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Table Tennis

When I was in middle school, a "table tennis table" was out of my classroom. In fact, it was not a real table tennis table, it was constructed with bricks and cement according to what a real table tennis table looked like.

However, it was the table tennis table I first saw and started playing with. Back then, China was very backward, let alone the countryside in China. My classmates and I couldn't afford a pair of rackets.

A student in my class was an exception. His family was a little rich, I think, because his father had a job working in a state-owned company. He had a pair of rackets, but the racket was only made of wooden board, not like the racket nowadays that has rubber on it.

Although the racket was very simple and shabby, we saw it as a treasure. Whenever it was break time, we were all competing to get the chance to play table tennis. Sometimes, when the student who had a racket was absent, we used our textbooks to play it.

Since then, I have started to love playing table tennis.

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Table Tennis

When I was iIN BRITISH ENGLISH: In middle school, a "table tennis table" was out of my classroomnear my classroom.¶
IN AMERICAN ENGLISH: In junior high school, near my classroom there was a table tennis table
.

In fact, it was not a real table tennis table,; it was constructed with bricks and cement according tomimicking what a realgenuine table tennis table should looked like.

However, it was the table tennis table I first saw and started playing withere.

Back then, China was very backward, let alone the countryside in Chinaespecially the rural parts of the country.

My classmates and I couldn't afford a pair of rackets.

AOne student in my class was an exception.

His family was a little richsomewhat, I think, because his father had a job working in a state-owned company.

He had a pair of rackets, but thehis racket was only made of wooden board, not like the rackets nowadays that hasve rubber on ithem.

Although the racket was very simple and shabby, we saw it as a treasure.

Whenever it was break time, we were all competing to get the chance to play table tennis.

Sometimes, when the student who had a racket was absent, we used our textbooks to play itable tennis.

Since then, I have started to love playing table tennis.

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Well written! Thanks for sharing! Table tennis is a great sport!

Table Tennis

When I was in middle school, we had a "table tennis table" was out of just outside my classroom.

In factActually, it was not a real table tennis table,; it was constructed withmade of bricks and cement according to whatnd built to look like a real table tennis table looked like.

However, it was the first "table tennis table" I first saw'd ever seen and started playing with.

Back then, China was very backwards, let alone in the countryside in China.

My classmates and I couldn't afford a pair of rackets.

A student in my class was an exception.

His family was a little richwealthier, I think, because his father had a job working in a state-owned company.

He had a pair of rackets, but the racket was only made ofa wooden board, unot like themodern racket nowadays that hasve rubber on ithem.

Although the racket was very simple and shabby, we saw, we treated it as a treasure.

You can just say "simple" xD Otherwise it sounds like you're dissing your classmate's racket xDD

Whenever it was break time, we were all competinged to get the chance to play table tennis.

Sometimes, when the student who had aowned the racket was absent, we used our textbooks to play it.

Since then, I have started to loved playing table tennis.

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Love the story :D

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Jack

May 10, 2024

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Thank you very much.

Table Tennis

When I was in middle school, there was a "table tennis table" was outoutside of my classroom.

In factActually, it was not a real table tennis table, instead it was constructed with bricks and cement according to what a real table tennis table looked like.

However, it was the table tennis table I first saw and started playing with.

Back then, China was very backward, let alone the countryside in China.

My classmates and I couldn't afford a pair of rackets.

AOne student in my class was an exception.

His family was a little rich, I think, because his father had a job working in a state-owned company.

He had a pair of rackets, but the racket was only made of wooden board, not like the rackets nowadays that hasve rubber on it.

'on them' is not necessary

Although the racket was very simple and shabby, we saw it as a treasure.

Whenever it was break time, we were all competinged to get the chance to play table tennis.

Sometimes, when the student who had a racket was absent, we used our textbooks to play it.

Since then, I have started to loved playing table tennis.

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Jack

May 10, 2024

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Thank you very much.

When I was in middle school, a "table tennis table" was out of my classroom.

In fact, it was not a real table tennis table, it was constructed with bricks and cement according to what a real table tennis table looked like.

I am not sure what you mean by this one, I think you mean it was not real table tennis because it is made of bricks and cement?

However, it was the tablefirst tennis table I first saw and startedever playinged with.

Back then, China was very backwardthe opposite, let alone the countryside in China.

maybe you mean China was poor before?

