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Today I read an article about a Chinese singer or musician. Media crowded him, then after dramatic exposure, he had mental issues and went to the hospital.

I like his signature song that is called My Skateboard Shoes. It is an honest and beautiful song. Except for the lyrics written by this singer, most honors need to become to the producers. Sadly, I think his musical talent is less sure, so I don't know how far he could go.

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It is an honest and beautiful song.

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MThe media crowhounded him, thenand after dramatic expotoo much pressure, he had mental issues and went to the hospital.

'Hounding' is a great word to use here, meaning that he is constantly being followed and bothered doggedly.

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It is an honest and beautiful song.

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Except for the lyrics written by this singer, most honors need to becomecredits should be given to the producerstion team.

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It is an honest and beautiful song.

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Media crowded him, then after dramatic exposurexcessive exposure of his personal life, he had mental issues and went to the hospital.

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Except for the lyrics written by this singer, most honors need to become to the producers.

I don't understand this.

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Media crowded him, then after dramatic exposure, he had mental issues and went to the hospital.

what do you mean by "dramatic exposure"?

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Except for the lyrics written by this singer, most honors need to become to the producers.

most honors need to become to the producers
what do you mean here?

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Sadly, I think his musical talent is less sure, so I don't know how far he could go.

less sure, so I don't know how far he could go.
what do you mean here?

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We generally put spaces between a dash if they are two separate words.

Today I read an article about a Chinese singer or musician.


Today I read an article about a Chinese singer or /musician. Today I read an article about a Chinese singer/musician.

if you are unsure if the person is a singer or musician you can write singer/musician.

Today I read an article about a Chinese singer or musician. Today I read an article about a Chinese singer or musician.

I agree with sikboy. I often use a slash when I’m referring to something I’m not 100% sure about - or a thing that has multiple meanings, and I want to convey that.

Today I read an article about a Chinese singer or /musician. Today I read an article about a Chinese singer/musician.

Today I read an article about a Chinese singer orand musician. Today I read an article about a Chinese singer and musician.

Media crowded him, then after dramatic exposure, he had mental issues and went to the hospital.


Media crowded him, then after dramatic exposure, he had mental issues and went to the hospital. Media crowded him, then after dramatic exposure, he had mental issues and went to the hospital.

what do you mean by "dramatic exposure"?

Media crowdThe media stalked him, thenand after dramatic exposure, he haa while, he developed mental issues and went to the hospital. The media stalked him, and after a while, he developed mental issues and went to the hospital.

Media crowded him, then after dramatic exposurexcessive exposure of his personal life, he had mental issues and went to the hospital. Media crowded him, then after excessive exposure of his personal life, he had mental issues and went to the hospital.

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MThe media crowhounded him, thenand after dramatic expotoo much pressure, he had mental issues and went to the hospital. The media hounded him, and after too much pressure, he had mental issues and went to the hospital.

'Hounding' is a great word to use here, meaning that he is constantly being followed and bothered doggedly.

I like his signature song that is called My Skateboard Shoes.


I like his signature song that is called My Skateboard Shoes. I like his signature song called My Skateboard Shoes.

I like his signature song, that is calitled "My Skateboard Shoes". I like his signature song, titled "My Skateboard Shoes".

I like his signature song that is called, My Skateboard Shoes. I like his signature song, My Skateboard Shoes.

This is another short and clear alternative.

I like his signature song that is called My Skateboard Shoes. I like his signature song called My Skateboard Shoes.

I like his signature song that is called, My Skateboard Shoes. I like his signature song, My Skateboard Shoes.

It is an honest and beautiful song.


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Except for the lyrics written by this singer, most honors need to become to the producers.


Except for the lyrics written by this singer, most honors need to become to the producers. Except for the lyrics written by this singer, most honors need to become to the producers.

most honors need to become to the producers what do you mean here?

Except for the lyrics written by this singer, most honors need to become to the producers. Except for the lyrics written by this singer, most honors need to become to the producers.

I don't understand this.

Except for the lyrics written by this singer, most honors need to become toly everything else in his music is created by the producerstion team. Except for the lyrics written by this singer, mostly everything else in his music is created by the production team.

I understood your original sentence but here’s yet another phrasing 👍

Except for the lyrics written by this singer, most honors need to becomethe credit should go to the producers. Except for the lyrics written by this singer, the credit should go to the producers.

Using "producers" implies a type of music that is heavily edited in the studio. Otherwise, it could be "other musicians."

Except for the lyrics written by this singer, most honors need to becomecredits should be given to the producerstion team. Except for the lyrics written by this singer, most credits should be given to the production team.

Except for the lyrics written by this singer, most honors need to become to the producers. Except for the lyrics written by this singer, most honors need to become to the producers.

I'm not quite sure what you mean here.

Sadly, I think his musical talent is less sure, so I don't know how far he could go.


Sadly, I think his musical talent is less sure, so I don't know how far he could go. Sadly, I think his musical talent is less sure, so I don't know how far he could go.

less sure, so I don't know how far he could go. what do you mean here?

Sadly, I think his musical talent is less sure, so I don't know how far he could gogoing to disappear (after this incident), so I don't know what will happen after this. Sadly, I think his musical talent is going to disappear (after this incident), so I don't know what will happen after this.

Sadly, I think his musical talent is less sureremains to be proven, so I don't know how far he could gohis career will develop. Sadly, I think his musical talent remains to be proven, so I don't know how his career will develop.

Sadly, I think his musical talent is less sureuncertain now, so I don't know how far he could go. Sadly, I think his musical talent is uncertain now, so I don't know how far he could go.

Sadly, I think his musical talent is less surmore questionable, so I don't know how far he could goan get in his musical career. Sadly, I think his musical talent is more questionable, so I don't know how far he can get in his musical career.

I hope I interpreted this properly, might have not given that the previous sentence was unclear. Let me know if I misinterpreted.

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