In my opinion, becoming an educated person is harder now, than in the past. In my opinion, becoming an educated person is harder now, than in the past.

Although the sentence was correct, I feel it sounds better this way.

In my opinion, becoming an educated person is harder thannow than it was in the past. In my opinion, becoming an educated person is harder now than it was in the past.

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ThoseI have two reasonarguments to support my opinion. I have two arguments to support my opinion.

In the current decade, people could get to know the whole world through the internet link at home. In the current decade, people could get to know the whole world through the internet link at home.

"Decade" refers to the last 10 years. I think it might be better to write "In the current age" or "In the present".

In theis current decade, people couldan know what is happening in the world through the internet link at home. In this current decade, people can know what is happening in the world through the internet.

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Edits make the sentence more assertive

Therefore, timhe times have changed, and people have changed too. Therefore, the times have changed, and people have changed too.

Therefore, tim times have changed, and people changed. also. The times have changed and people changed also.

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I'm not sure what the original intention of the sentence was, but I think this is what you meant to say.

Getting anIn today’s society education is not the only way to calibratmeasure a person's achievement for now.s. In today’s society education is not the only way to measure a person's achievements.

The previous generation always says, “ the young generation is the luckier one, compared withto the last generation.” In their view, the young generation doesn’t need to confront the burden of life, warfare, and hunger.” I agreed. The previous generation always says, “ the young generation is the luckier one, compared to the last generation.” In their view, the young generation doesn’t need to confront the burden of life, warfare, and hunger. I agree.

The previous generation always says, “ the younger generation is the luckier one, compared withto the last generation.” In their view, the younger generation doesn’t need to confront the burden of life, warfare, and hunger.” I agreed. The previous generation always says, “ the younger generation is the luckier one, compared to the last generation.” In their view, the younger generation don’t need to confront the burden of life, warfare, and hunger.” I agree.

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But instead, the younger generation faces more luretemptations from entertainment sources. But instead, the younger generation faces more temptations from entertainment sources.

Because some of them have more time to waste and play online. Because some of them have more time to waste and play online.

Because some of them have more time to waste and play online. Because some of them have more time to waste and play online.

The success of the internet brings a huge convenience to them, that canallows them to get information as soon as possible. The success of the internet brings a huge convenience to them, that allows them to get information as soon as possible.

The success of the internet brings a huge convenience to them thatas they can get information as soon as possible. The success of the internet brings a huge convenience to them as they can get information as soon as possible.

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If a person has not self-discipline, they will be lost in entertainment and doom failure on hised to fail their education study. If a person has no self-discipline, they will be lost in entertainment and doomed to fail their education.

They instead of he is the better way of wording this