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sho

July 26, 2022

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I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ
I want to speak like a native speaker!! Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! ๐Ÿ™
Also, I'd like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ


B: What time did you get up today?
A: Around ten o'clock
B: late!
A: Cause I went to bed way "too" late.
B: What time?
A: About "5:30AM" today.
B: If that's the case, you made it.
A: Yeah.
B: You're sleepy, right?
A: I'm still wide awake.

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Talking 1

I think this is okay, too.

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!

๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ

I want to speak like a native speaker!!

Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?

You can change whatever you want!

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!

๐Ÿ™

Also, I'd like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.

I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ

B: What time did you get up today?

A: Around ten o'clock

B: Whoa, that's late!

US slang

A: 'Cause I went to bed way "too" late.

B: What time was that?

This sounds more natural in the US.

A: About "5:30AM" today this morning.

B: Ifn that's the case, you made it.

I'm not sure what the intent of this observation is so this is my best guess.

A: Yeah.

B: You're sleepy, right?

A: I'm still wide awake.

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sho

July 30, 2022

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B: Ifn that's the case, you made it.


I told him he was late getting up, but he went to bed late and got up at 10a.m., meaning he was early, which is great. You know what I mean?๐Ÿ˜…

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mari

July 30, 2022

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I told him he was late getting up, but he went to bed late and got up at 10a.m., meaning he was early, which is great. You know what I mean?๐Ÿ˜…

Yes! ใ‚ใ‚ŠใŒใจใ†๏ผIn that case, it could be something like,

"Oh, then you got up early."
"Oh, then you're doing pretty well."
"Oh, I guess it's not that late then."

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sho

July 30, 2022

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Yes! ใ‚ใ‚ŠใŒใจใ†๏ผIn that case, it could be something like, "Oh, then you got up early." "Oh, then you're doing pretty well." "Oh, I guess it's not that late then."

ใชใ‚‹ใปใฉใƒผ๏ผ๏ผโœ๏ธ
ใ‚ใ‚ŠใŒใจใ†ใ”ใ–ใ„ใพใ™๏ผ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ

A: Cause I went to bed way "too" late.

A: Abrout "nd 5:30AM" today in the morning.

Another possible way is: "Around 5:30 this morning".

B: If that's the case, at least you made it.

B: You're still sleepy, rightaren't you?

A: I'm still wide awake.

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sho

July 27, 2022

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Thank you so much!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ

Talk 1


Talking 1

I think this is okay, too.

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I want to speak like a native speaker!!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

You can change whatever you want!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

๐Ÿ™


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Also, I'd like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

B: What time did you get up today?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

A: Around ten o'clock


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

B: late!


B: Whoa, that's late!

US slang

A: Cause I went to bed way "too" late.


A: Cause I went to bed way "too" late.

A: 'Cause I went to bed way "too" late.

B: What time?


B: What time was that?

This sounds more natural in the US.

A: About "5:30AM" today.


A: Abrout "nd 5:30AM" today in the morning.

Another possible way is: "Around 5:30 this morning".

A: About "5:30AM" today this morning.

B: If that's the case, you made it.


B: If that's the case, at least you made it.

B: Ifn that's the case, you made it.

I'm not sure what the intent of this observation is so this is my best guess.

A: Yeah.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

B: You're sleepy, right?


B: You're still sleepy, rightaren't you?

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

A: I'm still wide awake.


A: I'm still wide awake.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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