Last Saturday, I was watching the new movie ''Conjuring'' with some friends. Last Saturday, I was watching the new movie ''Conjuring'' with some friends.

It was the first movie I'd ever watched in an actual cinema so i was a bit excited. It was the first movie I'd ever watched in an actual cinema so i was a bit excited.

I came by bus but my friends told me that I had to be careful because there were people who racketed otherwere pushing people over. I came by bus but my friends told me that I had to be careful because there were people who were pushing people over.

But I know that the verb "racketed" doesn't sit quite well here... I'm not sure what you were trying to explain here.

I came by bustook the bus there but my friends told me that I had to be careful because there were people who racketed other people. I took the bus there but my friends told me that I had to be careful because there were people who racketed other people.

As the other commenter said, not sure about racket...

My friends weren't be racketgetting pushed over because there was a vigil (a security man) who said to th racketterstold them to stop, but they had luck people got their chance to get away. My friends weren't getting pushed over because there was a vigil (a security man) who told them to stop, but the people got their chance to get away.

My friends weren't being racketted because there was a vigil (a security man) who said tosecurity guard who told the racketters to stop but they hadwere lucky. My friends weren't being racketted because there was a security guard who told the racketters to stop but they were lucky.

Again not sure about racketting or racketters, just correcting the grammar. Also who was lucky?

Afterward, I arrived inat the cinema and we watched the movie. Afterward, I arrived at the cinema and we watched the movie.

Afterward, I arrived inat the cinema and we watched the movie. Afterward, I arrived at the cinema and we watched the movie.

We had a good laugh with my friends because sometimes, there were screamers. We had a good laugh because sometimes there were screamers.

To avoid unnecessary repetition of "my friends", I replaced it with the pronoun "we". I don't think the comma is needed in this sentence.

We had good laugh with my friends because sometimes, there were screamers. We had good laugh with my friends because sometimes, there were screamers.

''At times'' sounds more natural here, but it's not a big problem

I advice you to watch this movie if you don't oftf you don't watch horror movies often, I recommend watch scarying this movies. If you don't watch horror movies often, I recommend watching this movie.

Another way to word this: "If you haven't watched any horror movies before/yet, ..."

I advice you to watch'd recommend you guys this movie if you don't often watch scary movies / I'd recommend you guys *watch* this movie if you don't often watch scary movies. I'd recommend you guys this movie if you don't often watch scary movies / I'd recommend you guys *watch* this movie if you don't often watch scary movies

Advise (verb written with an s) is generally used in slightly more serious/formal contexts

But if you want to be really scared, I think the two first two were better (I didn't watch them but I saw ithem on internet). But if you want to be really scared, I think the first two were better (I didn't watch them but I saw them on internet).

Another way to word the first sentence: "If you want to get a really good spook, ..."

But if you really want to be really scaredwatch a scary movie, I think the two first were better (I didn't watch them but I saw it onin theatre, but I did see them on the internet). But if you really want to watch a scary movie, I think the two first were better (I didn't watch them in theatre, but I did see them on the internet).

But if you want to be really scared --> But if you really want to watch a scary movie / But if you really want a scarer / But if you really want a scary movie, I think (blah blah) / But if you really want a scary movie to watch ...