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Japan Bans Entry of Foreigners from Hubei Province PM Abe Orders

Concerning the outbreak of the newly emerged coronavirus in Wuhan City, Province of Hubei China, Japanese Prime Minister Abe announced that foreigners with a history of staying in the mentioned province will be banned from entering the country. The announcement was made at the emergency response headquarters on the evening of the 31st. As more and more travelers cancel their trip to China, the public is reacting vigilantly towards the situation. This measure was based on the immigration act, however, targeting a specific country or area was conducted for the first time.
This act includes a ban on travelers with a history of visiting Hubei Province within the 14 days of entry application date and foreign visitors with a Hubei-issued passport. The measure will come into effect at midnight on February 1st and will be continued for an undefined amount of time.
“We will enforce every means to stop the spread of the virus by further increasing the effectivity of stopping the virus at the border”, PM Abe emphasized.
If a Chinese citizen with a Hubei-issued passport has a Japanese partner or has resided outside of Hubei province for a longer period of time, he or she may be permitted entry. In such cases, visitors would be declaring their status at passport control. If a person commits perjury, their residence status will be revoked.
The Japanese government set the enforcement of the government ordinance date of the designation of coronavirus based on the infectious diseases law forward from the original February 7th to February 1st. The aforementioned designation will allow involuntary hospitalization and limitations of labor for the patients.
After receiving the WHO’s declaration of emergency, the U.S. government raised the travel advisory level among mainland Chine to the highest “Do Not Travel” level.
The Japanese Ministry of Foreign Affairs also increased the level of safety information regarding all regions in China to level 2 encouraging not to make any nonessential and nonemergency trips, in addition to the Hubei province whose infection safety level is set to level 3, strongly advising the public not to travel.
According to the data from the flight trafficking website “Flight Radar 24”, 91 flights from China had been canceled as of the afternoon of the 31st, marking an increase from 44 flights the day before. More flights are anticipated to be canceled as travel and transportation between China and the rest of the countries are rapidly shrinking.
On the 31st, the Minister of Foreign Affairs, Toshimitsu Motegi, stated that the dispatch of the fourth chartered airplane to bring back (repatriate) the Japanese citizens from Hubei province is scheduled to take off after next week.


中国・湖北省滞在の外国人、入国拒否 首相が表明

中国湖北省武漢市で発生した新型コロナウイルスによる肺炎を巡り、安倍晋三首相は31日夜に開いた対策本部会議で、湖北省に滞在していた外国人の入国を拒否すると表明した。
中国への渡航自粛の動きも広がり、警戒が一段と強まっている。
入国拒否は出入国管理法に基づく対応で、特定の国や地域を対象に適用するのは初めて。
日本でも無症状の感染者が出たことを踏まえ、当分の間、入国申請日前の14日間以内に湖北省に滞在歴がある外国人や、湖北省で発行した中国パスポートを所持する人は特段の事情がない限り入国を拒む。1日午前0時から実施する。
首相は「水際対策の実効性を一層高めて感染拡大の防止に万全を期す」と強調した。
湖北省で発行したパスポートを持っている中国人でも、日本人と結婚した配偶者や湖北省以外に長く居住している人などは入国を許可する可能性もある。
入国管理の窓口で申告する仕組みを想定し、虚偽が発覚すれば在留資格を取り消す。
政府は新型肺炎を感染症法で定める指定感染症とする政令の施行日も、当初予定の2月7日から1日に前倒しした。患者の強制入院や就業制限などの措置が可能になる。
米政府は世界保健機関(WHO)の緊急事態宣言を受け、米国人の中国全土への渡航警戒レベルを4段階中で最高の「渡航すべきではない」との水準に引き上げた。
日本の外務省も感染症危険情報で、既に渡航中止勧告(レベル3)としている湖北省以外の中国全土について不要不急の渡航中止を促すレベル2に引き上げるとともに、一時帰国を含む安全確保を検討するよう勧める海外安全情報を出した。
航空機の航路追跡サイト「フライトレーダー24」のデータによると、31日昼時点の中国発の国際線の欠航数は91便で、前日の44便から倍増した。渡航中止などで欠航はさらに広がる可能性があり、世界と中国の間の往来が急速に細りつつある。
茂木敏充外相は31日、湖北省の在留邦人を帰国させる民間チャーター機の第4便の派遣は週明け以降になるとの見通しを示した。

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According to the data from the flight trafficking website “Flight Radar 24, 91 flights from China had been canceled as of the afternoon of the 31st, marking an increase from 44 flights the day before. More flights are anticipated to be canceled as travel and transportation between China and the rest of the countries are rapidly shrinking.
On the 31st, the Minister of Foreign Affairs, Toshimitsu Motegi, stated that the dispatch of the fourth chartered airplane t
ohat is scheduled to take off after next week, will bring back (repatriate) the Japanese citizens from the Hubei province is scheduled to take off after next week.

