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Sept. 6, 2022

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Dragonfly

I've been interested in dragonflies recently.
While previous trip, I could see many dragonflies, because I went to countryside.
The end of August seems to be dragonfly season.
There were various kind of dragonflies, like orange one, blue and big one, blue and thin one, and black one etc...
It was like a dragonfly kingdom.


最近、トンボに興味があります。
この間の旅行では、田舎に行ったので、沢山トンボが見れました。
8月の下旬はトンボの季節みたいです。
オレンジ色のや青くて大きいの、青くて細いの、黒いのなどいろんな種類がいました。
まるでトンボの王国のようでした。

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Dragonfly

The end of August seems to be dragonfly season.

It was like a dragonfly kingdom.

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milkyway

Sept. 7, 2022

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milkyway

Sept. 7, 2022

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Dragonfly

I've been interested in dragonflies recently.

The end of August seems to be dragonfly season.

It was like a dragonfly kingdom.

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milkyway

Sept. 7, 2022

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Dragonfly


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I've been interested in dragonflies recently.


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I've beetaken an interested in dragonflies recently. I've taken an interest in dragonflies recently.

While previous trip, I could see many dragonflies, because I went to countryside.


While on a previous trip, I could seesaw many dragonflies, because I went to the countryside. While on a previous trip, I saw many dragonflies, because I went to the countryside.

'i could see' could work here, but 'i saw' is more natural

WhileOn a previous trip to the countryside, I could see many dragonflies, because I went to countryside. On a previous trip to the countryside, I could see many dragonflies

"While" is often used with a verb like saying "While I was visiting the countryside"

WhileDuring my previous trip, I could see many dragonflies, because I went to the countryside. During my previous trip, I could see many dragonflies, because I went to the countryside.

The end of August seems to be dragonfly season.


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There were various kind of dragonflies, like orange one, blue and big one, blue and thin one, and black one etc...


There were various kinds of dragonflies, like orange ones, blueig and biglue ones, bluethin and thinblue one, and black ones etc... There were various kinds of dragonflies, like orange ones, big and blue ones, thin and blue one, and black ones etc...

colours would go after the adjectives here!

There were various kind of dragonflies, likeincluding orange ones, blue and big one, blue and thin one, andig blue ones, thin blue ones, black ones etc... There were various kind of dragonflies, including orange ones, big blue ones, thin blue ones, black ones etc...

When giving general examples, we often use the plural forms. If you want to emphasize that you only saw one of each kind, make sure to include the article and say "including an orange one, a big blue one etc..."

There were various kinds of dragonflies, like orange ones, blue and big ones, blue and thin ones, and black ones, etc... There were various kinds of dragonflies, like orange ones, blue and big ones, blue and thin ones, and black ones, etc.

It was like a dragonfly kingdom.


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