Is money necessary for happiness ?

ForIn my opinion money is necessary for happiness, it is like a tool that we need for our necessities.

Most of the things that make us happy requires money like food, travelling, shopping, and even hobbies

ForIn my opinion, money is necessary for happiness, i. It is like a tool that we need for our necessities.

Most of the things that make us happy requires money like, such as food, travelling, shopping, and even hobbies.

so iIf you like reading, you must have books, for drawing you need papers, for photography you need a camera, for health you need a gym and healthy food you need, all of theses things require money.

So yes, money can creates happiness, but having it doesn'twon't automatically make you happy.

ForIn my opinion, money is necessary for happiness, i. It is like a tool that we needwhat provides for our necessities.

"it is like a tool that we need for our necessities" sounds redundant and confusing, but based on my understanding of what you are trying to say, "It is what provides for our necessities" sounds better.

Alternatively, you can also say "It provides for our necessities".

Most of the things that make us happy requires money like food, travelling, shopping, and even hobbies.

sSo if you like reading, you must have books, f. For drawing, you need papers, f. For photography, you need a camera, f. For gym and healthy food, you need money.

Better to split this entire section into different sentences.

So yes, money creates happiness, but having it doesn't make you happy.