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Book review "The Fault In Our Stars".

I found this book by accident. It was on the sale shelf and cost a little bit more than two bucks. I saw the familiar cover, it was the frame from the movie I watched even though I didn't remember when.
I will start with a small description. The story is about a boy and girl, and they have cancer. They met each other in the support group. Augustus lose his leg, but when he met Hazel he had a remission. Unfortunately, Hazel had the worst forecasts, attacks of lug pain happened to her. It was love from the first sign for her. Augustus had a girlfriend before and one year ago she died of cancer. This bad experience didn't stop him to offer Hazel a relationship. The support group gives every child who fights cancer a spatial opportunity, they perform one of the child's dreams. Augustus spent his dream for Hazel. They went to Amsterdam because her favorite book author lived there and promised to tell her the sequel of her favorite book. During this trip he told her about his cancer return and that he has just several months before his death. It was an awful period for both of them. his condition became worth and worth. Nobody could expect Hazel will hurry her love. It is life and everything can happen.

If comparing the book and movie, of course, the book is better. I am satisfied that I found this book and lived small life with these two guys in love.

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I found this book by accident.

I will start with a small description.

The story is about a boy and girl, and they have cancer.

Augustus had a girlfriend before and one year ago she died of cancer.

They went to Amsterdam because her favorite book author lived there and promised to tell her the sequel of her favorite book.

It was an awful period for both of them.

Book review "The Fault In Our Stars".


Book review for "The Fault In Our Stars". Book review for "The Fault In Our Stars".

Book review of: "The Fault In Our Stars". Book review of: "The Fault In Our Stars".

I found this book by accident.


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I foundcame across this book by accident. I came across this book by accident.

It was on the sale shelf and cost a little bit more than two bucks.


It was on the sale shelf and costed a little bit more than two bucks. It was on the sale shelf and costed a little bit more than two bucks.

It was on the salclearance shelf and only cost a little bit more than two bucks. It was on the clearance shelf and only cost a little more than two bucks.

I saw the familiar cover, it was the frame from the movie I watched even though I didn't remember when.


I saw theThe cover was familiar cover,to me; it was the frame from thea movie I watched even though I didn't remember from when. The cover was familiar to me; it was the frame from a movie I watched even though I didn't remember from when.

I saw thea familiar cover,; it was the frame from the movie I watched even though I didn't remember when. I saw a familiar cover; it was the frame from the movie I watched even though I didn't remember when.

I saw the familiar cover, it was the fram which was a scene from the movie. I watched even thoughsaw it at one point but I didon't remember when. I saw the familiar cover which was a scene from the movie. I saw it at one point but I don't remember when.

I will start with a small description.


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I will start with a smallhort description. I will start with a short description.

I think short fits better here because small refers to size while short refers to length

The story is about a boy and girl, and they have cancer.


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The story is about a boy and a girl, and they that both have cancer. The story is about a boy and a girl that both have cancer.

They met each other in the support group.


They met each other in thea support group. They met each other in a support group.

They met each other in the cancer support group. They met each other in the cancer support group.

"support group" isn't normally used on its own, even if the context makes it clear for which topic the support group is for.

They met each other in thea support group. They met each other in a support group.

Only use 'the' if you've already indicated which support group they met in

Augustus lose his leg, but when he met Hazel he had a remission.


Augustus loset his leg, but when he met Hazel he had a remission. Augustus lost his leg, but when he met Hazel he had a remission.

Augustus loset his leg, but when he met Hazel he had a remission. Augustus lost his leg, but when he met Hazel he had a remission.

Augustus loset his leg, but whenaround the time he met Hazel he had awas in remission. Augustus lost his leg, but around the time he met Hazel he was in remission.

The original phrasing makes it sound like he went into remission because he met Hazel

Unfortunately, Hazel had the worst forecasts, attacks of lug pain happened to her.


Unfortunately, Hazel had the worst forecasts, suffering attacks of lung pain happened to her. Unfortunately, Hazel had the worst forecast, suffering attacks of lung pain.

Unfortunately, Hazel had the worst forecasts,e diagnosis-- attacks of lung pain happened toplagued her. Unfortunately, Hazel had the worse diagnosis-- attacks of lung pain plagued her.

Worst - superlative (the most worse) Worse - comparative (more bad than the other) I think you meant diagnosis: the list and description of conditions/illnesses "to plague" = to persistently bother and affect someone

Unfortunately, Hazel had the worst forecasts, attacks of lug pain happened to hera terrible prognosis and bouts of severe pain in her lungs. Unfortunately, Hazel had a terrible prognosis and bouts of severe pain in her lungs.

It was love from the first sign for her.