AExcept for one of the students in my class was an exception.

HI think his family was a littlquite rich, I think, because his father had a job working in a state-owned company.

He had a pair of rackets, but the rackets wasere only made of wooden board, unot like the rackets nowadays that hasve rubbers on it.

Sometimes, when the student who had athe racket was absent, we used our textbooks to play with it.

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Jack

May 10, 2024

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Thank you very much. Your guesses in the corrections are all correct.

A student in my class was an exception.


AExcept for one of the students in my class was an exception.

AOne student in my class was an exception.

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AOne student in my class was an exception.

His family was a little rich, I think, because his father had a job working in a state-owned company.


HI think his family was a littlquite rich, I think, because his father had a job working in a state-owned company.

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His family was a little richwealthier, I think, because his father had a job working in a state-owned company.

His family was a little richsomewhat, I think, because his father had a job working in a state-owned company.

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He had a pair of rackets, but the racket was only made of wooden board, not like the racket nowadays that has rubber on it.


He had a pair of rackets, but the rackets wasere only made of wooden board, unot like the rackets nowadays that hasve rubbers on it.

He had a pair of rackets, but the racket was only made of wooden board, not like the rackets nowadays that hasve rubber on it.

'on them' is not necessary

He had a pair of rackets, but the racket was only made ofa wooden board, unot like themodern racket nowadays that hasve rubber on ithem.

He had a pair of rackets, but thehis racket was only made of wooden board, not like the rackets nowadays that hasve rubber on ithem.

When I was in middle school, a "table tennis table" was out of my classroom.


When I was in middle school, a "table tennis table" was out of my classroom.

When I was in middle school, there was a "table tennis table" was outoutside of my classroom.

When I was in middle school, we had a "table tennis table" was out of just outside my classroom.

When I was iIN BRITISH ENGLISH: In middle school, a "table tennis table" was out of my classroomnear my classroom.¶
IN AMERICAN ENGLISH: In junior high school, near my classroom there was a table tennis table
.

In fact, it was not a real table tennis table, it was constructed with bricks and cement according to what a real table tennis table looked like.


In fact, it was not a real table tennis table, it was constructed with bricks and cement according to what a real table tennis table looked like.

I am not sure what you mean by this one, I think you mean it was not real table tennis because it is made of bricks and cement?

In factActually, it was not a real table tennis table, instead it was constructed with bricks and cement according to what a real table tennis table looked like.

In factActually, it was not a real table tennis table,; it was constructed withmade of bricks and cement according to whatnd built to look like a real table tennis table looked like.

In fact, it was not a real table tennis table,; it was constructed with bricks and cement according tomimicking what a realgenuine table tennis table should looked like.

However, it was the table tennis table I first saw and started playing with.


However, it was the tablefirst tennis table I first saw and startedever playinged with.

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However, it was the first "table tennis table" I first saw'd ever seen and started playing with.

However, it was the table tennis table I first saw and started playing withere.

Back then, China was very backward, let alone the countryside in China.


Back then, China was very backwardthe opposite, let alone the countryside in China.

maybe you mean China was poor before?

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Back then, China was very backwards, let alone in the countryside in China.

Back then, China was very backward, let alone the countryside in Chinaespecially the rural parts of the country.

My classmates and I couldn't afford a pair of rackets.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Although the racket was very simple and shabby, we saw it as a treasure.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Although the racket was very simple and shabby, we saw, we treated it as a treasure.

You can just say "simple" xD Otherwise it sounds like you're dissing your classmate's racket xDD

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Whenever it was break time, we were all competing to get the chance to play table tennis.


Whenever it was break time, we were all competinged to get the chance to play table tennis.

Whenever it was break time, we were all competinged to get the chance to play table tennis.

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Sometimes, when the student who had a racket was absent, we used our textbooks to play it.


Sometimes, when the student who had athe racket was absent, we used our textbooks to play with it.

Sometimes, when the student who had a racket was absent, we used our textbooks to play it.

Sometimes, when the student who had aowned the racket was absent, we used our textbooks to play it.

Sometimes, when the student who had a racket was absent, we used our textbooks to play itable tennis.

Since then, I have started to love playing table tennis.


Since then, I have started to loved playing table tennis.

Since then, I have started to loved playing table tennis.

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