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Day 53 of My English Challenge

I have been working out six days a week, however I think that I'm going to reduce it to only three days a week in order to have more time to practice dancing. Dancing is something that I would really like to try as it's a combination between sport and art. I would like to create my own choreograpy and my own dance steps someday but for that I need to become a good dancer first. I have been watching videos of people dancing hip-hop style and I think that I like it. I'm going to try break dance and hip-hop and I'm going to choose the best one for me.
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Day 53 of My English Challenge

I have been working out six days a week, however I think that I'm going to reduce it to only three days a week in order to have more time to practice dancing.

Thanks for reading!!!

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Fernanhaiku

March 3, 2023

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Day 53 of My English Challenge

I have been working out six days a week, however I think that I'm going to reduce it to only three days a week in order to have more time to practice dancing.

I have been watching videos of people dancing hip-hop style and I think that I like it.

Thanks for reading!!!

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Fernanhaiku

March 3, 2023

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Fernanhaiku

March 3, 2023

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Day 53 of My English Challenge

I have been working out six days a week, however I think that I'm going to reduce it to only three days a week in order to have more time to practice dancing.

Dancing is something that I would really like to try as it's a combination between sport and art.

Thanks for reading!!!

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Fernanhaiku

March 3, 2023

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I have been working out six days a week, however I think that I'm going to reduce it to only three days a week in order to have more time to practice dancing.

I would like to create my own choreograpy and my own dance steps someday but for that I need to become a good dancer first.

I have been watching videos of people dancing hip-hop style and I think that I like it.

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Fernanhaiku

March 3, 2023

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I have been watching videos of people dancing hip-hop style and I think that I like it.


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I have been watching videos of people dancing hip-hop stylehip-hop dancers and I think that I like it. Ive been watching videos of hip-hop dancers and I think that I like it.

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I have been watching videos of people dancing hip-hop (style) and I think that I like it. I have been watching videos of people dancing hip-hop (style) and I think that I like it.

Day 53 of My English Challenge


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I have been working out six days a week, however I think that I'm going to reduce it to only three days a week in order to have more time to practice dancing.


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Dancing is something that I would really like to try as it's a combination between sport and art.


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I would like to create my own choreograpy and my own dance steps someday but for that I need to become a good dancer first.


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I would like to create my own choreograpy and my own dance stepmoves someday but for that I need to become a good dancer first. I would like to create my own choreograpy and my own dance moves someday but for that I need to become a good dancer first.

I would like to create my own choreography and my own dance steps someday, but for that I need to become a good dancer first. I would like to create my own choreography and my own dance steps someday, but for that I need to become a good dancer first.

I would like to create my own choreography and my own dance steps some day but for that I need to become a good dancer first. I would like to create my own choreography and my own dance steps some day but for that I need to become a good dancer first.

I'm going to try break dance and hip-hop and I'm going to choose the best one for me.


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I'm going to try to break dance and hip-hop and. Then I'm going to choose thewhat's best one for me. I'm going to try to break dance and hip-hop. Then I'm going to choose what's best for me.

I'm going to try break dance and hip-hop and then I'm going to choose the bestter one for me. I'm going to try breakdance and hip-hop and then I'm going to choose the better one for me.

With two choices, we use better or worse. With more than two choices, we use best or worst.

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