It was love from theat first signht for her. It was love at first sight for her.

It was love from the first signht for her. It was love from first sight for her.

IBut for her it was love from theat first sign for herht. But for her it was love at first sight.

Augustus had a girlfriend before and one year ago she died of cancer.


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Augustus had a girlfriend before and one year ago she died of cancerwho died of cancer the year before he met Hazel. Augustus had a girlfriend who died of cancer the year before he met Hazel.

This bad experience didn't stop him to offer Hazel a relationship.


This bad experience didn't stop him to offer Hazelfrom being in a relationship with Hazel. This bad experience didn't stop him from being in a relationship with Hazel.

This bad experience didn't stop him to offer Hazelfrom entering a relationship with Hazel. This bad experience didn't stop him from entering a relationship with Hazel.

This bsad experience didn't stop him to offer Hazelfrom being open to having a relationship with Hazel. This sad experience didn't stop him from being open to having a relationship with Hazel.

The support group gives every child who fights cancer a spatial opportunity, they perform one of the child's dreams.


The support group gives every child who fightsith cancer a spatecial opportunity, t. They perform one of the child's dreams. The support group gives every child with cancer a special opportunity. They perform one of the child's dreams.

The support group gives every child who fights cancer a spatecial (?) opportunity,: they performwill fulfill one of the child's dreams. The support group gives every child who fights cancer a special (?) opportunity: they will fulfill one of the child's dreams.

The support group gives every childmember who fights cancer a spatecial opportunity, t. They performbring to life one of the child'stheir dreams. The support group gives every member who fights cancer a special opportunity. They bring to life one of the their dreams.

Augustus spent his dream for Hazel.


Augustus spent his dreamgiven opportunity for Hazel. Augustus spent his given opportunity for Hazel.

Augustus spent his dream forwish on Hazel. Augustus spent his wish on Hazel.

They went to Amsterdam because her favorite book author lived there and promised to tell her the sequel of her favorite book.


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They went to Amsterdam because her favorite book author lived there and. This author promised to tell her the name to the sequel of her favorite book. They went to Amsterdam because her favorite book author lived there. This author promised to tell her the name to the sequel of her favorite book.

During this trip he told her about his cancer return and that he has just several months before his death.


During this trip he told her about his cancer retcurnrence and that he has just several months before his death. During this trip he told her about his cancer recurrence and that he has just several months before his death.

During this trip he told her abouthat his cancer had returned and that he hasd just several months beforeuntil his death. During this trip he told her that his cancer had returned and that he had just several months until his death.

During this trip he told her abouthat his cancer had returned and that he has just several months before his deatha couple months to live. During this trip he told her that his cancer had returned and that he has just a couple months to live.

It was an awful period for both of them.


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It was an awful perrealizatiodn for both of them. It was an awful realization for both of them.

his condition became worth and worth.


hHis condition became worthse and worthse. His condition became worse and worse.

hHis condition became worthse and worthse. His condition became worse and worse.

hHis condition became worth and worthcontinued to worsen. His condition continued to worsen.

Nobody could expect Hazel will hurry her love.


Nobody could expect Hazel willto hurry her love. Nobody could expect Hazel to hurry her love.

Nobody one could expectask for Hazel willto hurry her love. (?) No one could ask for Hazel to hurry her love. (?)

Not sure about your intent here, but if "expect" was the right word, then the usage is "expect (someone) to do (something)" "Nobody" and "no one" have the same usage, but "no one" is more formal and suited for this book review

Nobody cwould expect for Hazel will hurryto hasten her love for him. Nobody would expect for Hazel to hasten her love for him.

It is life and everything can happen.


It is life and everanything can happen. It is life and anything can happen.

It iThat's life and everanything can happen. That's life and anything can happen.

If comparing the book and movie, of course, the book is better.


IfWhen comparing the book and movie, of course, the book is better. When comparing the book and movie, of course, the book is better.

If cComparing the book andto the movie, of course, the book is definitely better. Comparing the book to the movie, the book is definitely better.

I am satisfied that I found this book and lived small life with these two guys in love.


I am satisfied that I found this book and livedexperienced a small life with these two guysis couple in love. I am satisfied that I found this book and experienced a small life with this couple in love.

I am satisfied that I found this book and lived small life with these two guys in love.experienced these two characters' love for a while. (?) I am satisfied that I found this book and experienced these two characters' love for a while. (?)

"guys" imply that they are both male. "guys" as an ungendered term is general and uncountable. Once you stay indicating the number of "guys," it implies that you are referring to males.

I am satisfieglad that I found this book and livexperienced a small life with these two guys in lovepart of their love story. I am glad that I found this book and experienced a small part of their love story.

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