Illusomaginary Land Imaginary Land

I used to dream of a land frequently. I used to dream of a land frequently.

I used to dream of a land frequently. I used to dream of a land frequently.

I used to dream a land frequentlyfrequently dream of an imaginary land. I used to frequently dream of an imaginary land.

The land that hurted me and motivated me to leftave it and improve my own reality. The land that hurt me and motivated me to leave it and improve my own reality.

to hurt past tense is hurt (not hurted) to + infinitive

TheA land that hurted me and motivated me to leftave it and improve my own reality. A land that hurt and motivated me to leave it and improve my own reality.

The land that hurted me and motivated me to left itave and improve my own reality.life. The land hurt me and motivated me to leave and improve my life.

I still remember Shiro, one of my best friends, as well asbecause of his exceptional kindness. I still remember Shiro, one of my best friends, because of his exceptional kindness.

However, a terrible event forced me to goleave. However, a terrible event forced me to leave.

"leave" is better when you talk about going away from somewhere. "go" sounds more like you had to go there.

However, a terrible event forced me to go away. However, a terrible event forced me to go away.

Weeks, months, and years passed through and I couldn't forget the happiness of being there. Weeks, months, and years passed and I couldn't forget the happiness of being there.

When time "passes" using "through" is wrong. "pass through" is for a physical space. Plural of year is "years" If you mean only one year then you have to say "a year"

Weeks, months, and years passed through and I couldn't forget the happiness of being there. Weeks, months, and years passed and I couldn't forget the happiness of being there.

Under a year: "Weeks and months passed" Over a year: "Weeks, months, and years passed"

Weeks, months, and years passed through andbut I couldn't forget the happiness of being there. Weeks, months and years passed through but I couldn't forget the happiness of being there.

Of course, it wasn't the first time I went awayleft. Of course, it wasn't the first time I left.

"left" is better but your sentence is grammatically correct

Of course, it wasn't the first time I wenthad gone away. Of course, it wasn't the first time I had gone away.

That's why, before leftaving, I promised Shiro I'd come back: - "Don't ever leave me alone again", he said. That's why, before leaving, I promised Shiro I'd come back: - "Don't ever leave me alone again", he said.

participle of "leave" is "leaving" not "lefting"

That's why, before (I left OR leaving), I promised Shiro I'd come back: - "Don't ever leave me alone again"," he said. That's why, before (I left OR leaving), I promised Shiro I'd come back: - "Don't ever leave me alone again," he said.

That's why, before leftaving, I promised Shiro I'd come back: - "Don't ever leave me alone again", he said. That's why, before leaving I promised Shiro I'd come back: - "Don't ever leave me alone again", he said.

The day had finally had arrived. The day had finally arrived.

this flows better but i'm sorry i don't know how to explain why

When I came back home, [the beauty] captured me to the point that I would deletegive up almost everything to keep the fallacious,is mystical world. When I came back home, [the beauty] captured me to the point that I would give up almost everything to keep this mystical world.

what is "the beauty?" i don't know what you mean by "delete" almost anything but if this is what you meant this is better "Fallacious" is an odd choice because it means wrong, untrue, misleading, deceitful. it has a negative connotation

When I came back home, the beauty capturof it all captivated me to the point that I would delete almost everythingthrow it all away to keep themy fallacious, mystical world. When I came back home, the beauty of it all captivated me to the point that I would throw it all away to keep my fallacious, mystical world.

"the beauty" is ambiguous "throw it all away" is an English idiom

When I came back home, the beauty capturoverwhelmed me to the point that I would deletforsake almost everything to keep the fallacious,is mystical world. When I came back home, the beauty overwhelmed me to the point that I would forsake almost everything to keep this mystical world.

After feeling delighted withby its magnificence, I read Shiro's letters. After feeling delighted by its magnificence, I read Shiro's letters.

After feelbeing delighted with its magnificence, I read Shiro's letters. After being delighted with its magnificence, I read Shiro's letters.

After feeling delighted withenjoying its magnificence, I read Shiro's letters. After enjoying its magnificence, I read Shiro's letters.

He missed me, and I did it as well. He missed me, and I did as well.

He missed me, and I did itmissed him as well. He missed me, and I missed him as well.

He missed me, and I did it as wellmissed him too. He missed me, and I missed him too.

- "Don't worry, I'll be back as soon as I get throughover this problem"," I answered him. - "Don't worry, I'll be back as soon as I get over this problem," I answered him.

answered OR replied

- "Don't worry, I'll be back as soon as I get through this problem", I answered himreplied. - "Don't worry, I'll be back as soon as I get through this problem", I replied.

However, he didn't know that the reason I took years to come back was not only because there wasn't any space left in my backpack, but also in my heart. However, he didn't know that the reason I took years to come back was not only because there wasn't any space left in my backpack, but also in my heart.

However, he didn't know that the reason Iit took years to come back was not only because there wasn't space left in my backpack, but also in my heart, too. However, he didn't know that the reason it took years to come back was not only because there wasn't space left in my backpack, but in my heart, too.

"there wasn't space left in my backpack" Why did this stop you from coming back?

I took a piece of paper and wrote the first thing that came to my mind: "It has been so long... I took a piece of paper and wrote the first thing that came to mind: "It has been so long...

"to come to mind" is a set expression

I took a piece of paper and wrote the first thing that came to my mind: "It has been so long... I took a piece of paper and wrote the first thing that came to mind: "It has been so long...

I missed you so badly. I miss you so badly.