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yuko

Feb. 15, 2022

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Take a bath

I love bathtime very much.
Not only take a shower, but have a good soak in the bath.
Soaking in a bath, body will be getting warm up.
When I soaking in a bath, I'm watching youtube.

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Takeing a bath

I love bathtime very much.

Not only takeing a shower, but haveing a good soak in the bath.

tak (ing) , hav (ing) = adding (-ing) to the end of verbs shows that you/or someone is doing the action. For example saying "He is run" sounds unnatural. Instead use "He is runn(ing)".

Soaking in a bath, my body will be gettinggin to warm up.

You should specify who the body belongs to (my body/ his body/ her body, etc)
Body by itself in English usage usually means a dead body (corpse), so it can be uncomfortable to read the word "body" by itself.

Whilen I soaking in a bath, I'm watching youtube.

When is ok to use, but while sounds more natural if you're describing doing an action while doing another action. For example "I pet the cats head while feeding her food."

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Your english is good! Practice a bit more on present progressive verbs! :-) Good luck!

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yuko

March 2, 2022

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Thank you so much.

Not onlyI don't mean just takeing a shower, but have a good soak in the bath.

Soaking in a bath, body will be getting warm warms my body up.

WI watch youtube when I'm soaking in a bath, I'm watching youtube.

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Me too, I don't do it often enough!

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yuko

Feb. 16, 2022

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Think you so much.

Take a bath

I love bathtime very much.

NI not only take a shower, but also have a good soak in the bath.

I am not sure what you meant: the way I correct it is that at bathtime, you take a shower and a good soak. - what you do
If you meant that you love not only taking a shower, but also having a good soak in the bath, that also works. - what you love

SWhile soaking in a bath, my body will be gettinggets warmed up.

When Iile soaking in a bath, I'm usually watching y YoutTube.

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yuko

Feb. 16, 2022

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Think you, Mis litahl.
I mean that I love the time watching Youtube while soaking in a bath.

Take a bath

I love bathtime very much.

NI not only takelove taking a shower, but haveI also love having a good soak in the bath.

SWhile I'm soaking in athe bath, my body will be getting warms up.

When I'm soaking in a bath, I'm watching yYoutube.

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Great Job!

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yuko

Feb. 16, 2022

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Think you so much.

Take a bath

I love bathtime very much.

NI not only takelove taking a shower, but haveing a good soak in the bathtub.

SWhile soaking in athe bath, my body will be getting warming up.

When I'm soaking in a bath, I'm watching yYoutube.

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Good job!

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yuko

Feb. 16, 2022

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Think you so much.

Takeing a bath

Not only do I take a shower, but I also have a good soak in the bath.

SoakingAs I soak in athe bath, my body will be gettinggets warmed up.

When I soaking in a bath, I'm watching youtubeI usually watch Youtube while soaking in the bath.

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yuko

Feb. 16, 2022

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Think you so much.

Take a bath


Takeing a bath

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Takeing a bath

I love bathtime very much.


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Not only take a shower, but have a good soak in the bath.


Not only do I take a shower, but I also have a good soak in the bath.

NI not only takelove taking a shower, but haveing a good soak in the bathtub.

NI not only takelove taking a shower, but haveI also love having a good soak in the bath.

NI not only take a shower, but also have a good soak in the bath.

I am not sure what you meant: the way I correct it is that at bathtime, you take a shower and a good soak. - what you do If you meant that you love not only taking a shower, but also having a good soak in the bath, that also works. - what you love

Not onlyI don't mean just takeing a shower, but have a good soak in the bath.

Not only takeing a shower, but haveing a good soak in the bath.

tak (ing) , hav (ing) = adding (-ing) to the end of verbs shows that you/or someone is doing the action. For example saying "He is run" sounds unnatural. Instead use "He is runn(ing)".

Soaking in a bath, body will be getting warm up.


SoakingAs I soak in athe bath, my body will be gettinggets warmed up.

SWhile soaking in athe bath, my body will be getting warming up.

SWhile I'm soaking in athe bath, my body will be getting warms up.

SWhile soaking in a bath, my body will be gettinggets warmed up.

Soaking in a bath, body will be getting warm warms my body up.

Soaking in a bath, my body will be gettinggin to warm up.

You should specify who the body belongs to (my body/ his body/ her body, etc) Body by itself in English usage usually means a dead body (corpse), so it can be uncomfortable to read the word "body" by itself.

When I soaking in a bath, I'm watching youtube.


When I'm soaking in a bath, I'm watching yYoutube.

When I soaking in a bath, I'm watching youtubeI usually watch Youtube while soaking in the bath.

When I'm soaking in a bath, I'm watching yYoutube.

When Iile soaking in a bath, I'm usually watching y YoutTube.

WI watch youtube when I'm soaking in a bath, I'm watching youtube.

Whilen I soaking in a bath, I'm watching youtube.

When is ok to use, but while sounds more natural if you're describing doing an action while doing another action. For example "I pet the cats head while feeding her food."

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