Scarlett_Father's avatar
Scarlett_Father

Sept. 12, 2023

1
Talent Show

Many years ago, I once watched a program on TV called Talent Show in my country. The program was so fascinating and popular that I guarantee everyone who has watched TV knows about it.

The participants of the program ranged ages from five-year-old kids to elderly 85 years old people, male or female, it seemed that anyone can have the opportunity to perform before the public, showing their any special skills. At the same time, another three well-known artists would acted as umpires. if the performers got at least two pass signs, then they would succeed in this stage and have change to attend another show.

I don't want to give examples here, because most of performers have their unique encouraging stories. This program let me know that regardless how common you are, you can have chance to be successful if you are really talent. This was really a wonderful and unforgettable program.

Later, I found this kind programs are also popular in other countries, such as the UK, U.S. and many more. And if I were not wrong, the copyright of this program was from Netherland."

Corrections

Many years ago, I once watched a program on TV called Talent Show in my country.

You can also say: "on TV called Talent Show that aired in my country"

The program was so fascinating and popular that I guarantee everyone who has watcheds TV in my country knows about it.

there are people in other countries who watch TV but likely don't know about this show

At the same time, another threethree other well-known artists would acted as umpires (judges?).

iIf the performers got at least two pass signes, then they would succey moved ion this stage and have change to attendo another show.

I don't want to give examples here, because most ofMost of the performers have theirsuch unique, encouraging (life-giving?) stories.

This program let me knowshowed me that regardless of how common you are, you can have chance toordinary you may seem, you can still be successful if you are really talentwork hard.

i hope i'm interpreting this right

Later, I found this kind programs are also popular in other countries, such as the UK, U.S. and many moreI think the sentence before this one was a much stronger sentence to end on.

And if I were not wrong, the copyright of this program was from Netherland."---

I personally think the 3rd to last sentence was a much stronger one to end on.

Scarlett_Father's avatar
Scarlett_Father

Sept. 16, 2023

1

Thank you for your corrections and interpretations! :-)

38592958's avatar
38592958

Sept. 16, 2023

2

Thank you for your corrections and interpretations! :-)

No problem!

The participantsage of the program ranged aparticipants rangesd from five5-year-old kids to elderly 85- years -old people,elders, both male orand female, i. It seemed that anyone canould have the opportunity to perform before the public, showing any of their any special skills.

At the same time, anotherOn top of that, three well-known artists would acted as umpirthe judges.

iIf the performers got at least two pass signs, then they would succeed in this stage and have a changce to attend (compete in?) another show.

I don't want to give examples here, because most of the performers have theirsuch unique, encouraging stories (that one should look up when time permits).

This program let me knowshowed me that regardless how common you are, you can have a chance to be successful if you are really talented.

Later, I found thisese kinds of programs are also popular in other countries, such as the UK, U.S. and many more.

And if I weream not wrong, the copyright of this program was from the Netherlands."

or: Also, if I am not mistaken...

Feedback

Nice job!

Scarlett_Father's avatar
Scarlett_Father

Sept. 13, 2023

1

Thank you very much! There were a lot of corrections in the first paragraph. 😊

Talent Show


Many years ago, I once watched a program on TV called Talent Show in my country.


Many years ago, I once watched a program on TV called Talent Show in my country.

You can also say: "on TV called Talent Show that aired in my country"

The program was so fascinating and popular that I guarantee everyone who has watched TV knows about it.


The program was so fascinating and popular that I guarantee everyone who has watcheds TV in my country knows about it.

there are people in other countries who watch TV but likely don't know about this show

The participants of the program ranged ages from five-year-old kids to elderly 85 years old people, male or female, it seemed that anyone can have the opportunity to perform before the public, showing their any special skills.


The participantsage of the program ranged aparticipants rangesd from five5-year-old kids to elderly 85- years -old people,elders, both male orand female, i. It seemed that anyone canould have the opportunity to perform before the public, showing any of their any special skills.

At the same time, another three well-known artists would acted as umpires.


At the same time, anotherOn top of that, three well-known artists would acted as umpirthe judges.

At the same time, another threethree other well-known artists would acted as umpires (judges?).

if the performers got at least two pass signs, then they would succeed in this stage and have change to attend another show.


iIf the performers got at least two pass signs, then they would succeed in this stage and have a changce to attend (compete in?) another show.

iIf the performers got at least two pass signes, then they would succey moved ion this stage and have change to attendo another show.

I don't want to give examples here, because most of performers have their unique encouraging stories.


I don't want to give examples here, because most of the performers have theirsuch unique, encouraging stories (that one should look up when time permits).

I don't want to give examples here, because most ofMost of the performers have theirsuch unique, encouraging (life-giving?) stories.

This program let me know that regardless how common you are, you can have chance to be successful if you are really talent.


This program let me knowshowed me that regardless how common you are, you can have a chance to be successful if you are really talented.

This program let me knowshowed me that regardless of how common you are, you can have chance toordinary you may seem, you can still be successful if you are really talentwork hard.

i hope i'm interpreting this right

This was really a wonderful and unforgettable program.


Later, I found this kind programs are also popular in other countries, such as the UK, U.S. and many more.


Later, I found thisese kinds of programs are also popular in other countries, such as the UK, U.S. and many more.

Later, I found this kind programs are also popular in other countries, such as the UK, U.S. and many moreI think the sentence before this one was a much stronger sentence to end on.

And if I were not wrong, the copyright of this program was from Netherland."


And if I weream not wrong, the copyright of this program was from the Netherlands."

or: Also, if I am not mistaken...

And if I were not wrong, the copyright of this program was from Netherland."---

I personally think the 3rd to last sentence was a much stronger one to end on.

You need LangCorrect Premium to access this feature.

Go Premium