Dec. 24, 2020
Introduction myself (V.2) / 自己紹介（改）
Hi. I'm AkiHiRo.
I'm improving my English.
I like to discuss grammar, etymologies, techniques, etc.
I'm interested in learning various nuances of languages, not only in English but also in Japanese.
If you know somewhere discussing these things, please let me know.
I'm looking forward to discovering new places and opportunities.
こんにちは。 AkiHiRoです。
今は英語を勉強・練習しています。 文法や語源、テクニックなどについて話し合うのが好きです。
英語だけでなく日本語についても、言語のニュアンスに関する様々な説明の仕方について関心があります。
これらのことについてどこかで話し合っていることを知っているなら、教えて欲しいです。
よろしくおねがいします(新しい場所やチャンスを発見できるのを楽しみにしています)。
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Introductioning myself (V.2) / 自己紹介（改）
Introducing myself (V.2) / 自己紹介（改）
The noun "introduction" would need to be followed by "of", and even then it wouldn't be as good as "introducing" here.
I'm AkiHiRhiro.
I'm Akihiro.
I'm improving my English.
I like to discuss grammar, etymologiesy, techniques [for learning languages?], etc.
I like to discuss grammar, etymology, techniques [for learning languages?], etc.
If you know somewhere discussingthat these things are discussed, please let me know.
If you know somewhere that these things are discussed, please let me know.
I'm looking forward to discovering new places and opportunities.
Feedback
Very good!
Introduction myself (V.2) / 自己紹介（改）
Hi. Hi.
Normally this would be with a comma instead of a period, as there is a pause between the two parts (“Hi” and “I’m ____”) but “Hi” isn’t a whole idea.
I'm Aki Hi Ro. I'm Aki Hi Ro.
If it’s one name then it would be “Akihiro”.
I'm improving my English.
I like to discuss grammar, etymologies,y, different language techniques, etc.
I like to discuss grammar, etymology, different language techniques, etc.
I'm interested in learning the various nuances of different languages, not only in English but also in Japanese. I'm interested in learning the various nuances of different languages, not only in English but also in Japanese.
If you know somewhere to discussing these things, please let me know.
If you know somewhere to discuss these things, please let me know.
I'm looking forward to discovering new places and opportunities.
Feedback
Great Job! Just a few corrections! If your looking for places to discuss different aspects of language and language learning, I would recommend r/languagelearning and r/linguistics.
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I'm improving my English. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I like to discuss grammar, etymologies, techniques, etc.
I like to discuss grammar, etymolog
I like to discuss grammar, etymolog |
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I'm interested in learning various nuances of languages, not only in English but also in Japanese. I'm interested in learning the various nuances of different languages, not only in English but also in Japanese. I'm interested in learning the various nuances of different languages, not only in English but also in Japanese. |
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Hi. Hi. Hi. Normally this would be with a comma instead of a period, as there is a pause between the two parts (“Hi” and “I’m ____”) but “Hi” isn’t a whole idea. |
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I'm AkiHiRo. I'm Aki Hi Ro. I'm Aki Hi Ro. If it’s one name then it would be “Akihiro”.
I'm Aki |
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Introduction myself (V.2) / 自己紹介（改） This sentence has been marked as perfect!
Introduc The noun "introduction" would need to be followed by "of", and even then it wouldn't be as good as "introducing" here. |
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If you know somewhere discussing these things, please let me know.
If you know somewhere to discuss
If you know somewhere |
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I'm looking forward to discovering new places and opportunities. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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