April 12, 2023
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Is there a way to say these that sounds more natural?
I'd like to speak English more naturally and not the kind you would find in a textbook. 🙇♂️
Since this is casual conversation, there is no need to correct mistakes in capitalization, lower case, or forgetting to type a period!
A: Hiii! Do you study Japanese?😺
B: Hi！I am trying to, will you help me?
A: Of course!! I can help you! But I'm no expert, so I don't know if this will help with exams or anything, but if you just want to fix your Japanese to sound natural, I can help!
B: thank you I appreciate it!
A: Anytime!😄
B: thank you!
A: Yea!
A: Hiii happy new year!!🥳🥳
B: happy new year!!
A: Do you keep studying Japanese? 🥺
B: I stopped 😿
A: Hahahaha then I hope you'll restart someday!^ ^
B: hopefully!!
A: Btw what do you do in your free time these days?
B: i watch movies
A: Ohhh, did you find anything good?
B: yes
A: Tell me your favorites!
B: Eternal sunshine of the spotless mind, another round, as above, so below, everything everywhere all at once.
A: This is only one that I have seen!(pic) I'll watch the others! Thanks for sharing!! I especially wanna watch this one,
too.(pic)😩
B: Did you like it? it was so good!! I hope you get to watch it soon
A: Hmm, so so?lmao What did you like about it? I love A24, so I bet I'd love it!!!
B: I liked the concept of the film overall, the fact that we need our memories or we’ll make the same mistakes. what are some of your favorite films by them?
A: Oh, I see... I'll watch it again! There's a lot!! Midsommar, A Prayer Before Dawn, Hereditary, Moonlight, Ex Machina, Mid90s, etc. lol Have you seen any of them?
B: Out of the ones you mentioned I’ve only watched midsommar
A: How was it? lol
B: I had to google what the ending meant 😭
A: Hahahaha same here😂 I don't understand a lot of A24 films, but many of them I wanna see again fsr. What's Helya's score? lol
B: me too I want to rewatch some of them! what do you mean by score?
A: How would you rate Midsummer out of 10?
B: hmmm maybe 8/10. what about you?
A: 7/10! You liked it more lol Btw I saw this movie the other day. It’s an Arab movie, right?(pic) I'm glad I saw it, but it was heartbreaking. Have you seen it?
B: I haven’t seen it!
A: I recommend it! Do you watch Arabic films often?
B: no I don’t
A: Why
B: I don’t know I never really watched Arabic films
A: Oh, really. Then have you seen any Japanese movies?
B: yes I have
A: Ohhh, was there anything you liked?
B: I can’t think of a specific movie but I did enjoy the ones I watched
A: Glad to hear that! Lemme know if you remembered!^ ^ How do you often watch movies btw?
B: i will!! I try to watch a movie a day 😭
A: You're a movie lover! Do you keep a list or something? I want to see!
B: I use an app called letterboxd. I log in the movies I watched with their reviews and have a watch list there!
A: Downloaded it! Follow me if you don't mind!😭
B: I did!!
A: I'm getting excited!😂There's a lot more to my liking than I thought.
B: I can’t lie this app is like an addiction
A: Hahahaha I have a lot to talk about them! But I haven't seen any of the recent ones, so I'll take yours as a reference! lol But I love NOPE!!! And in Japan, most people rates Top Gun Maverick about 5 stars, but you 3.5. looool Was it normal? lol
B: add them to your watchlist!! I didn’t like the cliche ending but the movie overall was enjoyable
A: Yess! But it's late here, so I'll do it tomorrow! Please see them if I do it.😎 I see! You love twisting ending?
B: I will check tomorrow!!
yes and sad ones!!
A: Thank you! ^ ^ I see! Also I think you have orphan 2, but not orphan 1! You don't grade the movie you saw before?
B: I have this stupid rule where I don’t log in the movies I don’t know the date of when I’ve watched them
A: Plz improve that rule!😭 But I kinda feel u. Time is precious.
B: I can’t I like my account to look clean 😭
A: Right🤣 Yours is very easy to check. Do you get annoyed if your room or something isn't tidy and clean then?
B: i don’t get annoyed but I’d prefer it to be clean
A: Maybe you're super kind. Have you ever gotten angry? lol
B: yes I have
A: Like? What made you angry?
B: being mistreated!!
A: What. By who? Also what did they do to you?
B: classmates. Let's just say a lot happened.
A: Haha I see. How angry did you get? Like, "You son of a bitch!"?
