Aug. 1, 2020
Taking a nap!
Many take a nap in the afternoon. Most of the employees in Japanese firms take a nap after the lunch break. It is part of the Japanese culture to take a nap after lunch. The employees usually take a nap for 15 to 20 minutes. They believe that it reduces work-related stress and enhances their productivity. Japanese are quite disciplined in whatever they do, therefore, they take their naps seriously as well.
I also sometimes take a nap in the afternoons when I have time. My naps usually last for 30 minutes to one hour. It is a bit longer than what it should be. Thus, I often avoid taking naps because it wastes my time.
Taking a nap!
Many take a nap in the afternoon.
Most of the employees in Japanese firms take a nap after the lunch break.
We are discussing employees in general, rather than those of a specific company, so it sounds better without "the."
It is part of the Japanese culture to take a nap after lunch.
The employees usually take a nap for 15 to 20 minutes.
They believe that it reduces work-related stress and enhances their productivity.
Japanese are quite disciplined in whatever they do,; therefore, they take their naps seriously as well.
I also sometimes take a nap in the afternoons when I have time.
My naps usually last for 30 minutes to one hour.
It is a bit longer than what it should be.
Thus, I often avoid taking naps because it wastes my time.
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Very accurate. Great job!
Aug. 2, 2020
Thanks a lot for the correction!
Taking a nap!
Many take a nap in the afternoon.
Most of the employees in Japanese firms take a nap after their lunch break.
It is part of the Japanese culture to take a nap after lunch.
The eEmployees usually take a nap for 15 to 20 minutes.
They believe that it reduces work-related stress and enhances their productivity.
The Japanese are quite disciplined in whatever they do, therefore, they take their naps seriously as well.
IThat is a bit longer than what it should be.
This sounds more natural this way... if you say "it is a bit longer" the reader may be confused about "it" refers to (in this case, it refers to your particular nap length)
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Great job! These are very minor corrections, I understood completely :)
Aug. 2, 2020
Thanks a lot for your help!
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Many take a nap in the afternoon. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Most of the employees in Japanese firms take a nap after the lunch break. Most of the employees in Japanese firms take a nap after their lunch break. Most of We are discussing employees in general, rather than those of a specific company, so it sounds better without "the." |
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It is part of the Japanese culture to take a nap after lunch. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The employees usually take a nap for 15 to 20 minutes.
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They believe that it reduces work-related stress and enhances their productivity. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Japanese are quite disciplined in whatever they do, therefore, they take their naps seriously as well. The Japanese are quite disciplined in whatever they do, therefore, they take their naps seriously as well. Japanese are quite disciplined in whatever they do |
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I also sometimes take a nap in the afternoons when I have time. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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My naps usually last for 30 minutes to one hour. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It is a bit longer than what it should be.
This sounds more natural this way... if you say "it is a bit longer" the reader may be confused about "it" refers to (in this case, it refers to your particular nap length) This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Thus, I often avoid taking naps because it wastes my time. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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