June 21, 2021
When I have a free time, I am usually with my three sons and play.
My first son is interested in Chess these days.
He tries to learn how to move pieces and how to make strategies.
Although he is not good at it, but he will play it well.
My second son likes to listen to books.
He is only 4 years old, so he can't read any character, but he really likes to read pictures on the books.
I try to read the book to him every day.
My last son enjoys TV animations.
I guess he is too addicted to TV, so I usually tune other channels that are about educational contents.
All of them want to play outside, so we go out of home and hang out at the park on weekends.
As a result, they can spend all their energy.
Takeing a Break With My Sons
for a title, it's more natural to use "taking" here
When I have a free time, I am usually playing with my three sons and play.
My first son is interested in Cchess these days.
no need to capitalize "chess" - it's just a normal activity, not a formal proper noun
He triesis trying to learn how to move pieces and how to make strategies.
use "is trying" here to match the previous sentence better ("My first son is interested in chess these days.")
Although he is not good at it, but he will learn play it well.
Your sentence doesn't make sense (if he is not good at it, how does he "play it well"?). Not sure what you meant, but I guess that in the future, your son can learn to play chess well!
My second son likes to listen to books.
He is only 4four years old, so he can't read any characters, but he really likes to readlook at pictures on the books.
you can't "read pictures" - you can only "look at pictures"
I try to read the books to him every day.
you're probably reading different books to your son, rather than one single book
My last son enjoys TV animationed TV series.
This is a more natural and common way of writing it. You can also write "enjoys cartoons."
I guessthink he is too addicted to TV, so I usually tunechange the TV to other channels that are aboutwith educational contents.
All of them want to play outside, so we go out of home and hang out at the park on weekends.
As a result, they can spend all their energy.
Hmm... this sentence is a little strange to me, not sure what you mean? Maybe a better way to end could be something like, "When we go out, they can spend their energy having fun."
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Good job, sounds like you have a good time spending time with your sons!
Take a Break With My Sons Tak for a title, it's more natural to use "taking" here |
When I have a free time, I am usually with my three sons and play. When I have |
My first son is interested in Chess these days. My first son is interested in no need to capitalize "chess" - it's just a normal activity, not a formal proper noun |
He tries to learn how to move pieces and how to make strategies. He use "is trying" here to match the previous sentence better ("My first son is interested in chess these days.") |
Although he is not good at it, but he will play it well. Although he is not good at it, but he will learn play it well. Your sentence doesn't make sense (if he is not good at it, how does he "play it well"?). Not sure what you meant, but I guess that in the future, your son can learn to play chess well! |
My second son likes to listen to books. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
He is only 4 years old, so he can't read any character, but he really likes to read pictures on the books. He is only you can't "read pictures" - you can only "look at pictures" |
I try to read the book to him every day. I try to read you're probably reading different books to your son, rather than one single book |
My last son enjoys TV animations. My last son enjoys This is a more natural and common way of writing it. You can also write "enjoys cartoons." |
I guess he is too addicted to TV, so I usually tune other channels that are about educational contents. I |
All of them want to play outside, so we go out of home and hang out at the park on weekends. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
As a result, they can spend all their energy. As a result, they can spend all their energy. Hmm... this sentence is a little strange to me, not sure what you mean? Maybe a better way to end could be something like, "When we go out, they can spend their energy having fun." |
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