The global financial market is wavering with the coronavirus outbreak.

The Dow Jones Index on the 27th (of what month) declined by 453 points, marking the largest drop in three and a half months.

The way you wrote it is good, but I think that it would be a bit better if you added the month to clarify a little more

The Asian stocks, crude oil, and nonferrous metal prices have fallen as well.

With thea fear of a global recession, the investors are avoiding the risk.

Dow Jones ended the 27th at 28535.80, marking 5 consecutive days of price drops since August 2018.

Is 28535.80 a price? If so you should make it "$28,535.80". If not you can leave it as is

“The pressure of selloff is too strong with more trades (商いを伴った下落?) …” said David Lutz, managing director of ETF at Jones Trading. FTSE 100 on the London stock exchange fell to a low for the first time in a month and a half. Stocks of certain companies whose performance is almost certainly anticipated to affect the prices were targeted by the short-sellers. Major airline company KLM’s stock prices dropped as much as 6% on the 27th. The number of passengers is expected to decline in the mood of abstaining from (refraining from? avoiding? ) traveling due to the outbreak. ¶
As the Chinese government banned citizens from booking overseas tour groups, the reduction of an ‘inbound consumption’ is anticipated. The largest conglomerate on luxury brands LVMH’s stocks also hit thea low for the first time since December. ¶
With the decision of extending the Lunar New Year holiday, the concern towards the manufacturing industry including high-tech manufacturing was also noticeable. A large number of American corporations depend on China for manufacturing and supply of goods and parts. ¶
“If the factories remain shut down, the effect on the supply chain will not be negligible”, said Tim Grisky, Chief Investment Strategist at Inverness Counsel.

At the Tokyo Stock Exchange on the 28th, Honda’s stocks, whose joint factory in Wuhan is responsible for half of their Chinese manufacturing, had their dropped as much as 2%.

Coronavirus Risk Causes Chain of Stock Drops, Nikkei index Down by 200 Points

The global financial market is wavering widue to the coronavirus outbreak.

The Dow Jones Index on the 27th declindropped by 453 points on the 27th, marking the largest drop in three and a half months.

The chain of stock market drops continued on as the Japanese Nikkei index dropped by 200 points.

The Asian stocks, crude oil, and nonferrous metal prices have fallen as well.

With the fear of a global recession, the investors are avoiding the risk.

Dow Jones ended the 27th at 28535.80 points, marking 5 consecutive days of price drops since August 2018.

“The pressure of selloff is too strong with more trades (商いを伴った下落?) …” said David Lutz, managing director of ETF at Jones Trading. FTSE 100 on the London stock exchange fell to aits low first timeest point in a month and a half. Stocks of certain companies whose performance is almost certainly anticipated to affect the prices were targeted by the short-sellers. Major airline company KLM’s stock prices dropped as much as 6% on the 27th. The number of passengers is expected to decline in the mood of abstaining (refraining from? avoiding? )from traveling due to the outbreak. ¶
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As the Chinese government banned citizens from booking overseas tour groups, thea reduction of an ‘inbound consumption’ is anticipated. The largest conglomerate onf luxury brands LVMH’s stocks also hit thea low for the first time since December. ¶
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With the decision tof extending the Lunar New Year holiday, the concern towardsabout the manufacturing industry, including high-tech, was also noticeable. A large number of American corporations depend on China for manufacturing and supply of goods and parts. ¶
“If the factories remain shut down, the effect on the supply chain will not be negligible”, said Tim Grisky, Chief Investment Strategist at Inverness Counsel.

At the Tokyo Stock Exchange on the 28th, Honda’s stocks, whose joint factory in Wuhan is responsible for half of their Chinese manufacturing, saw their stocks dropped as much as 2%.

Semiconductors and machinery, whose stocks are contingent on the prospects of the Chinese economy, were underwent a selloff as well.