Feb. 26, 2022
Taking My Family Pictures
Every February, my family takes pictures at a small shop near my house.
That is because the school attending our kids requires new pictures for their new classes.
My first son has taken the picture since 2016, and my two other kids also have taken the picture for three years, now
With the pictures taken every year, I can see at a glance how much my kids are growing.
I hope this routine will continue until my kids will become adults.
Taking My Family Pictures
Nothing wrong with your title! :) Just a stylistic change.
Every February, my family takes pictures at a small shop near my house.
Thatis is because the school thattending our kids attend requires new pictures for their new classes.
I fixed the description of the subject here, it should be "the school that our kids attend." Your original statement makes it sound like the school is "going to" your children. :)
My first son has taken theschool pictures since 2016, and my two othyounger kids also have taken theschool pictures for the past three years, now.
I added some words to provide more clarity to the sentence.
With these yearly pictures taken every year, I can see at a glance how much my kids are growing.
I hope this routine will continue until my kids will become adults.
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잘 했습니다! 저는 제 자신 초학교 사진이 보는 것을 즐겨요. 아직도 제 모습이 똑같아요. 그냥 지금보다 더 작아요. ㅋㅋㅋ.
March 2, 2022
고맙습니다! 어릴때 사진을 보는게 정말 재미있어요. ㅎㅎ
Taking My Family Pictures
Every February, my family takes pictures at a small shop near myour house.
That is because the school our kids are attending our kids requires new pictures for their new classes.
My first son has taken thehad his picture taken since 2016, and my two other kids also have takenhad their pictures taken for three years, now.
With the pictures taken every year, I can see at a glance how much my kids are growing.
I hope this routinetradition will continue until my kids will become adults.
Your sentence is correct but this is a better word choice. :)
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Great job! :)
March 1, 2022
Thank you so much!
Taking My Family Pictures
Every February, my family takes pictures at a small shop near my house.
Thatis is because the school attending our kids attend requires new pictures for their new classes.
My first son has taken the picture since 2016, and my two other kids also have taken the picture for three years, now.
The sentence doesn't sound natural, is it your kid taking the picture or are they having a picture taken of them?
With the pictures taken every year, I can see at a glance how much my kids are growing.
I hope this routineitual will continue until my kids will become adults.
"Ritual" is a more fitting/natural word in this context but routine is still correct :)
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Beautiful writing! :)
Feb. 26, 2022
Thatis is because the school attending our kids attend requires new pictures for their new classes.
It’s actually “the school requires” - not “the school require”.
(edit: by the way, did you know you can edit your own corrections (after posting them)? Check it out! I only just discovered this.)
Feb. 26, 2022
I hope this routineitual will continue until my kids will become adults.
Good idea, “ritual” is nice here. 👍
Feb. 26, 2022
Thanks, obviously I was reading properly haha
Feb. 27, 2022
Thank you so much,
Taking My Family Pictures
Every February, my family takes pictures at a small shop near my house.
That is because the school thattending our kids attend requires new pictures for their new classes.
I can’t explain but it’s a little more natural to say “This is because (…)” in this sentence. But it doesn’t really matter, so no worries! 👍
My first son has taken the picture since 2016, and my two other kids also have taken the picture for three years, now.
Be careful of the word order. Your sentence suggests this interpretation, “My children have taken the photos” i.e. your children operated the cameras.
Or “My first son has *had his pictures* taken since 2016, and my two other kids have also had their pictures taken for three years, now.”
With the pictures taken every year, I can see at a glance how much my kids are growing.
I hope this routine will continue until my kids will become adults.
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Nice writeup! 🙂
Feb. 26, 2022
That is because the school thattending our kids attend requires new pictures for their new classes.
It’s actually “the school requires” - not “the school require”.
(edit: by the way, did you know you can edit your own corrections (after posting them)? Check it out! I only just discovered this.)
Feb. 26, 2022
I hope this routine will continue until my kids will become adults.
Good idea, “ritual” is nice here. 👍
Feb. 27, 2022
Thank you so much!
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