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Dec. 3, 2022

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A small essay

When we prepare to find a job, we will consider our career. We almost select in a small startup or a big established company to work. According to my character and my major, I will choose to work in a small startup company.
First of all, I think the small startup company can bring me much challenges than the big established company. I fond of overcoming challenges that can make me excited. Meanwhile the challenges can make me stronger in the work. I can learn more about this job.
Secondly the startup can give me more chance that I can change my position. I can preform my capacities in another field. I can take carry of other work and find out more suitable career for me.
In my opinion, these two points are important for me, so I want to work on a small startup company.


The topic is about two options upon graduation: one is to work in a small startup and the other in a big established company.
Can you give me some advice to generate a small essay. I don't know how to connect the sentence smoothly and fluently.

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Dec. 4, 2022

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We almost (usually?) select in a small startup or a big established company to work. in / in which to work.

When we “almost” do something, we come very close to doing it, but we don’t actually do it. For example, “I almost missed the bus” means I nearly missed it, but I actually caught it: I didn’t miss the bus, but had I been a few seconds later, I would have missed it.

I don’t think you mean to say “almost” in this sentence, but I’m not sure what you do mean.

A small essay


When we prepare to find a job, we will consider our career.


We almost select in a small startup or a big established company to work.


We almost (usually?) select in a small startup or a big established company to work. in / in which to work. We almost (usually?) select a small startup or a big established company to work in / in which to work.

When we “almost” do something, we come very close to doing it, but we don’t actually do it. For example, “I almost missed the bus” means I nearly missed it, but I actually caught it: I didn’t miss the bus, but had I been a few seconds later, I would have missed it. I don’t think you mean to say “almost” in this sentence, but I’m not sure what you do mean.

According to my character and my major, I will choose to work in a small startup company.


First of all, I think the small startup company can bring me much challenges than the big established company.


I fond of overcoming challenges that can make me excited.


Meanwhile the challenges can make me stronger in the work.


I can learn more about this job.


Secondly the startup can give me more chance that I can change my position.


I can preform my capacities in another field.


I can take carry of other work and find out more suitable career for me.


In my opinion, these two points are important for me, so I want to work on a small startup company.


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