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My chaos so far
I have been living in Australia for one year. After that, I spent three months travelling around South East Asia. For Christmas I went back to my country to celebrate all the festivities with my family as I didn't see them for 15 months. When I landed in my hometown eveything felt a bit different. I truly could say that I am completely a different person since I left. My family and friends were still the same but I felt that something inside me had changed forever.
With the opportunity to go back to Australia, I spent almost three months in my country thinking about this issue. Should I go back to Australia or should I stay here and go back to the routine that I used to follow before leaving for the first time?
After many days of thinking and considering this topic with my friends and family, I decided to go back again. Everyone said that this experience will be forever with me and also that not everyone has the opportunity to do it. So I booked my flight.
Apparently, eveything was going great. I spent some time preparing my luggage and thinking how the start of my second year in Australia would be. But in a moment, my plans changed for completely. A big issue started around the world with the impossibility to take that flight that I booked full of joy. This abrupt change made me start being so thoughtful if this was the correct decision or not. I truly believe that everything happens for a reason and that flight that I had to take was not for me.
Now, with a different perspective, I am considering different options altough one of my dreams would be to go back down under.
Now it is time to see what life has prepared for me.
My chaos so far
I have been living in Australia for one year.
After that, I spent three months travelling around South Eeast Asia.
For Christmas I went back to my country to celebrate all the festivities with my family as I dihadn't seen them for 15 months.
WBut when I landed in my hometown everything felt a bit different.
I truly could say that I am a completely a different person since I left.
My family and friends were still the same but I felt that something inside me had changed forever.
With the opportunity to go back to Australia, I spent almost three months in my country thinking about this issue.
Should I go back to Australia or should I stay here and go back to the routine that I used to follow before leaving for the first time?
After many days of thinking and considering this topic with my friends and family, I decided to go back again.
Everyone said that this experience willould be forever with me and also that not everyone has the opportunity to do it.
So I booked my flight.
Apparently,It seemed like everything was going great.
"Apparently" is something I'd say for something which surprises me, or which I did not know.
I spent some time preparing my luggage and thinking how the start of my second year in Australia would be.
But in just a moment, my plans changed for completely.
A big issue started around the world with, leading to the impossibility to take that flight that I booked full of joy.
This abrupt change made me start being so thoughtful ifthinking about whether this was the correct decision or not.
I truly believe that everything happens for a reason and that flight that I had planned to take was not for me.
Now, with a different perspective, I am considering different options, although one of my dreams would be to go back down under.
Now it is time to see what life has prepared for me.
Feedback
Very well written! Most of my corrections are just more natural rephrasing. Well done!
My chaos so far
I have been livinglived in Australia for one year.
After that, I spent three months travelling around South East Asia.
For Christmas I went back to my country to celebrate all the festivities with my family as I {didn't see | hadn’t seen} them for 15 months.
When I landed in my hometown eveything felt a bit different.
I truly could say that I am completely a different person since I left.
My family and friends were still the same but I felt that something inside me had changed forever.
With the opportunity to go back to Australia, I spent almost three months in my country thinking about this issue.
Should I go back to Australia or should I stay here and go back to the routine that I used to follow before leaving for the first time?
After many days of thinking and considering this topic with my friends and family, I decided to go back again.
Everyone said that this experience will be {forever with me | with me forever} and also that not everyone has the opportunity to do it.
So I booked my flight.
Apparently | Seemingly, everything was going great.
I spent some time preparing my luggage and thinking how the start of my second year in Australia would be.
But in a moment, my plans changed for completely.
A big issue started around the world with theand made it impossibilityle to take that flight that I had booked full of joy.
This abrupt change made me start being so thoughtful {if | about whether} this was the correct decision or not.
I truly believe that everything happens for a reason and that flight that I had planned to take was not for me.
Now, with a different perspective, I am considering different options, altough one of my dreams would be to go back down under.
Now it is time to see what life has prepared for me.
Feedback
I like your philosophy of accepting what happens and flowing with it.
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I spent some time preparing my luggage and thinking how the start of my second year in Australia would be. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I truly believe that everything happens for a reason and that flight that I had to take was not for me. I truly believe that everything happens for a reason and that flight that I had planned to take was not for me. I truly believe that everything happens for a reason and that flight that I had planned to take was not for me. |
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Now, with a different perspective, I am considering different options altough one of my dreams would be to go back down under. Now, with a different perspective, I am considering different options, altough one of my dreams would be to go back down under. Now, with a different perspective, I am considering different options, although one of my dreams would be to go back down under. |
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