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Srint_tail

April 7, 2025

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tactile person

So i can't understand people who can touch another person if there are not their friend or family. Yes I dont like when no friend or people from my family touch me without ask. However when I tell them dont touch me please they are thinking I'm scaring there. But no, for me it's just my comfortable zone where only person who can trust me and i too. Some peoples think if person don't like tactile this person is weak and they can bulling him but no. I think person who cant respect mean another person is really weak. Today my classmate punched me no hard like friend. I said him that please don't touch me I dont like this move. He said "Oh you weak, you scared punch me for answer". So in result I punched him. Are you tactile person? Say I'm right or I made mistake?

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So iI can't understand people who can touch another person if there ay're not their friend or family.

"there" refers to a location
"they're" is an abbreviation of "they are"

Native speakers sometimes make this mistake too.

Yes, I don't like when people who are not friends or people from my family touch me without asking.

However when I tell them "don't touch me please" they are thinking I'm scaring thered.

But no, for me it's just my comfortable zone where only personthat's only for myself and people who canI trust me and i too.

Some peoples think if personsomeone else doesn't like tactileouching, then thisat person is weak and they can bulling himy them, but no.

"people" is already the plural of "person"

"peoples" is a different word, with a meaning like "societies" or "cultures"

"but no" is very slangy/conversational. I left it in, but it's very rare in written English.

I think person who cantit's the inability to respect that means another person is really weak.

Today my classmate punched me, not hard lik, more friend.ly-like

I said to him that p"Please don't touch me, I don't like this move".

He said "Oh you're weak, you're scared, punch me for answerback".

So in resultturn, I punched him.

Are you a tactile person?

SayDo you think I'm right or I made a mistake?

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You've got a pretty decent vocabulary and your meaning came across well, but your grammar and sentence structure need a bit more practice.

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As for the topic, this kind of nonconsensual contact is becoming increasingly unacceptable here. There's a certain type of man especially who will throw their arms around someone as a dominance/power gesture, and then there's a bunch of men touching women stuff that used to be common but is now thankfully frowned upon.

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Srint_tail

April 8, 2025

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Thanks for share your opinion it is so important for me and thanks for corrected.

tTactile pPerson

Just capitalizing the first letter of each word since it's a title :D

So i, I can't understand people who can touch another person ifople when therey are not their friends or family.

First, "I" always has to be capitalized :) When you wrote "there are" I think that you meant "they are"

You can also try this version for better clarity and flow "So, I can't understand people who touch others if they are not friends or family."

Yes II also dont like it when no friend or people from my familysomeone who isn’t a friend or family member touches me without asking.

“Yes” is a bit abrupt here; So, let's try “I also don’t like it when…” for better flow.

“No friend or people from my family” sounds a tiny bit awkward. Instead, we could try “someone who’s not a friend or family member.”

“Without ask” should be “without asking.” And I fixed a few small grammar errors with the contractions :D

However, when I tell them d, “Dont touch me, please,” they are thinking I'm scaring thered.

“Dont” should be “don’t” with an apostrophe.

Add commas for clarity: “However, when I tell them, ‘Don’t touch me, please,’…”

“They are thinking I'm scaring there” is unclear—probably meant “they think I’m scared.”

I'm not entirely sure if you meant to say that people think that you are scared when you don't want to be touched or that you are scary. Just in case, here's the second version:

"However, when I tell them, “Don’t touch me, please,” they think that I'm scary.”

But no, for me it's just my comfortable zone, where only personople I trust and who can trust me and i tore allowed to do so.

"Comfortable zone" was very close :) but it's actually, "comfort zone."

"Only person who can trust me and I too" sounds a little unclear and the phrasing is a bit awkward.

I am unsure, but I think that I know what you meant :D My understanding is that you meant "only people I trust and who trust me."

Some peoples think if persthat if someone don'esn’t like tactile this person is weak and they can bulling him but nobeing touched, they’re weak and easy to bully, but that’s not true.

Bulling should be "bully" and instead of tactile, it sounds a little more natural to say to "if someone doesn't like being touched" And peoples becomes people :)

I think personthat people who can't respect mean another person is really weak.others are actually the weak ones.

Don't forget your apostrophes when using contractions :D

Cant -> Can't
Dont -> Don't
Shouldnt -> Shouldn't and so on :)

And just made some grammar changes

Today, my classmate punched me no hard like friend. It wasn’t hard—more like something a friend might do.

I did this just to make the sentence a little bit clearer. Instead of "no hard" it would be "not hard" or "it wasn't hard"

"like friend" could also be "like a friend might"

I saitold him that p, "Please don't touch me, I don't like this move.at."

