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March 11, 2023

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Writing Challenge, Day 161

Today is day 161 of my daily English writing challenge. Today is a big challenge I am doing right now. If I didn't correct all of mistake on my journal. I could not improve the language.

I decided to post and to add what I want to say. I need to focus more. Go Courageuse19!

This is my journal that I posted the last time.https://langcorrect.com/journal/writing-challenge-day-154/


First of all, Forgive me if I bother you to correct me.๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

Today I bought a small mold to prepare another recipe. I have many molds but I prefer to use smaller mold for this recipe and because Mom and my siter have diabet. I also went to the phone seller to see my friend and show her from my phone all the videos and picture of my recipes.

She gave me her ideas and she liked almost everything about them but she didn't like one picture the way the food was arranged on a plate.we were in agreement on it.

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Writing Challenge, Day 161

Today is day 161 of my daily English writing challenge.

I need to focus more.

Today I bought a small mold to prepare another recipe.

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courageuse19

March 24, 2023

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Today is day 161 of my daily English writing challenge.

I need to focus more.

Go Courageuse19!

This is my journal that I posted the last time.https://langcorrect.com/journal/writing-challenge-day-154/

Today I bought a small mold to prepare another recipe.

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courageuse19

March 11, 2023

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Writing Challenge, Day 161


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Today is day 161 of my daily English writing challenge.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Today is a big challenge I am doing right now.


Today is a big challenge I am doing right nowfor me. Today is a big challenge for me.

Today isI'm going to do a big challenge I am doing rightas I write now. Today I'm going to do a big challenge as I write now.

If I didn't correct all of mistake on my journal.


If I didn't correct all of the mistakes on my journal., If I didn't correct all of the mistakes on my journal,

If I didn't correct all of mistake on my journal.

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I could not improve the language.


I could not improve themy english language skills. I could not improve my english language skills.

If I didn't correct all of my mistakes in my journal, I could not improve my use of the language. If I didn't correct all of my mistakes in my journal, I could not improve my use of the language.

I decided to post and to add what I want to say.


I decided to post and to add what I want to say. I decided to post what I want to say.

I decided to post and tohen add what I want to say. I decided to post and then add what I want to say.

I need to focus more.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Go Courageuse19!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Go Courageuse19, me! Go, me!

We don't really refer to ourselves in third person in the US but I can refer to you by name. Yes, go, Courageuse19!

This is my journal that I posted the last time.https://langcorrect.com/journal/writing-challenge-day-154/


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This is mythe journal entry that I posted the last time.: https://langcorrect.com/journal/writing-challenge-day-154/ This is the journal entry that I posted the last time: https://langcorrect.com/journal/writing-challenge-day-154/

First of all, Forgive me if I bother you to correct me.๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š


First of all, Fforgive me if I botherwant you to correct me.๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š First of all, forgive me if I want you to correct me.๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

First of all, Fforgive me if I bother you towhen you correct me.๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š First of all, forgive me if I bother you when you correct me.๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

There's no need to apologize. That's what we're here for! Besides, I like correcting your journal entries. ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

Today I bought a small mold to prepare another recipe.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I have many molds but I prefer to use smaller mold for this recipe and because Mom and my siter have diabet.


I have many molds but I prefer to use a smaller mold for this recipe and also because Mom and my sister have diabetes. I have many molds but I prefer to use a smaller mold for this recipe and also because Mom and my sister have diabetes.

I have many molds but I prefer to use a smaller mold for this recipe and because Mom and my sister have diabetes. I have many molds but I prefer to use a smaller mold for this recipe because Mom and my sister have diabetes.

I also went to the phone seller to see my friend and show her from my phone all the videos and picture of my recipes.


I also went to the phone seller to see my friend and show her from my phone all the videos and picture of my recipes on my phone. I also went to the phone seller to see my friend and show her all the videos and picture of my recipes on my phone.

I also went to the phone seller to see my friend and show her from my phone all the videos and pictures of my recipes from my phone. I also went to the phone seller to see my friend and show her all the videos and pictures of my recipes from my phone.

She gave me her ideas and she liked almost everything about them but she didn't like one picture the way the food was arranged on a plate.we were in agreement on it.


She gave me her ideas and she liked almost everything about them but she didn't like one picture because of the way the food was arranged on a plate.w We were in agreement on it. She gave me her ideas and she liked almost everything about them but she didn't like one picture because of the way the food was arranged on a plate. We were in agreement on it.

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