1. In that first sentence, the comma goes within the quotation marks.
2. I rearranged your last sentence to make it more cohesive. Instead of separating the flight information, I put the two sentence fragments together and then followed it with the information about the Japanese citizens.
3. Since Hubei is a province and it isn't called Hubei Province, adding "the" before "Hubei province" makes it clear to a reader that you are referring to the province itself.

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I only noticed small details that need work, so that's good! Keep up the practice and good work.

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qwerty1980s

Feb. 4, 2020

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Thank you so much for your corrections and your kind words! I will!

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Japan Bans Entry of Foreigners from Hubei Province PM Abe Orders

Concerning the outbreak of the newly emerged coronavirus in Wuhan City, Province of Hubei, China, Japanese Prime Minister Abe announced that foreigners with a history of staying in the mentioned province will be banned from entering the country.

The announcement was made at the emergency response headquarters on the evening of the 31st.

As more and more travelers cancel their trip to China, the public is reacting vigilantly towards the situation.

This measure was based on the immigration act, h. However, this was the first time targeting a specific country or area was conducted for the first time.

This is a run-on sentence and flows better as two separate sentences.

This act includes a ban on travelers with a history of visiting Hubei Province within the 14 days of entry application date and foreign visitors with a Hubei-issued passport.

The measure will come into effect at midnight on February 1st and will be continued for an undefined amount of time.

“We will enforce every means to stop the spread of the virus by further increasing the effectivity of stopping the virus at the border, PM Abe emphasized.
If a Chinese citizen with a Hubei-issued passport has a Japanese partner or has resided outside of Hubei province for a longer period of time, he or she may be permitted entry. In such cases, visitors would be declaring their status at passport control. If a person commits perjury, their residence status will be revoked.

The Japanese government set the enforcement of the government ordinance date of the designation of coronavirus based on the infectious diseases law forward from the original February 7th to February 1st. The aforementioned designation will allow involuntary hospitalization and limitations of labor for the patients.

After receiving the WHO’s declaration of emergency, the U.S. government raised the travel advisory level among mainland Chin
ea to the highest “Do Not Travel” level.

The Japanese Ministry of Foreign Affairs also increased the level of safety information regarding all regions in China to level 2. Citizens are encouraginged to not to make any nonessential and nonemergency trips, in a. Addition to theally, Hubei province whose's infection safety level is set to level 3, strongly advising the public not to travel.

According to the data from the flight trafficking website “Flight Radar 24, 91 flights from China had been canceled as of the afternoon of the 31st, marking an increase from 44 flights the day before. More flights are anticipated to be canceled as travel and transportation between China and the rest of the countries are rapidly shrinking.
On the 31st, the Minister of Foreign Affairs, Toshimitsu Motegi, stated that the dispatch of the fourth chartered airplane to bring back (repatriate) the Japanese citizens from Hubei province is scheduled to take off after next week.

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qwerty1980s

Feb. 4, 2020

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Thank you!

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Japan Bans Entry of Foreigners from Hubei Province PM Abe Ordersper Orders from Prime Minister Abe

Concerning the outbreak of the newly emerged coronavirus in Wuhan City, in the Province of Hubei China, Japanese Prime Minister Abe announced that foreigners with a history ofho have stayinged in the aforementioned province will be banned from entering the country.

The announcement was made at the emergency response headquarters on the evening of the 31st.

As more and more travelers cancel their trips to China, the public is reacting vigilantly towards the situationto the situation with vigilance.

This measure was based on thean immigration act, however, targeting a specific country or area was conducted for the first time.

This act includes a ban on travelers with a history ofho have visitinged Hubei Province within the 14 days of their entry application date, ands well as foreign visitors with a Hubei-issued passport.

The measure will come into effect at midnight on February 1st and will be continued for an undefined amount of timein effect indefinitely.