Talk 1
Is there a way to say these that soundsentences more naturally?
I'd like to speak English more naturally and not the kind of English you would find in a textbook.
Since this is casual conversation, there is no need to correct mistakes infor capitalization, lower case, or forgetting to type a period!punctuation.
わかりました。
A: Hiii!
Do you study Japanese?😺
B: Hi！I am trying to, will you help me?
A: Of course!!
I can help you!
But I'm no expert, so I don't know if this will help with exams or anything, but if you just want to fix your Japanese to sound natural, I can help!
B: thank you I appreciate it!
A: Anytime!😄
B: thank you!
A: Yea!
A: Hiii happy new year!!🥳🥳
B: happy new year!!
A: DoAre you keepstill studying Japanese?
B: I stopped 😿
A: Hahahaha then I hope you'll restart again someday!^ ^
B: hopefully!!
A: Btw what do you do in your free time these days?
B: i watch movies
A: Ohhh, did you find anything good?
B: yes
A: Tell me your favorites!
B: Eternal sunshine of the spotless mind, another round, as above, so below, everything everywhere all at once.
A: This is the only one that I have seen!
(pic) I'll watch the others!
Thanks for sharing!!
I especially wanna watch this one,
too.
B: Did you like it?
it was so good!!
I hope you get to watch it soon
A: Hmm, so so?lmao What did you like about it?
I love A24, so I bet I'd love it!!!
B: I liked the concept of the film overall, the fact that we need our memories or we’ll make the same mistakes.
what are some of your favorite films by them?
A: Oh, I see...
I'll watch it again!
There's a lot!!
Midsommar, A Prayer Before Dawn, Hereditary, Moonlight, Ex Machina, Mid90s, etc.
lol Have you seen any of them?
B: Out of the ones you've mentioned, I’ve only watched midsommar
A: How was it?
lol
B: I had to google what the ending meant 😭
A: Hahahaha same here😂 I don't understand a lot of A24 films, but many of them I wanna see again fsrI wanna see a lot of them again for sure.
What's Helya's score?
lol
B: me too I want to rewatch some of them!
what do you mean by score?
A: How would you rate Midsummer out of 10?
B: hmmm maybe 8/10.
what about you?
A: 7/10!
You liked it more lol Btw I saw this movie the other day.
It’s an Arab movie, right?
(pic) I'm glad I saw it, but it was heartbreaking.
Have you seen it?
B: I haven’t seen it!
A: I recommend it!
Do you watch Arabic films often?
B: no I don’t
A: Why
B: I don’t know. I've never really watched Arabic films.
I added the periods because it's important to know when to take a breath while speaking.
A: Oh, really.
Then have you seen any Japanese movies?
B: yes I have
A: Ohhh, was there anything you liked?
B: I can’t think of a specific movie but I did enjoy the ones I watched
A: Glad to hear that!
Lemme know if you remembered which ones!^ ^ How do you often watch movies btw?
B: i will!!
I try to watch a movie a day 😭
A: You're a movie lover!
Do you keep a list or something?
I want to see!
B: I use an app called letterboxd.
I log in the movies I watched with their reviews and have a watch list there!
A: Downloaded it!
Follow me if you don't mind!😭
B: I did!!
A: I'm getting excited!😂There's a lot more to my liking than I thought.
B: I can’t lie t. This app is like an addictionve.
A: Hahahaha I have a lot to talksay about them!
But I haven't seen any of the recent ones, so I'll take yours as a reference!
lol But I love NOPE!!!
And in Japan, most people rates Top Gun Maverick at about 5 stars, but you gave it a 3.5. looool Was iIs that normal?
lol
B: add them to your watchlist!!
I didn’t like the cliche ending but the movie overall was enjoyable
A: Yess!
But it's late here, so I'll do it tomorrow!
Please see them if I do it.😎 I see!
I have no idea what you're trying to say here ...
YDo you love twistinged endings?
B: I will check tomorrow!!
yes and sad ones!!
A: Thank you!
^ ^ I see!
Also I think you have orphan 2, but not orphan 1!
You don't grade the movie you saw before?
B: I have this stupid rule where I don’t log in the movies I don’t know the date of when I’ve watched them
A: Plz improve that rule!😭 But I kinda feel u.
Time is precious.
B: I can’t I like my account to look clean 😭
A: Right🤣 Yours is very easy to check.
Do you get annoyed if your room or something isn't tidy and clean then?
B: i don’t get annoyed but I’d prefer it to be clean
A: Maybe you're super kind.
