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Sumomo

Sept. 14, 2021

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Taking A Nap

I went to an elementary school to teach Japanese today. When I was talking with children, I was really enjoying it. After the lessons, when I wrote a report, I felt that something unusual in my vision. That was like innumerable very small light are flickering. I really dislike this because once it caused, I can't read or watch anything. I've got the same experiences until now and they usually caused when I had not got enough sleep. Actually, after taking a nap, I felt much better. I should care about my eyes and try to get enough sleep.

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Taking A Nap

I went to an elementary school to teach Japanese today.

WI found it really enjoyable when I was talking with the children, I was really enjoying it.

After the lessons, when I wroteas writing a report, I felt thatsaw something unusual in my field of vision.

ThaIt was like very small, innumerable very small light ares flickering.

I really dislike ithis because once it causedoccurs, I can't read or watch anything.

I've gothad the same experiences until nowbefore and they're usually caused when I had not got enoughby lack of sleep.

Actually, after taking a nap, I felt much better.

I should care abouttake care of my eyes and try to get enough sleep.

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Sumomo

Sept. 15, 2021

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Thank you for your corrections!

Taking A Nap

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I went to an elementary school to teach Japanese today.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

When I was talking with children, I was really enjoying it.

WI found it really enjoyable when I was talking with the children, I was really enjoying it.

After the lessons, when I wrote a report, I felt that something unusual in my vision.

After the lessons, when I wroteas writing a report, I felt thatsaw something unusual in my field of vision.

That was like innumerable very small light are flickering.

ThaIt was like very small, innumerable very small light ares flickering.

I really dislike this because once it caused, I can't read or watch anything.

I really dislike ithis because once it causedoccurs, I can't read or watch anything.

I've got the same experiences until now and they usually caused when I had not got enough sleep.

I've gothad the same experiences until nowbefore and they're usually caused when I had not got enoughby lack of sleep.

Actually, after taking a nap, I felt much better.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I should care about my eyes and try to get enough sleep.

I should care abouttake care of my eyes and try to get enough sleep.

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