Also, we need to use quotations because you are using dialogue :)

“Said him” -> “told him.”

“Don’t” needs an apostrophe.

“This move” -> could instead be “that kind of thing” or “being touched like that.”

He said ", “Oh, you’re weak, you. You’re scared p. Punch me for answer".back if you’re not.”

“You weak” should be “You’re weak.”

“You scared” should be “You’re scared.”

“Punch me for answer” needs to be a bit clearer.

You could say, “Punch me back if you’re not.” or say, "hit me back if you're not."

And the period (.) should stay inside the quotations. For example: She said, "I went to the store and bought some cheese." The period is inside the " "

A few other small grammar changes as well :)

So, in resultthe end, I punched him.

For grammatical reasons, “So in result” could instead become “So, in the end” or “So I ended up” or even "As a result, I"

Are you a tactile person?

Say I'm right or I made mistake?

We need to end this using a question word (who, what, when, where, why, how do, does, etc.). So, instead of "say" which sounds a bit like a command, we could use "do" to express the same thing.

"Do you think that I was right, or did I make a mistake?"

or


"Do you think that I made a mistake? What would you have done?" we could ask two questions so that the reader can put themselves in your shoes.

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Overall, I'd say that it was a great effort. Just don't let those pesky contractions get you :D Also, I don't think that you did anything wrong when you chose to punch that classmate of yours. Some people just really don't understand boundaries. You did the right thing. I mean, you asked him politely if he could not touch you, and he chose to do so anyway. I definitely don't see a problem with how you handled the situation. Anyway, good luck with your English learning journey!

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Srint_tail

April 8, 2025

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Thank you so much for your work. I know my grammar is so awful :(

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umnobro

April 8, 2025

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Your grammar is not awful! You're still learning. We are all here on this website to learn, so please don't worry too much about it. I know that it can feel discouraging to see all the corrections, but that does not mean that your grammar is awful. It just means that you're still learning just like the rest of us :) I won't lie, I also struggle with grammar myself, so you're not the only one :P

Grammar can be quite tricky, but I know that you'll get it :D Just keep writing. It can be easy to focus on the corrections, but don't forget to celebrate the positive feedback too. Try to go easy on yourself and be proud that you were able to write such an interesting and cool piece about something that we can all relate to :D Good luck!

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Srint_tail

April 8, 2025

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Oh you make me happy, thank you for feedback

So iI can't understand people who can touch another person if there are not their friends or family.

Yes, I don't like when noa friend or peoplerson from my family touches me without asking.

However, when I tell them, don't touch me please, they are thinking that I'm scaring therem.

But no, for me, it's just my comfortable zone where only personople who can trust me and iI trust them too.

You could also say "But no, for me, it's just my comfort zone where only a person who can trust me and I trust them too."

Some peoples think if a person doesn't like tactile then, this person is weak and they can bulling hiy them but, no.

I think personople who can't respect mean another person is, they are really weak.

Today, my classmate punched me nso hard like friend.

I said to him that p"Please, don't touch me, I don't like this move".

He said "Oh you're weak, you're scared to punch me foras an answer".

So in, as a result, I punched him.

Are you a tactile person?

SayTell me if I'm right or I made a mistake?

Feedback

Well done! I am also like you and don't like being touched.

So in result I punched him.


So in, as a result, I punched him.

So, in resultthe end, I punched him.

For grammatical reasons, “So in result” could instead become “So, in the end” or “So I ended up” or even "As a result, I"

So in resultturn, I punched him.

tactile person


tTactile pPerson

Just capitalizing the first letter of each word since it's a title :D

So i can't understand people who can touch another person if there are not their friend or family.


So iI can't understand people who can touch another person if there are not their friends or family.

So i, I can't understand people who can touch another person ifople when therey are not their friends or family.

First, "I" always has to be capitalized :) When you wrote "there are" I think that you meant "they are" You can also try this version for better clarity and flow "So, I can't understand people who touch others if they are not friends or family."

So iI can't understand people who can touch another person if there ay're not their friend or family.

"there" refers to a location "they're" is an abbreviation of "they are" Native speakers sometimes make this mistake too.

Yes I dont like when no friend or people from my family touch me without ask.


Yes, I don't like when noa friend or peoplerson from my family touches me without asking.

Yes II also dont like it when no friend or people from my familysomeone who isn’t a friend or family member touches me without asking.

“Yes” is a bit abrupt here; So, let's try “I also don’t like it when…” for better flow. “No friend or people from my family” sounds a tiny bit awkward. Instead, we could try “someone who’s not a friend or family member.” “Without ask” should be “without asking.” And I fixed a few small grammar errors with the contractions :D

Yes, I don't like when people who are not friends or people from my family touch me without asking.