Have you ever gotten angry?
lol
B: yes I have
A: Like when?
What made you angry?
B: being mistreated!!
A: What.
By whom?
Also what did they do to you?
B: classmates.
Let's just say a lot happened.
A: Haha I see.
How angry did you get?
Like, "You son of a bitch!
"?
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April 15, 2023
いつも勉強になります！ありがとうございます！！🙇♂️
IsAre there amore natural ways to say these that sounds more natural lines below?
From context it's clear "these" refers to the sentences that follow, but I think it sounds a bit better if you're more specific here.
Since this is casual conversation, there is no need to correct mistakes in capitalization, lower casecasing, or forgetting to type a period!
"Lower-case" is usually used as an adjective.
A: Of course!!
Other options:
Sure!
I'd love to!
Definitely!
I can help you!
I think a lot of people would omit the "you" and say something like "I can help!" or even omit this sentence entirely since you already said "Of course!"
But I'm no expert, so I don't know if this willI can help with exams or anything, but if you just want to fix your Japanese to sound natural, I can help!
B: thank you!
I think in most conversations B probably wouldn't say "thank you" twice in a row.
A: DoAre you keepstill studying Japanese?
A: Ohhh, didhave you fiound anything good?
"Did you find anything good?" is grammatically fine but it sounds like you're asking about an event that's happened completely in the past, whereas using "have you found anything good?" sounds like a question about something that might have happened more recently.
A: This is only one that I have seenOut of those I've only seen one!
Lemme know if you remembered!^ ^ How often do you often watch movies btw?
I log in the movies I watched, writh theire reviews, and have a watch list there!
I'm guessing you mean to use "log."
verb
1.
enter (an incident or fact) in the log of a ship or aircraft or in another systematic record.
"the incident has to be logged"
"Login" would normally be used when you "login" to a website or something.
And in Japan, most people rates Top Gun Maverick about 5 stars, but you rated it 3.5. looool Was it normaljust okay?
You love twisting endingendings with a twist?
Another common phrase is "plot twist."
You doidn't grade the movie you saw before?
B: I have this stupid rule where I don’t log in the movies I don’t know the date of when I’ve watched them
April 13, 2023
Thank you so much!!🙇♂️ I’ve learned a lot!!
Talk 1
Is there a way to saymake these that sounds more natural?
I'd like to speak English more naturally, and not the kind you would find in a textbook.
🙇♂️
Since this is casual conversation, there is no need to correct mistakes in capitalization, lower case, or forgetting to type a period!
A: Hiii!
Do you study Japanese?😺
B: Hi！ I am trying to, will you help me?
Too many spaces.
A: Of course!!
I can help you!
But I'm no expert, so I don't know if this will help with exams or anything, but if you just want to fixmake your Japanese to sound more natural, I can help!
B: thank you I appreciate it!
A: Anytime!😄
B: thank you!
A: Yea!
A: Hiii happy new year!!🥳🥳
B: happy new year!!
A: DoAre you keepstill studying Japanese?
🥺
B: I stopped 😿
A: Hahahaha then I hope you'll restart again someday!^ ^
"Restart" is almost always used when referring to technology (ex. I'll restart my computer)
B: hopefully!!
A: Btw what do you do in your free time these days?
B: i watch movies
A: Ohhh, did you find anything good?
B: yes
A: Tell me your favorites!
Can also say "What are your favorites?"
B: Eternal sunshine of the spotless mind, another round, as above, so below, everything everywhere all at once.
I know you said to not find capitalization, but just thought I'd let you know that movie titles are capitalized (minus certain words like; the, in, a, etc.)
After the first comma, I don't understand what is trying to be said.
A: This is only one that I ha've seen!
When texting, most people exclusively use contractions.
(pic) I'll watch the others!
Thanks for sharing!!
I especially wanna watch this one,
too.
Incomplete sentence.
(pic)😩
B: Did you like it?
it was so good!!
I hope you get to watch it soon
A: Hmm, so so?lmao What did you like about it?
I think lmao is out of place in this context
I love A24, so I bet Iyou'd love it!!!
B: I liked the concept of the film overall, the fact that we need our memories or we’ll make the same mistakes.
"the fact that we need our memories or we’ll make the same mistakes." doesn't make sense, but that's probably just because I lack the background knowledge of the film.
what are some of your favorite films by them?
A: Oh, I see...
Is that a title of a film? If not, I would delete it.
I'll watch it again!
