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Tailor

Tailor makes beautiful dresses and pretty spruce . She have a great talent and fashion is in very much form. In art or in craft . Fashion is great and beautiful . It give dress, shirts, pants, skirt, coat, jacket, cap, hat, socks, jeans, shoes, boots, blouse, shorts, and t-shirts. Mode is great and beautiful. The Tailor makes all clothes from our people.


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Tailor

This title is ok.
You could also have written, "The Tailor", showing that you are making a statement about the job of tailors in general.

TA tailor makes beautiful dresses andthat are pretty spruce .

She have a great talent and fashion is in very much form.

As you are referring to a tailor in general, you might wish to avoid using a gender-specific pronoun such as "she". You could either say:
"He/she has a great ..."
"They have a great ..."

In art or in craft .

This is not a sentence on its own. Could you think about how you could turn this into a sentence, or part of a sentence? You could either join it up with another sentence or you could put a verb into it.

Fashion is great and beautiful .

Small mistake only!

It gives us dresses, shirts, pants, skirts, coats, jackets, caps, hats, socks, jeans, shoes, boots, blouses, shorts, and t-shirts.

Mode is great and beautiful.

I think "mode" here probably means "fashion", which you have already written about above.

The Ttailor makes all sorts of clothes forom our people.

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Tailor


Tailor

This title is ok. You could also have written, "The Tailor", showing that you are making a statement about the job of tailors in general.

Tailor makes beautiful dresses and pretty spruce .


TA tailor makes beautiful dresses andthat are pretty spruce .

She have a great talent and fashion is in very much form.


She have a great talent and fashion is in very much form.

As you are referring to a tailor in general, you might wish to avoid using a gender-specific pronoun such as "she". You could either say: "He/she has a great ..." "They have a great ..."

In art or in craft .


In art or in craft .

This is not a sentence on its own. Could you think about how you could turn this into a sentence, or part of a sentence? You could either join it up with another sentence or you could put a verb into it.

Fashion is great and beautiful .


Fashion is great and beautiful .

Small mistake only!

It give dress, shirts, pants, skirt, coat, jacket, cap, hat, socks, jeans, shoes, boots, blouse, shorts, and t-shirts.


It gives us dresses, shirts, pants, skirts, coats, jackets, caps, hats, socks, jeans, shoes, boots, blouses, shorts, and t-shirts.

Mode is great and beautiful.


Mode is great and beautiful.

I think "mode" here probably means "fashion", which you have already written about above.

The Tailor makes all clothes from our people.


The Ttailor makes all sorts of clothes forom our people.

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