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Is money necessary for happiness ?

For my opinion money is necessary for happiness, it is like a tool that we need for our necessities.
Most of the things that make us happy requires money like food, travelling, shopping, even hobbies so if you like reading you must have books, for drawing you need papers, for photography you need a camera, for gym and healthy food you need money.
So yes money creates happiness but having it doesn't make you happy.

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so if you like reading you must have books, for drawing you need papers, for photography you need a camera, for gym and healthy food you need money.

So yes money creates happiness but having it doesn't make you happy.

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Is money necessary for happiness ?


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Is money necessary for happiness ? Is money necessary for happiness?

For my opinion money is necessary for happiness, it is like a tool that we need for our necessities.


ForIn my opinion, money is necessary for happiness, i. It is like a tool that we needwhat provides for our necessities. In my opinion, money is necessary for happiness. It is what provides for our necessities.

"it is like a tool that we need for our necessities" sounds redundant and confusing, but based on my understanding of what you are trying to say, "It is what provides for our necessities" sounds better. Alternatively, you can also say "It provides for our necessities".

ForIn my opinion, money is necessary for happiness, i. It is like a tool that we need for our necessities. In my opinion, money is necessary for happiness. It is a tool that we need for necessities.

ForIn my opinion money is necessary for happiness, it is like a tool that we need for our necessities. In my opinion money is necessary for happiness, it is like a tool that we need for our necessities.

Most of the things that make us happy requires money like food, travelling, shopping, even hobbies


Most of the things that make us happy requires money like food, travelling, shopping, and even hobbies. Most of the things that make us happy requires money like food, travelling, shopping, and even hobbies.

Most of the things that make us happy requires money like, such as food, travelling, shopping, and even hobbies. Most of the things that make us happy require money, such as food, traveling, shopping, and even hobbies.

Most of the things that make us happy requires money like food, travelling, shopping, and even hobbies Most of the things that make us happy require money like food, travelling, shopping, and even hobbies

so if you like reading you must have books, for drawing you need papers, for photography you need a camera, for gym and healthy food you need money.


sSo if you like reading, you must have books, f. For drawing, you need papers, f. For photography, you need a camera, f. For gym and healthy food, you need money. So if you like reading, you must have books. For drawing, you need paper. For photography, you need a camera. For gym and healthy food, you need money.

Better to split this entire section into different sentences.

so iIf you like reading, you must have books, for drawing you need papers, for photography you need a camera, for health you need a gym and healthy food you need, all of theses things require money. If you like reading, you must have books, for drawing you need paper, for photography you need a camera, for health you need a gym and healthy food, all of theses things require money.

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So yes money creates happiness but having it doesn't make you happy.


So yes, money creates happiness, but having it doesn't make you happy. So yes, money creates happiness, but having it doesn't make you happy.

So yes, money can creates happiness, but having it doesn'twon't automatically make you happy. So yes, money can create happiness, but having it won't automatically make you happy.

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