Jan. 8, 2022
Take a route
Off the top of my head when I listen about plannig route is that it is very boring. I like take a route at the moment of walking, follow to some mystery path and guess where it leads. One day I found that way a forest near my home, almost in the center of Moscow. I didn't know about it, I go where my eyes looked and came across a fence and behind it were tops of trees and where it finished there were darkness and way in nowhere... it looked like that, it was winter and night. This way in nowhere turned out the entrance to a little but real forest. I like walking there now, but it is becoming boring...
Off the top of my head when I listen about planning route is that, it is very boring.
I like to take a route spontaneously/at the moment of walking, following it to some mystery path and guessing where it leads.
One day I found that way a forest near my home, almost in the center of Moscow.
I didn't know about it,. I go wherefollowed my eyes looked and came across a fence and behind it were tops of trees and w. Where it finished there wereas darkness and no way in nowhere... iIt looked like that,; it was winter and night.
This sentence fell a little out of sequence and it wasn’t clear exactly what meant to be said in the sequence of events. I made some suggested changes based on what I thought was meant. There are more options possible.
This way in nowhere turned out to be the entrance to a little but a real forest.
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Great job! An English speaker would be able to understand your story. I am familiar with some Russian and I can see some of the tendencies to translate from Russian into English, which are different between our languages. That was my main observation in differences in style from a native speaker to someone learning English. You are doing great!
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Take a route |
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Off the top of my head when I listen about plannig route is that it is very boring. Off the top of my head when I listen about planning route |
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I like take a route at the moment of walking, follow to some mystery path and guess where it leads. I like to take a route spontaneously/at the moment of walking, following it to some mystery path and guessing where it leads. |
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One day I found that way a forest near my home, almost in the center of Moscow. One day I found |
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I didn't know about it, I go where my eyes looked and came across a fence and behind it were tops of trees and where it finished there were darkness and way in nowhere... it looked like that, it was winter and night. I didn't know about it This sentence fell a little out of sequence and it wasn’t clear exactly what meant to be said in the sequence of events. I made some suggested changes based on what I thought was meant. There are more options possible. |
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This way in nowhere turned out the entrance to a little but real forest. This way |
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I like walking there now, but it is becoming boring... |
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