Nov. 17, 2020
Journal 11/17/20
This morning, I woke up late. It was almost 8 am when I woke up and it was raining outside. I can’t go to work by bike on rainy days, so I decided to call Didi. It is so difficult to get a Didi on a rainy day and I can only carpool. I carpool with three people, so the ride took a bit longer than usual. Because my bicycle is at home, I have to take sharing bikes to go home when I am after work in the morning, but if it rains, I still need to carpool to go home.
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Journal 11/17/20
This morning, I woke up late.
It was almost 8 am when I woke up, and it was raining outside. It was almost 8 am when I woke up, and it was raining outside.
I can’t gobike to work by bike on rainy days, so I decided to call Didi.
I can’t bike to work on rainy days, so I decided to call Didi.
What you wrote was correct, but this is more succinct.
It is so difficult to get a Didi on a rainy day, and I can only carpool. It is so difficult to get a Didi on a rainy day, and I can only carpool.
I carpooled with three people, so the ride took a bit longer than usual. I carpooled with three people, so the ride took a bit longer than usual.
Because my bicycle is at home, I have to take sharing bikes to go home when I am after work in the morning, but if it rains, I still need to carpool to go home. Because my bicycle is at home, I have to take sharing bikes to go home when I am after work in the morning, but if it rains, I still need to carpool to go home.
The middle part of the sentence is a bit unclear. Do you mean that because you left your bike at home in the morning, you need to borrow a bike to go home in the evening?
Nov. 17, 2020
Because my bicycle is at home, I have to take sharing bikes to go home when I am after work in the morning, but if it rains, I still need to carpool to go home.
The middle part of the sentence is a bit unclear. Do you mean that because you left your bike at home in the morning, you need to borrow a bike to go home in the evening?
You are right. But I usually get off work at 11:30, so I don't need to wait until the evening.
Nov. 17, 2020
Ah, okay. So I would write the sentence like this: "When I leave my bicycle at home, I have to borrow another bike to return from work, but if it rains, I carpool home."
(Carpool is a verb as well as a noun.)
Does that help?
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This morning, I woke up late. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It was almost 8 am when I woke up and it was raining outside. It was almost 8 am when I woke up, and it was raining outside. It was almost 8 am when I woke up, and it was raining outside. |
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I can’t go to work by bike on rainy days, so I decided to call Didi.
I can’t What you wrote was correct, but this is more succinct. |
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It is so difficult to get a Didi on a rainy day and I can only carpool. It is so difficult to get a Didi on a rainy day, and I can only carpool. It is so difficult to get a Didi on a rainy day, and I can only carpool. |
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I carpool with three people, so the ride took a bit longer than usual. I carpooled with three people, so the ride took a bit longer than usual. I carpooled with three people, so the ride took a bit longer than usual. |
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Because my bicycle is at home, I have to take sharing bikes to go home when I am after work in the morning, but if it rains, I still need to carpool to go home. Because my bicycle is at home, I have to take sharing bikes to go home when I am after work in the morning, but if it rains, I still need to carpool to go home. Because my bicycle is at home, I have to take sharing bikes to go home when I am after work in the morning, but if it rains, I still need to carpool to go home. The middle part of the sentence is a bit unclear. Do you mean that because you left your bike at home in the morning, you need to borrow a bike to go home in the evening? |
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