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A: Firstly, I chose free talk because I want you to read aloud sentences I made with correct pronunciation and help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in the sentences. Is that okay with you in that way?
B: Of course.
A: I'm new at this, so there may be room for improvement in this approach, and I know it's exhausting for you to read aloud all the time, but please take care of me.
A: Okay. Also do you want me to read and then you?
B: No, we only have 25 minutes, so please read aloud only to you.

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Do these sentences sound natural?

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A: Firstly, I chose free talk because I want you to read aloud sentences I made aloud with correct pronunciation and to help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in the sentences.

We use, "first," more often in the US than, "firstly."

Is that okay with you in that way?

B: Of course.

A: I'm new at this, so there may be room for improvement in this approach, and I know it's exhausting for you to read aloud all the time, but please take care of medo.

A: Okay.

Also do you want me to read and then you read?

or

Should we take turns reading?

B: No, we only have 25 minutes, so pleaseyou're the only one who's reading aloud only to you.

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よく出来ました!

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sho

Sept. 1, 2022

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ありがとうございます!!

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sho

Sept. 1, 2022

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ありがとうございます!!🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️

oOnline English lesson conversation.

A: Firstly, I chose free talk because I want you to read aloudthe sentences I made out loud with correct pronunciation, and help me by correcting me on anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in the sentences.

To sound more natural

Is that okay with you in that way?

A: I'm new at this, so there may be some room for improvement in this approach, and. I know it's exhausting for you to read aout loud all the time, but please take care of mehelp me with this.

Also dDo you want me to read, and then you?

B: No, we only have 25 minutes, so please read aloud only to youit would be best if you could read aloud while I listen.

To sound more natural

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Good job!

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Sept. 1, 2022

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Thank you so much!!!🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️

A: Firstly off, I chose free talk because I want you to read aloud sentences I made with correct pronunciation and help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in the sentences.

"Firstly"は間違いではありませんが、自然な会話で「First off」ってよく言います。

Is that okay with you in that way?

A: I'm new at this, so there may be room for improvement in this approach, and I know it's exhausting for you to read aloud all the time, but please take care of meI look forward to trying this with you.

"Please take care of me"はちょっと不自然なフレーズです。

Also, do you want me to read it first and then you?

B: No, we only have 25 minutes, so please read aloud only to you your own.

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A: I'm new at this, so there may be room for improvement in this approach, and I know it's exhausting for you to read aloud all the time, but please take care of meI look forward to trying this with you.

訂正ありがとうございます!
ここは先生1人に読ませてしまうことを申し訳ないと伝えたいのですが、but sorry.に変えても不自然でしょうか?

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Aug. 31, 2022

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訂正ありがとうございます! ここは先生1人に読ませてしまうことを申し訳ないと伝えたいのですが、but sorry.に変えても不自然でしょうか?

その通りですね。この文章が大体申し訳ない感じを伝えますが、「sorry for the inconvenience 」って言うと思います。でも、こんなに謝らなくてもいいですよ。

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sho

Sept. 1, 2022

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その通りですね。この文章が大体申し訳ない感じを伝えますが、「sorry for the inconvenience 」って言うと思います。でも、こんなに謝らなくてもいいですよ。

了解です!ありがとうございました!!🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️

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oOnline English lesson conversation.

oOnline English lLesson cConversation

A: Firstly, I chose free talk because I want you to read aloud sentences I made with correct pronunciation and help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in the sentences.


A: Firstly off, I chose free talk because I want you to read aloud sentences I made with correct pronunciation and help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in the sentences.

"Firstly"は間違いではありませんが、自然な会話で「First off」ってよく言います。

A: Firstly, I chose free talk because I want you to read aloudthe sentences I made out loud with correct pronunciation, and help me by correcting me on anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in the sentences.

To sound more natural

A: Firstly, I chose free talk because I want you to read aloud sentences I made aloud with correct pronunciation and to help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in the sentences.

We use, "first," more often in the US than, "firstly."

Is that okay with you in that way?


Is that okay with you in that way?

Is that okay with you in that way?

Is that okay with you in that way?

B: Of course.


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A: I'm new at this, so there may be room for improvement in this approach, and I know it's exhausting for you to read aloud all the time, but please take care of me.


A: I'm new at this, so there may be room for improvement in this approach, and I know it's exhausting for you to read aloud all the time, but please take care of meI look forward to trying this with you.

"Please take care of me"はちょっと不自然なフレーズです。

A: I'm new at this, so there may be some room for improvement in this approach, and. I know it's exhausting for you to read aout loud all the time, but please take care of mehelp me with this.

A: I'm new at this, so there may be room for improvement in this approach, and I know it's exhausting for you to read aloud all the time, but please take care of medo.

A: Okay.


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Also do you want me to read and then you?


Also, do you want me to read it first and then you?

Also dDo you want me to read, and then you?

Also do you want me to read and then you read?

or Should we take turns reading?

B: No, we only have 25 minutes, so please read aloud only to you.


B: No, we only have 25 minutes, so please read aloud only to you your own.

B: No, we only have 25 minutes, so please read aloud only to youit would be best if you could read aloud while I listen.

To sound more natural

B: No, we only have 25 minutes, so pleaseyou're the only one who's reading aloud only to you.

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