There's a lot!!
Midsommar, A Prayer Before Dawn, Hereditary, Moonlight, Ex Machina, Mid90s, etc.
lol Have you seen any of them?
It's hard to say if the use of "lol" is natural or not, as a third-party it feels like it might work, but at the same time not. If you wanted to lighten/brighten the mood, then I think lol can work.
B: Out of the ones you mentioned I’ve only watched midsommar
A: How was it?
lolIt was good (/bad/okay)
Didn't answer question.
B: Though, I had to google what the ending meant 😭
Had to add "though" because of correction to earlier sentence.
lol
Feels out of place, plus doesn't answer question.
B: me too I want to rewatch some of them!
Had to modify since I altered the previous sentence.
what do you mean by score?
A: How would you rate Midsummer out of 10?
B: hmmm maybe 8/10.
what about you?
A: 7/10!
You liked it more lol Btw I saw this movie the other day.
It’s an Arab movie, right?
(pic) I'm glad I saw it, but it was heartbreaking.
Have you seen it?
B: I haven’t seen it!
A: I recommendYou should watch it!
Your original text was good, but this way it sounds more natural and casual.
Do you watch a lot of Arabic films often?
Considering you've been texting really casually so far, this would be more natural. Though the sentence you wrote was natural, but in a formal sense, if that makes sense.
B: no, I don’t
A: Why
B: I don’t know I never really watched Arabic films
A: Oh, really.?
Then have you seen any Japanese movies?
B: yes, I have
A: Ohhh, was there anything you liked?
B: I can’t think of a specific movie but I did enjoy the ones I watched
A: Glad to hear that!
Lemme know if you remembered!^ ^ How often do you often watch movies btw?
B: i will!!
I try to watch a movie a day 😭
A: You're a movie lover!
Do you keep a list or something?
I want to see!
B: I use an app called letterboxd.
I log in the movies I watched with their reviews and have a watch list there!.
You don't need an exclamation mark here. On a side note, you and your friend use a lot of exclamation marks. That's not a bad thing, though to me it's a little weird due to the frequency.
A: Downloaded it!
Follow me if you don't mind!😭
B: I did!!
A: I'm getting excited!😂There's a lot more to my liking than I thought.
B: I can’t lie this app is like an addiction
A: Hahahaha I have a lot to talk about them!
What is "them" referring to? It's unclear.
But I haven't seen any of the recent ones, so I'll take yours as a reference!
lol But I love NOPE!!!
Unclear what your message is.
And in Japan, most people rates Top Gun Maverick about 5 stars, but you 3.5. looool Was it normal?
lol
No point in it being there, doesn't add anything.
B: add them to your watchlist!!
I didn’t like the cliche ending, but the movie overall was enjoyable
A: YessGlad you liked it!
"Yess!" doesn't communicate much.
But it's late here, so I'll do it tomorrow!
Please see them if I do it.😎 I see!
If they do what? And what do they see?
You love twisting endings?
B: I will check tomorrow!!
yes and, sad ones!!
A: Thank you!
^ ^ I see!
Also I think you have orphan 2, but not orphan 1!
You don't grade the movie you saw before?
B: I have this stupid rule where I don’t log in the movies I don’t know the date of when I’ve watched them
A: Plz improve that rule!😭 But I kinda feel u.
Time is precious.
B: I can’t I like my account to look clean 😭
A: Right🤣 Yours is very easy to check.
Do you get annoyed if your room or something isn't tidy and clean then?
B: i don’t get annoyed but I’d prefer it to be clean
A: Maybe you're just super kind.
"Just" might seem like a filler word that doesn't do anything, but it actually does a lot in this instance. Originally, you said "Maybe you're super kind." The maybe makes the "super kind" section be interpreted as a guess. Like you are unsure if they are super kind. By adding the "just" the stress is taken off "maybe" and moved to "just", making the new meaning a lot nicer.
Have you ever gotten angry?
lol
B: yes I have
A: LikeWhen?
What made you angry?
B: being mistreated!!
A: What.
By who?
Also, what did they do to you?
B: classmates.
Let's just say a lot happened.
A: HahaOh, I see.
Avoid using "haha". It makes you/your friend seem insensitive in this case.
How angry did you get?
Like, "You son of a bitch!
"?.
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Lovely chat you guys had!
