Dec. 3, 2020
Loving
I just realized that loving and caring intertwine in such a beautiful way. You care for someone or something because you love them, and in that caring you show that love.
My grandparents show their love by making sure that we have everything we need. My mum pays attention to what we like and tries to make us food that we love. My stepfather used to kiss me goodnight every day when I was little, and my dad bought me books and puzzles he though I would like. They care about me because they love me. And I don't have the words to express how loved I feel when I think about everything they've done for me. It's true when people say that actions speak louder than words.
I love people in my life, but I'm afraid they don't know how much because I don't show that I care. It's not that I don't want to, but because somehow it's hard for me to open up and reveal my feelings. I feel so much, but I show so little.
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Loving
I just realized that loving and caring intertwine in such a beautiful way.
You care for someone or something because you love them, and in that caring you show that love.
My grandparents show their love by making sure that we have everything we need.
My mum pays attention to what we like and tries to make us food that we love.
My stepfather used to kiss me goodnight every day when I was little, and my dad bought me books and puzzles he thought I would like. My stepfather used to kiss me goodnight every day when I was little, and my dad bought me books and puzzles he thought I would like.
They care about me because they love me.
And I don't have the words to express how loved I feel when I think about everything they've done for me.
It's true when people say that actions speak louder than words.
I love the people in my life, but I'm afraid they don't know how much because I don't show that I care. I love the people in my life, but I'm afraid they don't know how much because I don't show that I care.
It's not that I don't want to, but because somehow it's hard for me to open up and reveal my feelings.
I feel so much, but I show so little.
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Dec. 3, 2020
Thank you very much! I really appreciate your kind words.
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Loving This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I just realized that loving and caring intertwine in such a beautiful way. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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You care for someone or something because you love them, and in that caring you show that love. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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My grandparents show their love by making sure that we have everything we need. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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My mum pays attention to what we like and tries to make us food that we love. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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My stepfather used to kiss me goodnight every day when I was little, and my dad bought me books and puzzles he though I would like. My stepfather used to kiss me goodnight every day when I was little, and my dad bought me books and puzzles he thought I would like. My stepfather used to kiss me goodnight every day when I was little, and my dad bought me books and puzzles he thought I would like. |
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They care about me because they love me. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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And I don't have the words to express how loved I feel when I think about everything they've done for me. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It's true when people say that actions speak louder than words. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I love people in my life, but I'm afraid they don't know how much because I don't show that I care. I love the people in my life, but I'm afraid they don't know how much because I don't show that I care. I love the people in my life, but I'm afraid they don't know how much because I don't show that I care. |
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It's not that I don't want to, but because somehow it's hard for me to open up and reveal my feelings. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I feel so much, but I show so little. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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