“We will enforcuse every means to stop the spread of the virus by further increasing the effectivour capability tof stopping the virus at the border”, PM Abe emphasized.
If a Chinese citizen with a Hubei-issued passport has a Japanese partner or has resided outside of Hubei province for a longer period of time, he or she may be permitted entry. In such cases, visitors
would bemust declaringe their status at passport control. If a person commits perjury, their residence status will be revoked.
The Japanese government
setmoved the enforcement date of the government ordinance date of the designation of coronavirus based on the infectious diseases law forward from the original February 7th to February 1stforward from February 7th to February 1st based on the infectious diseases law . The aforementioned designation will allow involuntary hospitalization and labor limitations of labor for the patients.
After
receiving the WHO’s declaration of the novel coronavirus as a global emergency, the U.S. government raised theits travel advisory level amongfor mainland Chinea to the highest “Do Not Travel” level.

The Japanese Ministry of Foreign Affairs also increased the level of safety information regarding all regions inof China to level 2, encouraging citizens to not to make any nonessential andor nonemergency trips, i. In addition to the, Hubei province whose's infection safety level is set to level 3, strongly advising the public not to travelagainst travel to that region.

According to the data from the flight trafficking website “Flight Radar 24”, 91 flights from China hadve been canceled as of the afternoon of the 31st, marking an increase from 44 flights the day before. More flights are anticipated to be canceled as travel and transportation between China and othe rest of ther countries are rapidly shrinkings.
On the 31st, the Minister of Foreign Affairs
, Toshimitsu Motegi, stated that the dispatch of the fourth chartered airplane to bring back (repatriate) the Japanese citizens from Hubei province is scheduled to take offfor the next week (the week after next week).

I'm not quite sure which week is meant for that last sentence.

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qwerty1980s

Feb. 4, 2020

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Thank you so, so much for your corrections!

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Japan Bans Entry of Foreigners from Hubei Province PM Abe Orders


Japan Bans Entry of Foreigners from Hubei Province PM Abe Ordersper Orders from Prime Minister Abe

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Concerning the outbreak of the newly emerged coronavirus in Wuhan City, Province of Hubei China, Japanese Prime Minister Abe announced that foreigners with a history of staying in the mentioned province will be banned from entering the country.


Concerning the outbreak of the newly emerged coronavirus in Wuhan City, in the Province of Hubei China, Japanese Prime Minister Abe announced that foreigners with a history ofho have stayinged in the aforementioned province will be banned from entering the country.

Concerning the outbreak of the newly emerged coronavirus in Wuhan City, Province of Hubei, China, Japanese Prime Minister Abe announced that foreigners with a history of staying in the mentioned province will be banned from entering the country.

The announcement was made at the emergency response headquarters on the evening of the 31st.


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As more and more travelers cancel their trip to China, the public is reacting vigilantly towards the situation.


As more and more travelers cancel their trips to China, the public is reacting vigilantly towards the situationto the situation with vigilance.

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This measure was based on the immigration act, however, targeting a specific country or area was conducted for the first time.


This measure was based on thean immigration act, however, targeting a specific country or area was conducted for the first time.

This measure was based on the immigration act, h. However, this was the first time targeting a specific country or area was conducted for the first time.

This is a run-on sentence and flows better as two separate sentences.

This act includes a ban on travelers with a history of visiting Hubei Province within the 14 days of entry application date and foreign visitors with a Hubei-issued passport.


This act includes a ban on travelers with a history ofho have visitinged Hubei Province within the 14 days of their entry application date, ands well as foreign visitors with a Hubei-issued passport.

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The measure will come into effect at midnight on February 1st and will be continued for an undefined amount of time.


The measure will come into effect at midnight on February 1st and will be continued for an undefined amount of timein effect indefinitely.

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“We will enforce every means to stop the spread of the virus by further increasing the effectivity of stopping the virus at the border”, PM Abe emphasized. If a Chinese citizen with a Hubei-issued passport has a Japanese partner or has resided outside of Hubei province for a longer period of time, he or she may be permitted entry. In such cases, visitors would be declaring their status at passport control. If a person commits perjury, their residence status will be revoked. The Japanese government set the enforcement of the government ordinance date of the designation of coronavirus based on the infectious diseases law forward from the original February 7th to February 1st. The aforementioned designation will allow involuntary hospitalization and limitations of labor for the patients. After receiving the WHO’s declaration of emergency, the U.S. government raised the travel advisory level among mainland Chine to the highest “Do Not Travel” level.


