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April 20, 2023

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Is there a way to say these sentences more naturally?
I'd like to speak English more naturally, and not the way you would find in a textbook. 🙇‍♂️
Since this is casual conversation, there is no need to correct mistakes in capitalization, casing, or forgetting to type a period. Also, sorry for the length.🙏

Part 1
B: Hello!
A: Hiiiii!
B: I'm Yasmin! nice to meet you!!!
A: I'm Shou. Nice to meet you too!
B: How old are you Sho?😊
A: I'm 24😂 You thought I was about 8 years old? lolll
B: JAJSJS NO😭 I just ask everyone how old they are when I meet them😭
A: I see😂 Anyway, what's "JAJSJS"??
B: Oh it’s kind of a way of laughing used in texting hahaha It’s like to express excessive laughter
A: Ohhh! I see!! I've learned something new! Thank you!! JAJSJS
B: Hahahaha it’s not always the same as the one I used😂 you just kinda tap random letters on the keyboard and it’ll look like you’re laughing on texts lol
A: Ohhhh! I see!! Then, vjkmdaj@gngdtgm how's this? 😭
Omg, wait. It's 5am there! You woke up early? Or haven't you slept yet?💀💀
B: That works too😭 I thought it was a whole email adress at first😭
I haven’t slept yet💀
A: Omg.🤣
Whyyyyyy 🧛‍♀️
B: Idk I was kinda studying japanese on anki on pc at first but then I just kept watching edits from the explore page on instagram💀
A: Ohhh great job!! Only the first!💀 But I kinda feel u.
B: HAHAHAHAHA thank u thank u lol😩 What time is it there??

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Talk 2-1

また、

Conversation 2-1

Is there a way to say these sentences more naturally?

I'd like to speak English more naturally, and not the way you would find insound like a textbook.

Since this is casual conversation, there is no need to correct mistakes in capitalization, casing, or forgetting to type a period.

Also, sorry for the length.🙏

Part 1

B: Hello!

A: Hiiiii!

B: I'm Yasmin!

nice to meet you!!!

A: I'm Shou.

Nice to meet you too!

B: How old are you Sho?😊

A: I'm 24😂 You thought I was about 8 years old?

lolll

B: JAJSJS NOHahaha! No! 😭 I just ask everyone how old they are when I first meet them😭

アメリカでは、この質問はとても珍しいです。

A: I see😂 Anyway, what's "JAJSJS"?

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B: Oh it’s kind of a way of laughing used in texting hahaha It’s like used to express excessive laughter

初めて聞きました。

A: Ohhh!

I see!!

I've learned something new!

Thank you!!

JAJSJS

B: Hahahaha it’s not always the same as the one I used😂 you just kinda tap random letters on the keyboard and it’ll look like you’re laughing oin texts lol

A: Ohhhh!

I see!!

Then, vjkmdaj@gngdtgm how's this?

😭

Omg, wait.

It's 5am there!

You woke up early?

Or haven't you slept yet?💀💀

また、

Or you haven't slept yet?💀💀

B: That works too😭 I thought it was a whole email adress at first😭

I haven’t slept yet💀

A: Omg.🤣

Whyyyyyy 🧛‍♀️

B: Idk I was kinda studying jJapanese onusing anki on the pc at first but then I just kept watching edits from the explore page on instagram💀

A: Ohhh great job!!

Only the first thing you said!💀 But I kinda feel u.

B: HAHAHAHAHA thank u thank u lol😩 What time is it there?

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sho

April 24, 2023

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ありがとうございます!!🙇‍♂️🙏

A: Ohhh great job!!


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Is there a way to say these sentences more naturally?


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I'd like to speak English more naturally, and not the way you would find in a textbook.


I'd like to speak English more naturally, and not the way you would find insound like a textbook.

🙇‍♂️


Since this is casual conversation, there is no need to correct mistakes in capitalization, casing, or forgetting to type a period.


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Also, sorry for the length.🙏


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Part 1


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B: Hello!


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A: Hiiiii!


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B: I'm Yasmin!


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nice to meet you!!!


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A: I'm Shou.


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Nice to meet you too!


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B: How old are you Sho?😊


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A: I'm 24😂 You thought I was about 8 years old?


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lolll


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B: JAJSJS NO😭 I just ask everyone how old they are when I meet them😭


B: JAJSJS NOHahaha! No! 😭 I just ask everyone how old they are when I first meet them😭

アメリカでは、この質問はとても珍しいです。

A: I see😂 Anyway, what's "JAJSJS"?


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B: Oh it’s kind of a way of laughing used in texting hahaha It’s like to express excessive laughter


B: Oh it’s kind of a way of laughing used in texting hahaha It’s like used to express excessive laughter

初めて聞きました。

A: Ohhh!


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I see!!


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I've learned something new!


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Thank you!!


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JAJSJS


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B: Hahahaha it’s not always the same as the one I used😂 you just kinda tap random letters on the keyboard and it’ll look like you’re laughing on texts lol


B: Hahahaha it’s not always the same as the one I used😂 you just kinda tap random letters on the keyboard and it’ll look like you’re laughing oin texts lol

A: Ohhhh!


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I see!!


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Then, vjkmdaj@gngdtgm how's this?


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😭


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Omg, wait.


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It's 5am there!


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You woke up early?


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Or haven't you slept yet?💀💀


Or haven't you slept yet?💀💀

また、 Or you haven't slept yet?💀💀

B: That works too😭 I thought it was a whole email adress at first😭


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I haven’t slept yet💀


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A: Omg.🤣


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Whyyyyyy 🧛‍♀️


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B: Idk I was kinda studying japanese on anki on pc at first but then I just kept watching edits from the explore page on instagram💀


B: Idk I was kinda studying jJapanese onusing anki on the pc at first but then I just kept watching edits from the explore page on instagram💀

Only the first!💀 But I kinda feel u.


Only the first thing you said!💀 But I kinda feel u.

B: HAHAHAHAHA thank u thank u lol😩 What time is it there?


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