April 13, 2023
Thank you so much!!🙇♂️
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A: 7/10! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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You liked it more lol Btw I saw this movie the other day. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It’s an Arab movie, right? This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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(pic) I'm glad I saw it, but it was heartbreaking. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Have you seen it? This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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B: I haven’t seen it! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A: I recommend it! A: Your original text was good, but this way it sounds more natural and casual. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Do you watch Arabic films often? Do you watch a lot of Arabic films Considering you've been texting really casually so far, this would be more natural. Though the sentence you wrote was natural, but in a formal sense, if that makes sense. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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B: no I don’t B: no, I don’t This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A: Why This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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B: I don’t know I never really watched Arabic films This sentence has been marked as perfect! B: I don’t know. I've never really watched Arabic films. I added the periods because it's important to know when to take a breath while speaking. |
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Then have you seen any Japanese movies? This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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B: yes I have B: yes, I have This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A: Ohhh, was there anything you liked? This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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B: I can’t think of a specific movie but I did enjoy the ones I watched This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A: Glad to hear that! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Lemme know if you remembered!^ ^ How do you often watch movies btw? Lemme know if you remember Lemme know if you remembered!^ ^ How often do you Lemme know if you remember |
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B: i will!! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I try to watch a movie a day 😭 This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A: You're a movie lover! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Do you keep a list or something? This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I want to see! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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B: I use an app called letterboxd. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I log in the movies I watched with their reviews and have a watch list there! I log in the movies I watched with their reviews and have a watch list there You don't need an exclamation mark here. On a side note, you and your friend use a lot of exclamation marks. That's not a bad thing, though to me it's a little weird due to the frequency. I log I'm guessing you mean to use "log." verb 1. enter (an incident or fact) in the log of a ship or aircraft or in another systematic record. "the incident has to be logged" "Login" would normally be used when you "login" to a website or something. I log |
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A: Downloaded it! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Follow me if you don't mind!😭 This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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B: I did!! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A: I'm getting excited!😂There's a lot more to my liking than I thought. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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B: I can’t lie this app is like an addiction This sentence has been marked as perfect! B: I can’t lie |
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A: Hahahaha I have a lot to talk about them! A: Hahahaha I have a lot to talk about them! What is "them" referring to? It's unclear. A: Hahahaha I have a lot to |
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But I haven't seen any of the recent ones, so I'll take yours as a reference! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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lol But I love NOPE!!! lol But I love NOPE!!! Unclear what your message is. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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And in Japan, most people rates Top Gun Maverick about 5 stars, but you 3.5. looool Was it normal? And in Japan, most people rate And in Japan, most people rate And in Japan, most people rate |
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B: add them to your watchlist!! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I didn’t like the cliche ending but the movie overall was enjoyable I didn’t like the cliche ending, but the movie overall was enjoyable This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A: Yess! A: "Yess!" doesn't communicate much. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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But it's late here, so I'll do it tomorrow! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Please see them if I do it.😎 I see! Please see them if I do it.😎 I see! If they do what? And what do they see? Please see them if I do I have no idea what you're trying to say here ... |
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B: I will check tomorrow!! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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yes and sad ones!! yes This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A: Thank you! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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^ ^ I see! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Also I think you have orphan 2, but not orphan 1! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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You don't grade the movie you saw before? This sentence has been marked as perfect! You d This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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B: I have this stupid rule where I don’t log in the movies I don’t know the date of when I’ve watched them This sentence has been marked as perfect! B: I have this stupid rule where I don’t log B: I have this stupid rule where I don’t log |
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A: Plz improve that rule!😭 But I kinda feel u. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Time is precious. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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B: I can’t I like my account to look clean 😭 This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A: Right🤣 Yours is very easy to check. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Do you get annoyed if your room or something isn't tidy and clean then? This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A: Maybe you're super kind. A: Maybe you're just super kind. "Just" might seem like a filler word that doesn't do anything, but it actually does a lot in this instance. Originally, you said "Maybe you're super kind." The maybe makes the "super kind" section be interpreted as a guess. Like you are unsure if they are super kind. By adding the "just" the stress is taken off "maybe" and moved to "just", making the new meaning a lot nicer. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Have you ever gotten angry? This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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lol This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A: Like? A: A: Like when? |
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What made you angry? This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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B: being mistreated!! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A: What. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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By who? This sentence has been marked as perfect! By whom? |
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Also what did they do to you? Also, what did they do to you? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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B: classmates. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Let's just say a lot happened. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A: Haha I see. A: Avoid using "haha". It makes you/your friend seem insensitive in this case. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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How angry did you get? This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Like, "You son of a bitch! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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