“We will enforcuse every means to stop the spread of the virus by further increasing the effectivour capability tof stopping the virus at the border”, PM Abe emphasized.
If a Chinese citizen with a Hubei-issued passport has a Japanese partner or has resided outside of Hubei province for a longer period of time, he or she may be permitted entry. In such cases, visitors
would bemust declaringe their status at passport control. If a person commits perjury, their residence status will be revoked.
The Japanese government
setmoved the enforcement date of the government ordinance date of the designation of coronavirus based on the infectious diseases law forward from the original February 7th to February 1stforward from February 7th to February 1st based on the infectious diseases law . The aforementioned designation will allow involuntary hospitalization and labor limitations of labor for the patients.
After
receiving the WHO’s declaration of the novel coronavirus as a global emergency, the U.S. government raised theits travel advisory level amongfor mainland Chinea to the highest “Do Not Travel” level.

“We will enforce every means to stop the spread of the virus by further increasing the effectivity of stopping the virus at the border, PM Abe emphasized.
If a Chinese citizen with a Hubei-issued passport has a Japanese partner or has resided outside of Hubei province for a longer period of time, he or she may be permitted entry. In such cases, visitors would be declaring their status at passport control. If a person commits perjury, their residence status will be revoked.

The Japanese government set the enforcement of the government ordinance date of the designation of coronavirus based on the infectious diseases law forward from the original February 7th to February 1st. The aforementioned designation will allow involuntary hospitalization and limitations of labor for the patients.

After receiving the WHO’s declaration of emergency, the U.S. government raised the travel advisory level among mainland Chin
ea to the highest “Do Not Travel” level.

The Japanese Ministry of Foreign Affairs also increased the level of safety information regarding all regions in China to level 2 encouraging not to make any nonessential and nonemergency trips, in addition to the Hubei province whose infection safety level is set to level 3, strongly advising the public not to travel.


The Japanese Ministry of Foreign Affairs also increased the level of safety information regarding all regions inof China to level 2, encouraging citizens to not to make any nonessential andor nonemergency trips, i. In addition to the, Hubei province whose's infection safety level is set to level 3, strongly advising the public not to travelagainst travel to that region.

The Japanese Ministry of Foreign Affairs also increased the level of safety information regarding all regions in China to level 2. Citizens are encouraginged to not to make any nonessential and nonemergency trips, in a. Addition to theally, Hubei province whose's infection safety level is set to level 3, strongly advising the public not to travel.

According to the data from the flight trafficking website “Flight Radar 24”, 91 flights from China had been canceled as of the afternoon of the 31st, marking an increase from 44 flights the day before. More flights are anticipated to be canceled as travel and transportation between China and the rest of the countries are rapidly shrinking. On the 31st, the Minister of Foreign Affairs, Toshimitsu Motegi, stated that the dispatch of the fourth chartered airplane to bring back (repatriate) the Japanese citizens from Hubei province is scheduled to take off after next week.


According to the data from the flight trafficking website “Flight Radar 24”, 91 flights from China hadve been canceled as of the afternoon of the 31st, marking an increase from 44 flights the day before. More flights are anticipated to be canceled as travel and transportation between China and othe rest of ther countries are rapidly shrinkings.
On the 31st, the Minister of Foreign Affairs
, Toshimitsu Motegi, stated that the dispatch of the fourth chartered airplane to bring back (repatriate) the Japanese citizens from Hubei province is scheduled to take offfor the next week (the week after next week).

I'm not quite sure which week is meant for that last sentence.

According to the data from the flight trafficking website “Flight Radar 24, 91 flights from China had been canceled as of the afternoon of the 31st, marking an increase from 44 flights the day before. More flights are anticipated to be canceled as travel and transportation between China and the rest of the countries are rapidly shrinking.
On the 31st, the Minister of Foreign Affairs, Toshimitsu Motegi, stated that the dispatch of the fourth chartered airplane to bring back (repatriate) the Japanese citizens from Hubei province is scheduled to take off after next week.

According to the data from the flight trafficking website “Flight Radar 24, 91 flights from China had been canceled as of the afternoon of the 31st, marking an increase from 44 flights the day before. More flights are anticipated to be canceled as travel and transportation between China and the rest of the countries are rapidly shrinking.
On the 31st, the Minister of Foreign Affairs, Toshimitsu Motegi, stated that the dispatch of the fourth chartered airplane t
ohat is scheduled to take off after next week, will bring back (repatriate) the Japanese citizens from the Hubei province is scheduled to take off after next week.

1. In that first sentence, the comma goes within the quotation marks. 2. I rearranged your last sentence to make it more cohesive. Instead of separating the flight information, I put the two sentence fragments together and then followed it with the information about the Japanese citizens. 3. Since Hubei is a province and it isn't called Hubei Province, adding "the" before "Hubei province" makes it clear to a reader that you are referring to the province itself.

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