last night so💀 it's understandable hahaha |
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A: True🤣🤣 It wasn't even 6:00 yet.🤣 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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B: Righttt😂 that’s weird maybe they’re going to the beach or doing a roadtrip or something. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A: Yeah, that's understandable💀💀 But it's a vicious cycle! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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(￣◇￣;) I went to bed around 4:00 a.m. last night, though.jajagayaja This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Wanna go too? Wanna ちょっと分かりにくいので、いい添削だと分かりません。 |
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B: I knowww😩I’m gonna try to fix my sleeping schedule soon. |
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Hahahahahaha This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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did you really.
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Meh the beach not really I like swimming in pools more but a roadtrip doesn’t sound like a bad idea tbh😩 Meh the beach, not really. I like swimming in pools This sentence is hard to read without commas or periods. |
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A: I'm in the vicious cycle too. A: I'm in |
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Jagajyaga This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Let's fix it together!😇👼 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Omg, you're just awesome!! Omg, you're このの方が自然です。 |
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B: We’ll try our best😩!! B: We’ll try our best😩!! アメリカでは、ちょっと変そうです。 |
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Why awesome😭 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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What about u bhsjdjsj Do you like going to the beach often? What about u bhsjdjsj Do you like going to the beach "Do you like going to the beach often?" → sounds like a textbook |
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A: Yes! A: Ye |
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We will!
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Just because. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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hahah I feel like people who go to a swimming pool are more health conscious. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Yeah, I like going to the beach! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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But my prefecture doesn't have a sea, so I can't go there at all. But my prefecture doesn't have |
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I only go a few times in the summer. I only go a few times during the summer. |
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But this year I didn't go at all.🤣 But this year I didn't go |
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B: Ohh what prefecture are you from? B: Ohh what prefecture |
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If you like swimming pools try paying for a swimming pool’s access in a hotel if they have that it’s a lot cheaper than staying a whole night🤣 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I didn’t go at all this year too hahaha plus I hate tanning. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I just woke up btw💀💀 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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