However when I tell them dont touch me please they are thinking I'm scaring there.


However, when I tell them, don't touch me please, they are thinking that I'm scaring therem.

However, when I tell them d, “Dont touch me, please,” they are thinking I'm scaring thered.

“Dont” should be “don’t” with an apostrophe. Add commas for clarity: “However, when I tell them, ‘Don’t touch me, please,’…” “They are thinking I'm scaring there” is unclear—probably meant “they think I’m scared.” I'm not entirely sure if you meant to say that people think that you are scared when you don't want to be touched or that you are scary. Just in case, here's the second version: "However, when I tell them, “Don’t touch me, please,” they think that I'm scary.”

However when I tell them "don't touch me please" they are thinking I'm scaring thered.

But no, for me it's just my comfortable zone where only person who can trust me and i too.


But no, for me, it's just my comfortable zone where only personople who can trust me and iI trust them too.

You could also say "But no, for me, it's just my comfort zone where only a person who can trust me and I trust them too."

But no, for me it's just my comfortable zone, where only personople I trust and who can trust me and i tore allowed to do so.

"Comfortable zone" was very close :) but it's actually, "comfort zone." "Only person who can trust me and I too" sounds a little unclear and the phrasing is a bit awkward. I am unsure, but I think that I know what you meant :D My understanding is that you meant "only people I trust and who trust me."

But no, for me it's just my comfortable zone where only personthat's only for myself and people who canI trust me and i too.

Some peoples think if person don't like tactile this person is weak and they can bulling him but no.


Some peoples think if a person doesn't like tactile then, this person is weak and they can bulling hiy them but, no.

Some peoples think if persthat if someone don'esn’t like tactile this person is weak and they can bulling him but nobeing touched, they’re weak and easy to bully, but that’s not true.

Bulling should be "bully" and instead of tactile, it sounds a little more natural to say to "if someone doesn't like being touched" And peoples becomes people :)

Some peoples think if personsomeone else doesn't like tactileouching, then thisat person is weak and they can bulling himy them, but no.

"people" is already the plural of "person" "peoples" is a different word, with a meaning like "societies" or "cultures" "but no" is very slangy/conversational. I left it in, but it's very rare in written English.

I think person who cant respect mean another person is really weak.


I think personople who can't respect mean another person is, they are really weak.

I think personthat people who can't respect mean another person is really weak.others are actually the weak ones.

Don't forget your apostrophes when using contractions :D Cant -> Can't Dont -> Don't Shouldnt -> Shouldn't and so on :) And just made some grammar changes

I think person who cantit's the inability to respect that means another person is really weak.

Today my classmate punched me no hard like friend.


Today, my classmate punched me nso hard like friend.

Today, my classmate punched me no hard like friend. It wasn’t hard—more like something a friend might do.

I did this just to make the sentence a little bit clearer. Instead of "no hard" it would be "not hard" or "it wasn't hard" "like friend" could also be "like a friend might"

Today my classmate punched me, not hard lik, more friend.ly-like

I said him that please don't touch me I dont like this move.


I said to him that p"Please, don't touch me, I don't like this move".

I saitold him that p, "Please don't touch me, I don't like this move.at."

Also, we need to use quotations because you are using dialogue :) “Said him” -> “told him.” “Don’t” needs an apostrophe. “This move” -> could instead be “that kind of thing” or “being touched like that.”

I said to him that p"Please don't touch me, I don't like this move".

He said "Oh you weak, you scared punch me for answer".


He said "Oh you're weak, you're scared to punch me foras an answer".

He said ", “Oh, you’re weak, you. You’re scared p. Punch me for answer".back if you’re not.”

“You weak” should be “You’re weak.” “You scared” should be “You’re scared.” “Punch me for answer” needs to be a bit clearer. You could say, “Punch me back if you’re not.” or say, "hit me back if you're not." And the period (.) should stay inside the quotations. For example: She said, "I went to the store and bought some cheese." The period is inside the " " A few other small grammar changes as well :)

He said "Oh you're weak, you're scared, punch me for answerback".

Are you tactile person?


Are you a tactile person?

Are you a tactile person?

Are you a tactile person?

Say I'm right or I made mistake?


SayTell me if I'm right or I made a mistake?

Say I'm right or I made mistake?

We need to end this using a question word (who, what, when, where, why, how do, does, etc.). So, instead of "say" which sounds a bit like a command, we could use "do" to express the same thing. "Do you think that I was right, or did I make a mistake?" or "Do you think that I made a mistake? What would you have done?" we could ask two questions so that the reader can put themselves in your shoes.

SayDo you think I'm right or I made a mistake?

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